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Ⅲ.书面表达
假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟英文专栏,征集同学们对热点话题的看法。请根据以下提示,为该专栏投稿。
(1) 如今,饲养宠物的人越来越多,它们给人们带来了许多欢乐。
(2) 宠物不仅是可爱的玩伴,还能帮助人们缓解压力,让人感到温暖。
(3) 然而,饲养宠物也需要承担许多责任,并可能带来一些问题。
(4) 它们可能弄脏环境、发出噪音,甚至有时可能会伤害到人。
(5) 你认为……
参考词汇:伙伴,玩伴companions;缓解压力relieve stress
写作要求:
(1) 词数:80—100。
(2) 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Nowadays, many people like keeping pets.
假如你所在中学的校刊近期开辟英文专栏,征集同学们对热点话题的看法。请根据以下提示,为该专栏投稿。
(1) 如今,饲养宠物的人越来越多,它们给人们带来了许多欢乐。
(2) 宠物不仅是可爱的玩伴,还能帮助人们缓解压力,让人感到温暖。
(3) 然而,饲养宠物也需要承担许多责任,并可能带来一些问题。
(4) 它们可能弄脏环境、发出噪音,甚至有时可能会伤害到人。
(5) 你认为……
参考词汇:伙伴,玩伴companions;缓解压力relieve stress
写作要求:
(1) 词数:80—100。
(2) 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3) 要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。
Nowadays, many people like keeping pets.
They bring a lot of happiness to our lives. Pets are not only lovely companions but also help us relieve stress and make us feel warm.
However, keeping pets also requires taking on many responsibilities and may cause some problems. For example, they might make the environment dirty, create noise, or even hurt people sometimes.
In my opinion, keeping pets is a wonderful thing if we can be responsible owners. We should make sure to train them properly, keep them clean, and respect our neighbors. Only then can we truly enjoy the joy that pets bring.
However, keeping pets also requires taking on many responsibilities and may cause some problems. For example, they might make the environment dirty, create noise, or even hurt people sometimes.
In my opinion, keeping pets is a wonderful thing if we can be responsible owners. We should make sure to train them properly, keep them clean, and respect our neighbors. Only then can we truly enjoy the joy that pets bring.
答案
(One possible version)
Nowadays, many people like keeping pets. They
bring a lot of happiness to our lives. Pets are not only
lovely companions but also help us relieve stress and
make us feel warm.
However, keeping pets also requires taking on
many responsibilities and may cause some problems. For
example, they might make the environment dirty, create
noise, or even hurt people sometimes.
In my opinion, keeping pets is a wonderful thing if
we can be responsible owners. We should make sure to
train them properly, keep them clean, and respect our
neighbors. Only then can we truly enjoy the joy that pets
bring.
Nowadays, many people like keeping pets. They
bring a lot of happiness to our lives. Pets are not only
lovely companions but also help us relieve stress and
make us feel warm.
However, keeping pets also requires taking on
many responsibilities and may cause some problems. For
example, they might make the environment dirty, create
noise, or even hurt people sometimes.
In my opinion, keeping pets is a wonderful thing if
we can be responsible owners. We should make sure to
train them properly, keep them clean, and respect our
neighbors. Only then can we truly enjoy the joy that pets
bring.
解析
【分析】
首先拿到这道书面表达题，第一步先明确写作要求：这是给校刊英文专栏的投稿，主题是辩证讨论养宠物的热点话题，词数要求80-100，开头已给出不计入总词数。接下来梳理写作思路：首先先承接开头，完成前两个正面要点，说明养宠物给人带来欢乐，点明宠物既是可爱玩伴、还能帮人缓解压力带来温暖，要用上题干给出的参考词汇；之后用转折逻辑过渡，覆盖反面的两个要点，说明养宠物需要承担责任，同时会带来弄脏环境、制造噪音甚至伤人的问题；最后补充自己的合理观点，提出负责任养宠的做法，保证所有要点不遗漏，用合适的连接词串联内容，控制词数符合要求即可。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，首先点明宠物能给人们的生活带来很多欢乐，紧接着使用not only...but also的并列结构，串联宠物作为可爱玩伴、帮助人们缓解压力、给人带来温暖的正向作用，覆盖题干前2个要点，同时自然用上指定的参考词汇companions和relieve stress。
2. 用转折副词however过渡，引出养宠物的另一面：养宠需要承担很多责任，也可能带来问题，随后用for example举例，具体说明宠物弄脏环境、制造噪音、偶尔伤人的三类问题，覆盖题干第3、4个要点。
3. 用In my opinion引出个人观点，提出只要做负责任的养宠人，做好宠物训练、清洁，顾及邻居感受，就能真正享受养宠的乐趣，收尾完整，调整语句后总词数符合80-100的要求，行文逻辑连贯。
【答案】
(One possible version)
Nowadays, many people like keeping pets. They bring a lot of happiness to our lives. Pets are not only lovely companions but also help us relieve stress and make us feel warm.
