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Ⅴ. 书面表达
近年来，书法、茶艺、剪纸等传统文化走进校园并成为热潮。假设你校英语报社正以“My Favorite Traditional Chinese Culture”为主题征文，请你根据以下提示写一篇短文。
写作要点：
1. 你最喜欢的一种中国传统文化形式；
2. 你体验该传统文化的经历；
3. 你的收获及感受。
写作要求：
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数 80—120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Nowadays，with the popularity of Chinese style，more people show great interest in traditional Chinese culture.
Let's treasure，protect and spread the valuable culture together.
近年来，书法、茶艺、剪纸等传统文化走进校园并成为热潮。假设你校英语报社正以“My Favorite Traditional Chinese Culture”为主题征文，请你根据以下提示写一篇短文。
写作要点：
1. 你最喜欢的一种中国传统文化形式；
2. 你体验该传统文化的经历；
3. 你的收获及感受。
写作要求：
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数 80—120，短文开头及结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Nowadays，with the popularity of Chinese style，more people show great interest in traditional Chinese culture.
My favorite traditional Chinese art form is guzheng, one of the most ancient Chinese musical instruments.
I started learning guzheng when I was eight. At first, it was challenging for me. My fingers would ache after playing for a long time. Luckily, with the help of my teacher, I gradually improved. Now, I can play a lot of pieces of music for my family and classmates.
Let's treasure，protect and spread the valuable culture together.
答案
Ⅴ. One possible version:
Nowadays, with the popularity of Chinese style, more people show great interest in traditional Chinese culture. My favorite traditional Chinese art form is guzheng, one of the most ancient Chinese musical instruments.
I started learning guzheng when I was eight. At first, it was challenging for me. My fingers would ache after playing for a long time. Luckily, with the help of my teacher, I gradually improved. Now, I can play a lot of pieces of music for my family and classmates.
Learning guzheng has a great influence on me and I become more patient and careful. Also, I feel honored to be able to spread this traditional Chinese culture.
Let's treasure, protect and spread the valuable culture together.
Nowadays, with the popularity of Chinese style, more people show great interest in traditional Chinese culture. My favorite traditional Chinese art form is guzheng, one of the most ancient Chinese musical instruments.
I started learning guzheng when I was eight. At first, it was challenging for me. My fingers would ache after playing for a long time. Luckily, with the help of my teacher, I gradually improved. Now, I can play a lot of pieces of music for my family and classmates.
Learning guzheng has a great influence on me and I become more patient and careful. Also, I feel honored to be able to spread this traditional Chinese culture.
Let's treasure, protect and spread the valuable culture together.
解析
【解析】
本文紧扣“My Favorite Traditional Chinese Culture”主题，分三步展开：首先点明最喜欢的中国传统文化形式是古筝；接着讲述从八岁开始学习古筝的经历，提及初学的困难及在老师帮助下逐渐进步的过程；最后阐述学习古筝带来的性格成长及传播传统文化的荣誉感。内容涵盖所有写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，符合词数要求，且语言表达自然流畅。
【答案】
One possible version:
Nowadays, with the popularity of Chinese style, more people show great interest in traditional Chinese culture. My favorite traditional Chinese art form is guzheng, one of the most ancient Chinese musical instruments.
I started learning guzheng when I was eight. At first, it was challenging for me. My fingers would ache after playing for a long time. Luckily, with the help of my teacher, I gradually improved. Now, I can play a lot of pieces of music for my family and classmates.
Learning guzheng has a great influence on me and I become more patient and careful. Also, I feel honored to be able to spread this traditional Chinese culture.
Let's treasure, protect and spread the valuable culture together.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、传统文化主题表达
【点评】
该范文严格遵循写作要求，要点齐全，逻辑层次分明，将个人经历与文化感悟自然结合，语言地道流畅，既展现了对传统文化的热爱，又传递出传承文化的意识，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本文紧扣“My Favorite Traditional Chinese Culture”主题，分三步展开：首先点明最喜欢的中国传统文化形式是古筝；接着讲述从八岁开始学习古筝的经历，提及初学的困难及在老师帮助下逐渐进步的过程；最后阐述学习古筝带来的性格成长及传播传统文化的荣誉感。内容涵盖所有写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，符合词数要求，且语言表达自然流畅。
【答案】
One possible version:
Nowadays, with the popularity of Chinese style, more people show great interest in traditional Chinese culture. My favorite traditional Chinese art form is guzheng, one of the most ancient Chinese musical instruments.
I started learning guzheng when I was eight. At first, it was challenging for me. My fingers would ache after playing for a long time. Luckily, with the help of my teacher, I gradually improved. Now, I can play a lot of pieces of music for my family and classmates.
Learning guzheng has a great influence on me and I become more patient and careful. Also, I feel honored to be able to spread this traditional Chinese culture.
Let's treasure, protect and spread the valuable culture together.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、传统文化主题表达
【点评】
该范文严格遵循写作要求，要点齐全，逻辑层次分明，将个人经历与文化感悟自然结合，语言地道流畅，既展现了对传统文化的热爱，又传递出传承文化的意识，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
