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写作创新·看图写作 假设你是李辉，你校英语报面向全校学生进行主题为“Protecting the environment”的征文活动。请你根据以下图片提示，写一篇文章进行投稿，呼吁大家保护环境。
注意: (1) 可在图片提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(3) 词句连贯，词数80左右。作文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
【巧列提纲】(以下图2部分仅供参考，希望同学们可以多开动脑筋、发散思维)
【实战演练】
Many years ago，
【写作评价】(评分原则与方法可参考本书最后一页)
注意: (1) 可在图片提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。
(3) 词句连贯，词数80左右。作文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
【巧列提纲】(以下图2部分仅供参考，希望同学们可以多开动脑筋、发散思维)
【实战演练】
Many years ago，
there were many trees on the mountains. In order to build houses and grow crops, people cut down as many trees as they could. Soon, there were no trees left in the mountains. The green hills changed into wasteland. As a result, sandstorms hit people from time to time. A lot of rich land changed into desert, leaving only sand. People suffered a lot from this. Now they have realised the importance of trees. In order to stop the wind from blowing the soil away, they have planted a lot of trees. Let's plant trees and protect the environment.
【写作评价】(评分原则与方法可参考本书最后一页)
答案
One possible version:
Many years ago, there were many trees on the mountains. In order to build houses and grow crops, people cut down as many trees as they could. Soon, there were no trees left in the mountains. The green hills changed into wasteland. As a result, sandstorms hit people from time to time. A lot of rich land changed into desert, leaving only sand. People suffered a lot from this. Now they have realised the importance of trees. In order to stop the wind from blowing the soil away, they have planted a lot of trees. Let's plant trees and protect the environment.
Many years ago, there were many trees on the mountains. In order to build houses and grow crops, people cut down as many trees as they could. Soon, there were no trees left in the mountains. The green hills changed into wasteland. As a result, sandstorms hit people from time to time. A lot of rich land changed into desert, leaving only sand. People suffered a lot from this. Now they have realised the importance of trees. In order to stop the wind from blowing the soil away, they have planted a lot of trees. Let's plant trees and protect the environment.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语看图写作征文，主题为“Protecting the environment”，开头已给出“Many years ago”。写作思路需遵循“过去环境状况→人类破坏行为及原因→破坏带来的后果→现在的改变与措施→发出环保呼吁”的逻辑，确保结构清晰、内容连贯，词数控制在80左右，适当拓展细节，不出现真实信息，符合校报投稿要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，描述过去的良好环境：Many years ago, there were many trees on the mountains.
2. 说明人类破坏环境的行为及原因：In order to build houses and grow crops, people cut down as many trees as they could.
3. 阐述破坏带来的严重后果：Soon, there were no trees left in the mountains. The green hills changed into wasteland. As a result, sandstorms hit people from time to time. A lot of rich land changed into desert, leaving only sand. People suffered a lot from this.
4. 写现在人们的反思与行动：Now they have realised the importance of trees. In order to stop the wind from blowing the soil away, they have planted a lot of trees.
5. 发出环保呼吁：Let's plant trees and protect the environment.
【答案】
One possible version: Many years ago, there were many trees on the mountains. In order to build houses and grow crops, people cut down as many trees as they could. Soon, there were no trees left in the mountains. The green hills changed into wasteland. As a result, sandstorms hit people from time to time. A lot of rich land changed into desert, leaving only sand. People suffered a lot from this. Now they have realised the importance of trees. In order to stop the wind from blowing the soil away, they have planted a lot of trees. Let's plant trees and protect the environment.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、环境保护主题表达、看图写作
【点评】
本文紧扣“保护环境”主题，按照“过去环境-破坏行为-后果-现状改变-呼吁”的逻辑展开，结构严谨，内容充实，语言流畅，符合校报征文要求，有效传递了环保理念，词数达标。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语看图写作征文，主题为“Protecting the environment”，开头已给出“Many years ago”。写作思路需遵循“过去环境状况→人类破坏行为及原因→破坏带来的后果→现在的改变与措施→发出环保呼吁”的逻辑，确保结构清晰、内容连贯，词数控制在80左右，适当拓展细节，不出现真实信息，符合校报投稿要求。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，描述过去的良好环境：Many years ago, there were many trees on the mountains.
2. 说明人类破坏环境的行为及原因：In order to build houses and grow crops, people cut down as many trees as they could.
3. 阐述破坏带来的严重后果：Soon, there were no trees left in the mountains. The green hills changed into wasteland. As a result, sandstorms hit people from time to time. A lot of rich land changed into desert, leaving only sand. People suffered a lot from this.
4. 写现在人们的反思与行动：Now they have realised the importance of trees. In order to stop the wind from blowing the soil away, they have planted a lot of trees.
5. 发出环保呼吁：Let's plant trees and protect the environment.
【答案】
One possible version: Many years ago, there were many trees on the mountains. In order to build houses and grow crops, people cut down as many trees as they could. Soon, there were no trees left in the mountains. The green hills changed into wasteland. As a result, sandstorms hit people from time to time. A lot of rich land changed into desert, leaving only sand. People suffered a lot from this. Now they have realised the importance of trees. In order to stop the wind from blowing the soil away, they have planted a lot of trees. Let's plant trees and protect the environment.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、环境保护主题表达、看图写作
【点评】
本文紧扣“保护环境”主题，按照“过去环境-破坏行为-后果-现状改变-呼吁”的逻辑展开，结构严谨，内容充实，语言流畅，符合校报征文要求，有效传递了环保理念，词数达标。
【难度系数】
0.5