However, keeping pets also requires taking on many responsibilities and may cause some problems. For example, they might make the environment dirty, create noise, or even hurt people sometimes.
In my opinion, keeping pets is a wonderful thing if we can be responsible owners. We should make sure to train them properly, keep them clean, and respect our neighbors. Only then can we truly enjoy the joy that pets bring.
【知识点】
英文议论文写作，话题词汇运用，逻辑连接词使用
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干给出的全部5个写作要点，逻辑层次清晰，先正面阐述养宠的益处，再转折点明养宠的责任与潜在问题，最后给出合理正向的个人观点，行文衔接流畅，正确使用了题干给出的所有参考词汇，词数符合要求，末尾使用倒装结构提升了表达亮点，风格贴合校园校刊专栏的投稿定位，是一篇合格的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先拿到这道书面表达题，第一步先明确写作要求：这是给校刊英文专栏的投稿，主题是辩证讨论养宠物的热点话题，词数要求80-100，开头已给出不计入总词数。接下来梳理写作思路：首先先承接开头，完成前两个正面要点，说明养宠物给人带来欢乐，点明宠物既是可爱玩伴、还能帮人缓解压力带来温暖，要用上题干给出的参考词汇；之后用转折逻辑过渡，覆盖反面的两个要点，说明养宠物需要承担责任，同时会带来弄脏环境、制造噪音甚至伤人的问题；最后补充自己的合理观点，提出负责任养宠的做法，保证所有要点不遗漏，用合适的连接词串联内容，控制词数符合要求即可。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，首先点明宠物能给人们的生活带来很多欢乐，紧接着使用not only...but also的并列结构，串联宠物作为可爱玩伴、帮助人们缓解压力、给人带来温暖的正向作用，覆盖题干前2个要点，同时自然用上指定的参考词汇companions和relieve stress。
2. 用转折副词however过渡，引出养宠物的另一面：养宠需要承担很多责任，也可能带来问题，随后用for example举例，具体说明宠物弄脏环境、制造噪音、偶尔伤人的三类问题，覆盖题干第3、4个要点。
3. 用In my opinion引出个人观点，提出只要做负责任的养宠人，做好宠物训练、清洁，顾及邻居感受，就能真正享受养宠的乐趣，收尾完整，调整语句后总词数符合80-100的要求，行文逻辑连贯。
【答案】
(One possible version)
Nowadays, many people like keeping pets. They bring a lot of happiness to our lives. Pets are not only lovely companions but also help us relieve stress and make us feel warm.
However, keeping pets also requires taking on many responsibilities and may cause some problems. For example, they might make the environment dirty, create noise, or even hurt people sometimes.
In my opinion, keeping pets is a wonderful thing if we can be responsible owners. We should make sure to train them properly, keep them clean, and respect our neighbors. Only then can we truly enjoy the joy that pets bring.
【知识点】
英文议论文写作，话题词汇运用，逻辑连接词使用
【点评】
本篇范文完整覆盖了题干给出的全部5个写作要点，逻辑层次清晰，先正面阐述养宠的益处，再转折点明养宠的责任与潜在问题，最后给出合理正向的个人观点，行文衔接流畅，正确使用了题干给出的所有参考词汇，词数符合要求，末尾使用倒装结构提升了表达亮点，风格贴合校园校刊专栏的投稿定位，是一篇合格的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
