七、书面表达(满分 25 分)
根据以下要点，写一篇题为“My dream home”的短文，词数 90 左右。

My dream home

One possible version:
My dream home
My dream home is very large. It's near the sea. There's a big balcony on the second floor. I can look out at the sea and the beach there. In my dream home, I have my own bedroom and study. I can read or chat with my friends in the study. On the ground floor, there is a big kitchen where I enjoy making meals. There is also a living room where I can gather with friends. In front of the house, there's a big garden. I can enjoy beautiful flowers and have lots of fun there.
I hope I can live in such a house some day.

【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求根据思维导图要点写“My dream home”短文，词数90左右。解题思路：先提取思维导图核心要点——整体概况（大型住宅、临海、二楼海景阳台）、上层空间（卧室、书房）、下层空间（厨房、客厅），再补充合理的特色空间（如花园），采用“总-分-总”结构：开篇介绍梦想家整体情况，中间分述各空间功能，结尾表达向往，确保要点齐全、语句通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】1. 开篇点明梦想家整体特征：My dream home is very large, near the sea, with a big balcony on the second floor, where you can see the sea and beach. 2. 描述上层空间：I have my own bedroom and study on the upper floor, I can read or chat with friends in the study. 3. 描述下层空间：The ground floor has a big kitchen (I enjoy cooking here) and a living room (I can gather with friends). 4. 补充特色空间：There is a big garden in front of the house, where I can enjoy flowers. 5. 结尾表达愿望：I hope to live in such a house one day. 注意控制词数，确保语句正确。
【答案】One possible version:
My dream home
My dream home is very large. It's near the sea. There's a big balcony on the second floor. I can look out at the sea and the beach there. In my dream home, I have my own bedroom and study. I can read or chat with my friends in the study. On the ground floor, there is a big kitchen where I enjoy making meals. There is also a living room where I can gather with friends. In front of the house, there's a big garden. I can enjoy beautiful flowers and have lots of fun there.
I hope I can live in such a house some day.
【知识点】英语书面表达、房屋类英语词汇、there be句型
【点评】该作文紧扣题目要求，覆盖所有给定要点，补充合理的特色内容，结构清晰，语言流畅，符合词数要求，准确传达了对梦想家的描述与向往，符合初中英语书面表达的评分标准。
【难度系数】0.5