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［2025 攀枝花中考］老子说：“自知者明。”每个人都要善于发现自己的闪光点。为了引导同学们正确认识自我，更好地发展自己的能力，增强自信心，学校英语俱乐部发起了以“学会发现自己闪光点”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下提示，以“My Shining Points”为题写一篇短文。
内容要点：1. 结合具体事例，选取任意两个不同的角度，谈谈你身上具备的闪光点；
（提示：角度包括但不限于能力、特长、性格、品质……）
2. 在结尾段说说“学会发现自己闪光点”给你带来的益处。
写作要求：1. 词数 100 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文应包含所有内容要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
My Shining Points
Everyone has their own shining points. It is important to find them out. As for me,
［2025 攀枝花中考］老子说：“自知者明。”每个人都要善于发现自己的闪光点。为了引导同学们正确认识自我，更好地发展自己的能力，增强自信心，学校英语俱乐部发起了以“学会发现自己闪光点”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下提示，以“My Shining Points”为题写一篇短文。
内容要点：1. 结合具体事例，选取任意两个不同的角度，谈谈你身上具备的闪光点；
（提示：角度包括但不限于能力、特长、性格、品质……）
2. 在结尾段说说“学会发现自己闪光点”给你带来的益处。
写作要求：1. 词数 100 左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 短文应包含所有内容要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
My Shining Points
Everyone has their own shining points. It is important to find them out. As for me,
答案
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My Shining Points
Everyone has their own shining points. It is important to find them out. As for me, my English is excellent, and I like communicating with my classmates in English. As a student, I always ask teachers for help when I have problems, so I am making progress all the time.
What's more, I am always ready to help others. I once worked as a volunteer and helped those in trouble, which was not only interesting but also meaningful.
All in all, it's amazing to find that I have shining points. I have become much more confident than before, and I believe I will have a shining future!
My Shining Points
Everyone has their own shining points. It is important to find them out. As for me, my English is excellent, and I like communicating with my classmates in English. As a student, I always ask teachers for help when I have problems, so I am making progress all the time.
What's more, I am always ready to help others. I once worked as a volunteer and helped those in trouble, which was not only interesting but also meaningful.
All in all, it's amazing to find that I have shining points. I have become much more confident than before, and I believe I will have a shining future!
解析
【分析】本题为英语主题写作题，要求围绕“学会发现自己闪光点”完成短文。解题思路：1. 承接给定开头，选取两个不同角度（如能力、品质）的闪光点，每个闪光点需搭配具体事例支撑；2. 结尾段明确写出发现自身闪光点带来的益处；3. 注意词数100左右，行文连贯，紧扣主题。
【解析】首先写第一个闪光点（能力类：英语能力），结合事例：“my English is excellent, and I like communicating with my classmates in English. As a student, I always ask teachers for help when I have problems, so I am making progress all the time.”；接着写第二个闪光点（品质类：乐于助人），结合事例：“I am always ready to help others. I once worked as a volunteer and helped those in trouble, which was not only interesting but also meaningful.”；最后结尾总结益处：“All in all, it's amazing to find that I have shining points. I have become much more confident than before, and I believe I will have a shining future!”，整体符合写作要求，结构完整，内容紧扣主题。
【答案】My Shining Points
Everyone has their own shining points. It is important to find them out. As for me, my English is excellent, and I like communicating with my classmates in English. As a student, I always ask teachers for help when I have problems, so I am making progress all the time.
What's more, I am always ready to help others. I once worked as a volunteer and helped those in trouble, which was not only interesting but also meaningful.
All in all, it's amazing to find that I have shining points. I have become much more confident than before, and I believe I will have a shining future!
【知识点】英语书面表达、主题写作、中考英语写作
【点评】本题为攀枝花中考英语书面表达题，围绕“发现自身闪光点”主题，要求结合具体事例体现两个不同角度的闪光点，结尾点明益处，既考查学生的英语语言运用能力，又引导学生树立正确的自我认知，符合中考命题要求，结构清晰，易于学生掌握。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先写第一个闪光点（能力类：英语能力），结合事例：“my English is excellent, and I like communicating with my classmates in English. As a student, I always ask teachers for help when I have problems, so I am making progress all the time.”；接着写第二个闪光点（品质类：乐于助人），结合事例：“I am always ready to help others. I once worked as a volunteer and helped those in trouble, which was not only interesting but also meaningful.”；最后结尾总结益处：“All in all, it's amazing to find that I have shining points. I have become much more confident than before, and I believe I will have a shining future!”，整体符合写作要求，结构完整，内容紧扣主题。
【答案】My Shining Points
Everyone has their own shining points. It is important to find them out. As for me, my English is excellent, and I like communicating with my classmates in English. As a student, I always ask teachers for help when I have problems, so I am making progress all the time.
What's more, I am always ready to help others. I once worked as a volunteer and helped those in trouble, which was not only interesting but also meaningful.
All in all, it's amazing to find that I have shining points. I have become much more confident than before, and I believe I will have a shining future!
【知识点】英语书面表达、主题写作、中考英语写作
【点评】本题为攀枝花中考英语书面表达题，围绕“发现自身闪光点”主题，要求结合具体事例体现两个不同角度的闪光点，结尾点明益处，既考查学生的英语语言运用能力，又引导学生树立正确的自我认知，符合中考命题要求，结构清晰，易于学生掌握。
【难度系数】0.6
