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近年来流行DIY（Do-it-yourself）。DIY源于为节省费用人们在闲暇时自行整修房屋的行为，渐渐地DIY的概念也被扩及所有可以自己动手做的事物上。请你以“My Opinion on DIY”为题写一篇英语短文。
要点如下：
1. 讲述一个自己动手做事的例子； 2. 你对自己动手做事的看法。
要求：词数80—100。
My Opinion on DIY
近年来流行DIY（Do-it-yourself）。DIY源于为节省费用人们在闲暇时自行整修房屋的行为，渐渐地DIY的概念也被扩及所有可以自己动手做的事物上。请你以“My Opinion on DIY”为题写一篇英语短文。
要点如下：
1. 讲述一个自己动手做事的例子； 2. 你对自己动手做事的看法。
要求：词数80—100。
My Opinion on DIY
DIY is becoming popular. Last month, I repaired my broken bicycle myself. When I found its chain loose, I watched online videos, used tools, and fixed it successfully. I felt very proud!
I think DIY is great. Firstly, it saves money because we don't need to pay others.
Secondly, it helps us learn practical skills.
Finally, DIY brings joy when we create things by hand.
Not only is it useful, but it also makes life more interesting.
Let's enjoy DIY!
答案
1. DIY is becoming popular. Last month, I repaired my broken bicycle myself. When I found its chain loose, I watched online videos, used tools, and fixed it successfully. I felt very proud!
2. I think DIY is great. Firstly, it saves money because we don't need to pay others. Secondly, it helps us learn practical skills. Finally, DIY brings joy when we create things by hand. Not only is it useful, but it also makes life more interesting. Let's enjoy DIY!
完整参考范文：
My Opinion on DIY
DIY is becoming popular. Last month, I repaired my broken bicycle myself. When I found its chain loose, I watched online videos, used tools, and fixed it successfully. I felt very proud!
I think DIY is great. Firstly, it saves money because we don't need to pay others. Secondly, it helps us learn practical skills. Finally, DIY brings joy when we create things by hand. Not only is it useful, but it also makes life more interesting.
Let's enjoy DIY!
2. I think DIY is great. Firstly, it saves money because we don't need to pay others. Secondly, it helps us learn practical skills. Finally, DIY brings joy when we create things by hand. Not only is it useful, but it also makes life more interesting. Let's enjoy DIY!
完整参考范文：
My Opinion on DIY
DIY is becoming popular. Last month, I repaired my broken bicycle myself. When I found its chain loose, I watched online videos, used tools, and fixed it successfully. I felt very proud!
I think DIY is great. Firstly, it saves money because we don't need to pay others. Secondly, it helps us learn practical skills. Finally, DIY brings joy when we create things by hand. Not only is it useful, but it also makes life more interesting.
Let's enjoy DIY!
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求：以“My Opinion on DIY”为题写英语短文，需包含两个要点：1. 讲述自己动手做事的例子；2. 表达对DIY的看法，词数80—100。解题思路：① 开头点明DIY的流行现状，引出主题；② 选取贴近生活的例子（如修自行车），具体描述自己动手的过程，满足第一个要点；③ 从省钱、学技能、带来乐趣三个角度阐述对DIY的看法，满足第二个要点；④ 结尾简单呼吁，控制词数在要求范围内，确保语言通顺、要点齐全。
【解析】
按照以下步骤写作：1. 开头：说明DIY正变得流行，引出下文；2. 例子：举例自己上个月修理坏了的自行车，描述过程（看视频、用工具、成功修好），体现自己动手的经历；3. 看法：用“firstly, secondly, finally”分点阐述DIY的好处（省钱、学实用技能、带来创造的乐趣），条理清晰；4. 结尾：简单呼吁大家享受DIY，确保词数符合要求，语言简洁流畅。
【答案】
My Opinion on DIY
DIY is becoming popular. Last month, I repaired my broken bicycle myself. When I found its chain loose, I watched online videos, used tools, and fixed it successfully. I felt very proud!
I think DIY is great. Firstly, it saves money because we don't need to pay others. Secondly, it helps us learn practical skills. Finally, DIY brings joy when we create things by hand. Not only is it useful, but it also makes life more interesting.
Let's enjoy DIY!
【知识点】
英语短文写作、话题表达、观点阐述
【点评】
这篇范文完全覆盖题目要求的两个要点，例子具体真实，看法条理清晰，语言简洁流畅，词数符合要求，结构完整，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先明确题目要求：以“My Opinion on DIY”为题写英语短文，需包含两个要点：1. 讲述自己动手做事的例子；2. 表达对DIY的看法，词数80—100。解题思路：① 开头点明DIY的流行现状，引出主题；② 选取贴近生活的例子（如修自行车），具体描述自己动手的过程，满足第一个要点；③ 从省钱、学技能、带来乐趣三个角度阐述对DIY的看法，满足第二个要点；④ 结尾简单呼吁，控制词数在要求范围内，确保语言通顺、要点齐全。
【解析】
按照以下步骤写作：1. 开头：说明DIY正变得流行，引出下文；2. 例子：举例自己上个月修理坏了的自行车，描述过程（看视频、用工具、成功修好），体现自己动手的经历；3. 看法：用“firstly, secondly, finally”分点阐述DIY的好处（省钱、学实用技能、带来创造的乐趣），条理清晰；4. 结尾：简单呼吁大家享受DIY，确保词数符合要求，语言简洁流畅。
【答案】
My Opinion on DIY
DIY is becoming popular. Last month, I repaired my broken bicycle myself. When I found its chain loose, I watched online videos, used tools, and fixed it successfully. I felt very proud!
I think DIY is great. Firstly, it saves money because we don't need to pay others. Secondly, it helps us learn practical skills. Finally, DIY brings joy when we create things by hand. Not only is it useful, but it also makes life more interesting.
Let's enjoy DIY!
【知识点】
英语短文写作、话题表达、观点阐述
【点评】
这篇范文完全覆盖题目要求的两个要点，例子具体真实，看法条理清晰，语言简洁流畅，词数符合要求，结构完整，是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.7
