四、书籍是人生不可或缺的营养品,生活中没有书籍,就如同没有阳光。请你根据下面的要点提示和写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你最喜欢的一本书。
要点提示:
1. 介绍该书的书名和主要人物;
2. 介绍该书的故事梗概或最触动你的故事情节;
3. 你的感想或这本书对你的影响。
写作要求:
1. 短文应包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息;
3. 词数 90 左右。
要点提示:
1. 介绍该书的书名和主要人物;
2. 介绍该书的故事梗概或最触动你的故事情节;
3. 你的感想或这本书对你的影响。
写作要求:
1. 短文应包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息;
3. 词数 90 左右。
One possible version:
My favourite book is Around the World in
Eighty Days by Jules Verne. It tells the story of Mr Phileas Fogg and his servant Passepartout.
My favourite book is Around the World in
Eighty Days by Jules Verne. It tells the story of Mr Phileas Fogg and his servant Passepartout.
To win a bet, Mr Fogg decides to travel around the world in just 80 days. They face many challenges, such as missing trains and unexpected dangers, but they never give up. The most exciting part is when Fogg saves a woman called Aouda during the journey.
This book taught me the importance of courage, patience, and keeping a promise. It also made me curious about different cultures. Whenever I meet difficulties, Fogg's calmness and determination encourage me not to lose hope.
答案
One possible version:
My favourite book is Around the World in
Eighty Days by Jules Verne. It tells the story of Mr Phileas Fogg and his servant Passepartout.
To win a bet, Mr Fogg decides to travel around the world in just 80 days. They face many challenges, such as missing trains and unexpected dangers, but they never give up. The most exciting part is when Fogg saves a woman called Aouda during the journey.
This book taught me the importance of courage, patience, and keeping a promise. It also made me curious about different cultures. Whenever I meet difficulties, Fogg's calmness and determination encourage me not to lose hope.
My favourite book is Around the World in
Eighty Days by Jules Verne. It tells the story of Mr Phileas Fogg and his servant Passepartout.
To win a bet, Mr Fogg decides to travel around the world in just 80 days. They face many challenges, such as missing trains and unexpected dangers, but they never give up. The most exciting part is when Fogg saves a woman called Aouda during the journey.
This book taught me the importance of courage, patience, and keeping a promise. It also made me curious about different cultures. Whenever I meet difficulties, Fogg's calmness and determination encourage me not to lose hope.
解析
【解析】
1. 开篇明确点明最喜欢的书籍名称与作者,引出核心人物;
2. 围绕书籍核心情节展开叙述,清晰介绍主角的冒险经历及触动自身的关键情节,内容紧扣题目要点;
3. 结尾阐述书籍带来的启发与对自身的影响,升华主题,整体内容完整,符合词数要求,语言表达流畅自然。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite book is *Around the World in Eighty Days* by Jules Verne. It tells the story of Mr Phileas Fogg and his servant Passepartout.
To win a bet, Mr Fogg decides to travel around the world in just 80 days. They face many challenges, such as missing trains and unexpected dangers, but they never give up. The most exciting part is when Fogg saves a woman called Aouda during the journey.
This book taught me the importance of courage, patience, and keeping a promise. It also made me curious about different cultures. Whenever I meet difficulties, Fogg's calmness and determination encourage me not to lose hope.
【知识点】
英语话题作文写作、叙事议论结合写作、英语观点表达
【点评】
本文结构清晰,完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点,叙事简洁有条理,感想部分真挚贴合主题,语言表达地道,恰当运用了“such as”“whenever”等句式与短语,符合词数要求,是一篇优秀的话题作文范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
1. 开篇明确点明最喜欢的书籍名称与作者,引出核心人物;
2. 围绕书籍核心情节展开叙述,清晰介绍主角的冒险经历及触动自身的关键情节,内容紧扣题目要点;
3. 结尾阐述书籍带来的启发与对自身的影响,升华主题,整体内容完整,符合词数要求,语言表达流畅自然。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite book is *Around the World in Eighty Days* by Jules Verne. It tells the story of Mr Phileas Fogg and his servant Passepartout.
To win a bet, Mr Fogg decides to travel around the world in just 80 days. They face many challenges, such as missing trains and unexpected dangers, but they never give up. The most exciting part is when Fogg saves a woman called Aouda during the journey.
This book taught me the importance of courage, patience, and keeping a promise. It also made me curious about different cultures. Whenever I meet difficulties, Fogg's calmness and determination encourage me not to lose hope.
【知识点】
英语话题作文写作、叙事议论结合写作、英语观点表达
【点评】
本文结构清晰,完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点,叙事简洁有条理,感想部分真挚贴合主题,语言表达地道,恰当运用了“such as”“whenever”等句式与短语,符合词数要求,是一篇优秀的话题作文范例。
【难度系数】
0.6
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