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[2025黑龙江哈尔滨期末]假如今天的英语作业是为一段介绍小熊猫的视频配音。请你根据下面的提示，以第一人称的口吻写一篇英语短文，为视频配音做准备。
外貌：酷似猫，身形大、胖颜色：红棕色(reddish brown)
性格：害羞、安静生活习性：白天睡觉，晚上觅食
饮食喜好：竹叶(bamboo leaves)数量：中国仅有约6,000到7,000只
节日：国际小熊猫日(International Red Panda Day)——每年九月的第三个星期六
写作要求：(1)短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
(2)词数70左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇：look for 寻找
Hello, everyone! I'm Red Panda.
Do you want to be my friend and play with me?
Value statement: Animals are our best friends.
外貌：酷似猫，身形大、胖颜色：红棕色(reddish brown)
性格：害羞、安静生活习性：白天睡觉，晚上觅食
饮食喜好：竹叶(bamboo leaves)数量：中国仅有约6,000到7,000只
节日：国际小熊猫日(International Red Panda Day)——每年九月的第三个星期六
写作要求：(1)短文应包含所有要点，可适当发挥；
(2)词数70左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇：look for 寻找
Hello, everyone! I'm Red Panda.
I look like a cat, but I'm kind of big and fat. I always wear a reddish brown jacket. Am I cool? I'm shy and quiet. I sleep in the day and look for food at night. Bamboo leaves are my favourite. There are only about 6,000 to 7,000 red pandas in China now. So please be kind to us. The third Saturday of every September is a big day for me—International Red Panda Day.
Do you want to be my friend and play with me?
Value statement: Animals are our best friends.
答案
【参考范文】
Hello, everyone! I'm Red Panda.
I look like a cat, but I'm kind of big and fat.
I always wear a reddish brown jacket. Am I cool?
I'm shy and quiet. I sleep in the day and look for
food at night. Bamboo leaves are my favourite.
There are only about 6,000 to 7,000 red pandas in
China now. So please be kind to us. The third
Saturday of every September is a big day for me—
International Red Panda Day.
Do you want to be my friend and play
with me?
Hello, everyone! I'm Red Panda.
I look like a cat, but I'm kind of big and fat.
I always wear a reddish brown jacket. Am I cool?
I'm shy and quiet. I sleep in the day and look for
food at night. Bamboo leaves are my favourite.
There are only about 6,000 to 7,000 red pandas in
China now. So please be kind to us. The third
Saturday of every September is a big day for me—
International Red Panda Day.
Do you want to be my friend and play
with me?
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先要明确核心要求：以第一人称小熊猫的口吻写适配配音的自我介绍短文，要覆盖全部给定要点，词数控制在70左右，风格要轻松口语化。第一步先把所有提示的信息点逐一列出来，避免遗漏：外貌特征、性格特点、生活作息、饮食偏好、种群现存数量、相关节日共6项内容；第二步按照从外到内、从自身特征到种群现状再到相关节日的逻辑顺承内容，用简单自然的表达衔接，不需要复杂长难句，贴合配音场景的同时呼应动物是人类好友的价值导向即可。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头先介绍外貌：用"I look like a cat, but I'm kind of big and fat. I always wear a reddish brown jacket. Am I cool?" 生动讲清外形和颜色特征，符合第一人称的可爱语气。
2. 接下来介绍性格和生活习性："I'm shy and quiet. I sleep in the day and look for food at night. Bamboo leaves are my favourite." 完整覆盖性格、作息、饮食三个要点，用到题目给出的参考词汇look for，符合题干要求。
3. 最后介绍种群现状和相关节日："There are only about 6,000 to 7,000 red pandas in China now. So please be kind to us. The third Saturday of every September is a big day for me—International Red Panda Day." 补充善待动物的正向引导，自然引出节日要点，所有信息点全部覆盖，衔接流畅。
4. 最终核查：所有要点无遗漏，词数符合要求，无语法错误，风格适配配音场景，和给定结尾自然衔接。
【答案】
I look like a cat, but I'm kind of big and fat.
I always wear a reddish brown jacket. Am I cool?
I'm shy and quiet. I sleep in the day and look for
food at night. Bamboo leaves are my favourite.
There are only about 6,000 to 7,000 red pandas in
China now. So please be kind to us. The third
Saturday of every September is a big day for me—
International Red Panda Day.
【知识点】
自我介绍类写作，there be句型，信息点整合
【点评】
本题属于提示类基础写作题，所有核心信息和参考词汇都已给出，学生只需要按照合理逻辑把信息点串联成通顺的第一人称短文即可，同时渗透了保护珍稀野生动物的正向价值观，难度较低，适合初中低年级学生练习信息整合类的写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道题首先要明确核心要求：以第一人称小熊猫的口吻写适配配音的自我介绍短文，要覆盖全部给定要点，词数控制在70左右，风格要轻松口语化。第一步先把所有提示的信息点逐一列出来，避免遗漏：外貌特征、性格特点、生活作息、饮食偏好、种群现存数量、相关节日共6项内容；第二步按照从外到内、从自身特征到种群现状再到相关节日的逻辑顺承内容，用简单自然的表达衔接，不需要复杂长难句，贴合配音场景的同时呼应动物是人类好友的价值导向即可。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头先介绍外貌：用"I look like a cat, but I'm kind of big and fat. I always wear a reddish brown jacket. Am I cool?" 生动讲清外形和颜色特征，符合第一人称的可爱语气。
2. 接下来介绍性格和生活习性："I'm shy and quiet. I sleep in the day and look for food at night. Bamboo leaves are my favourite." 完整覆盖性格、作息、饮食三个要点，用到题目给出的参考词汇look for，符合题干要求。
3. 最后介绍种群现状和相关节日："There are only about 6,000 to 7,000 red pandas in China now. So please be kind to us. The third Saturday of every September is a big day for me—International Red Panda Day." 补充善待动物的正向引导，自然引出节日要点，所有信息点全部覆盖，衔接流畅。
4. 最终核查：所有要点无遗漏，词数符合要求，无语法错误，风格适配配音场景，和给定结尾自然衔接。
【答案】
I look like a cat, but I'm kind of big and fat.
I always wear a reddish brown jacket. Am I cool?
I'm shy and quiet. I sleep in the day and look for
food at night. Bamboo leaves are my favourite.
There are only about 6,000 to 7,000 red pandas in
China now. So please be kind to us. The third
Saturday of every September is a big day for me—
International Red Panda Day.
【知识点】
自我介绍类写作，there be句型，信息点整合
【点评】
本题属于提示类基础写作题，所有核心信息和参考词汇都已给出，学生只需要按照合理逻辑把信息点串联成通顺的第一人称短文即可，同时渗透了保护珍稀野生动物的正向价值观，难度较低，适合初中低年级学生练习信息整合类的写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.7
