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三、最近,学校附近的学习用品店推出了一款“星空盲盒笔”,每支售价16元,很多同学跟风抢购。为了引导同学们理性消费,学校公众号发起了一个“拯救零花钱大作战”活动。请根据以下提示写一篇英语短文向学校公众号投稿,分享你的“省钱小妙招”,呼吁同学们理性消费。
注意事项:1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当拓展;2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;3. 词数60左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
These days, many students spend a lot of money on “Blind Box Pens”. It’s fun to try new things but it is also important to spend money wisely. I have some tips to share with you.
注意事项:1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当拓展;2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;3. 词数60左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
These days, many students spend a lot of money on “Blind Box Pens”. It’s fun to try new things but it is also important to spend money wisely. I have some tips to share with you.
答案
参考范文：
These days, many students spend a lot of money on "Blind Box Pens". It's fun to try new things but it is also important to spend money wisely. I have some tips to share with you.
At the beginning of every month, I always make a shopping list to save time and carefully plan how to spend my pocket money. At the store, I always look for things on sale. This way, I can find some cheap and good things. I also check the prices of the same things at different stores.
It's important for us to use money well. Let's be smart shoppers.
These days, many students spend a lot of money on "Blind Box Pens". It's fun to try new things but it is also important to spend money wisely. I have some tips to share with you.
At the beginning of every month, I always make a shopping list to save time and carefully plan how to spend my pocket money. At the store, I always look for things on sale. This way, I can find some cheap and good things. I also check the prices of the same things at different stores.
It's important for us to use money well. Let's be smart shoppers.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作主题是分享省钱小妙招，需结合题目给出的表格提示（月初规划零花钱、列购物清单；在商店找促销商品、核对价格），衔接已给开头，补充连贯内容，最后加入理性消费的呼吁，确保表达通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】
根据提示，先写月初的做法：At the beginning of every month, I carefully plan how to spend my pocket money and make a shopping list. 再写商店的做法：At the store, I look for things on sale and check the prices of the same items at different stores. 最后补充呼吁：It's necessary for us to spend money wisely. Let's be smart shoppers. 整合后形成完整短文。
【答案】
参考范文：
These days, many students spend a lot of money on "Blind Box Pens". It's fun to try new things but it is also important to spend money wisely. I have some tips to share with you.
At the beginning of every month, I always make a shopping list to save time and carefully plan how to spend my pocket money. At the store, I always look for things on sale. This way, I can find some cheap and good things. I also check the prices of the same things at different stores.
It's important for us to use money well. Let's be smart shoppers.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结合表格提示信息，结构清晰，内容连贯，准确传达省钱妙招，最后呼吁理性消费，符合题目要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确写作主题是分享省钱小妙招，需结合题目给出的表格提示（月初规划零花钱、列购物清单；在商店找促销商品、核对价格），衔接已给开头，补充连贯内容，最后加入理性消费的呼吁，确保表达通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】
根据提示，先写月初的做法：At the beginning of every month, I carefully plan how to spend my pocket money and make a shopping list. 再写商店的做法：At the store, I look for things on sale and check the prices of the same items at different stores. 最后补充呼吁：It's necessary for us to spend money wisely. Let's be smart shoppers. 整合后形成完整短文。
【答案】
参考范文：
These days, many students spend a lot of money on "Blind Box Pens". It's fun to try new things but it is also important to spend money wisely. I have some tips to share with you.
At the beginning of every month, I always make a shopping list to save time and carefully plan how to spend my pocket money. At the store, I always look for things on sale. This way, I can find some cheap and good things. I also check the prices of the same things at different stores.
It's important for us to use money well. Let's be smart shoppers.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结合表格提示信息，结构清晰，内容连贯，准确传达省钱妙招，最后呼吁理性消费，符合题目要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
