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七、书面表达(共1大题,满分20分)
在过去的节假日里,你一定参加了很多郊游活动。请你根据以下
1. Where did you go and how did you get there?
2. What did you do during your stay there?
3. How did you like the trip?
4. Something more about the trip.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数80左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Last Sunday, I went on a special trip to
What an unforgettable experience!
在过去的节假日里,你一定参加了很多郊游活动。请你根据以下
内
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提
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,用英语写一篇短文,分享自己的一次郊游经历。内
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提
示
:1. Where did you go and how did you get there?
2. What did you do during your stay there?
3. How did you like the trip?
4. Something more about the trip.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数80左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Last Sunday, I went on a special trip to
Wuhan Botanical(植物) Garden
It was a warm and sunny day. It took us forty minutes to get there by bus.
We walked around the garden, enjoying beautiful flowers and green plants.
Our teacher told us many interesting facts about different plants.
We also took many photos and played games on the grass.
At noon, we shared snacks together.
It was a great day—we not only got close to nature but also had great fun with our classmates.
The special trip made me love our city more.
What an unforgettable experience!
答案
[参考范文]
Last Sunday, I went on a special trip to Wuhan Botanical(植物) Garden. It was a warm and sunny day. It took us forty minutes to get there by bus. We walked around the garden, enjoying beautiful flowers and green plants. Our teacher told us many interesting facts about different plants. We also took many photos and played games on the grass. At noon, we shared snacks together. It was a great day—we not only got close to nature but also had great fun with our classmates. The special trip made me love our city more.
What an unforgettable experience!
Last Sunday, I went on a special trip to Wuhan Botanical(植物) Garden. It was a warm and sunny day. It took us forty minutes to get there by bus. We walked around the garden, enjoying beautiful flowers and green plants. Our teacher told us many interesting facts about different plants. We also took many photos and played games on the grass. At noon, we shared snacks together. It was a great day—we not only got close to nature but also had great fun with our classmates. The special trip made me love our city more.
What an unforgettable experience!
解析
【分析】
首先，我们要明确这是一篇分享郊游经历的记叙文，需紧扣题目给出的4个提示要点展开：
1. 确定郊游地点和出行方式：选择具体的地点，搭配合适的交通方式表达，同时可补充天气情况丰富场景；
2. 详细描述郊游中的活动：从观赏景色、学习知识、互动游戏、饮食分享等多角度入手，让内容更充实；
3. 表达对旅行的感受：结合活动写出实际收获，比如亲近自然、和同学相处的快乐；
4. 补充额外内容：添加旅行带来的后续感悟，让文章更有温度。
写作时要统一使用一般过去时，控制词数在80左右，自然衔接给定的开头和结尾，同时注意不透露真实信息。
【解析】
1. 补全开头：确定具体地点Wuhan Botanical Garden，用"It was a warm and sunny day."交代天气，再用"It took us forty minutes to get there by bus."说明交通方式和耗时；
2. 铺陈活动：依次描写观赏园景、听老师讲解植物知识、拍照玩游戏、分享零食等具体活动，让郊游过程更生动；
3. 抒发感受：用"It was a great day—we not only got close to nature but also had great fun with our classmates."总结旅行收获，再补充"The special trip made me love our city more."深化感悟；
4. 衔接结尾：自然过渡到题目给定的结尾句"What an unforgettable experience!"。
【答案】
Last Sunday, I went on a special trip to Wuhan Botanical(植物) Garden. It was a warm and sunny day. It took us forty minutes to get there by bus. We walked around the garden, enjoying beautiful flowers and green plants. Our teacher told us many interesting facts about different plants. We also took many photos and played games on the grass. At noon, we shared snacks together. It was a great day—we not only got close to nature but also had great fun with our classmates. The special trip made me love our city more.
What an unforgettable experience!
【知识点】
1. 一般过去时运用
2. 记叙文写作
3. 郊游场景表达
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目所有提示要点，内容充实有条理，从出行、活动到感受层层递进；时态运用准确，语言流畅自然，细节丰富，很好地突出了旅行的"难忘"，完全符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的郊游经历短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先，我们要明确这是一篇分享郊游经历的记叙文，需紧扣题目给出的4个提示要点展开：
1. 确定郊游地点和出行方式：选择具体的地点，搭配合适的交通方式表达，同时可补充天气情况丰富场景；
2. 详细描述郊游中的活动：从观赏景色、学习知识、互动游戏、饮食分享等多角度入手，让内容更充实；
3. 表达对旅行的感受：结合活动写出实际收获，比如亲近自然、和同学相处的快乐；
4. 补充额外内容：添加旅行带来的后续感悟，让文章更有温度。
写作时要统一使用一般过去时，控制词数在80左右，自然衔接给定的开头和结尾，同时注意不透露真实信息。
【解析】
1. 补全开头：确定具体地点Wuhan Botanical Garden，用"It was a warm and sunny day."交代天气，再用"It took us forty minutes to get there by bus."说明交通方式和耗时；
2. 铺陈活动：依次描写观赏园景、听老师讲解植物知识、拍照玩游戏、分享零食等具体活动，让郊游过程更生动；
3. 抒发感受：用"It was a great day—we not only got close to nature but also had great fun with our classmates."总结旅行收获，再补充"The special trip made me love our city more."深化感悟；
4. 衔接结尾：自然过渡到题目给定的结尾句"What an unforgettable experience!"。
【答案】
Last Sunday, I went on a special trip to Wuhan Botanical(植物) Garden. It was a warm and sunny day. It took us forty minutes to get there by bus. We walked around the garden, enjoying beautiful flowers and green plants. Our teacher told us many interesting facts about different plants. We also took many photos and played games on the grass. At noon, we shared snacks together. It was a great day—we not only got close to nature but also had great fun with our classmates. The special trip made me love our city more.
What an unforgettable experience!
【知识点】
1. 一般过去时运用
2. 记叙文写作
3. 郊游场景表达
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目所有提示要点，内容充实有条理，从出行、活动到感受层层递进；时态运用准确，语言流畅自然，细节丰富，很好地突出了旅行的"难忘"，完全符合词数要求，是一篇优秀的郊游经历短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
