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[2025 江西赣州期末]阅读点亮人生。暑期将至，同学们都准备利用假期的时间广泛阅读，开阔视野，提高阅读能力，养成阅读习惯，做个阅读小达人。假如你是李华，请根据下面提示，给你的好朋友 Jake 写封邮件，向他推荐你最喜欢的一本书。
推荐书目：Journey to the West、Little Women、Treasure Island、Oliver Twist...
写作要求：(1)写作内容需包含思维导图的提示信息，内容可适当发挥；
(2)表达清晰，语法正确，逻辑合理，上下文连贯；
(3)字迹工整，书写规范；
(4)不得出现真实的姓名、校名；
(5)词数 100 左右(文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Jake,
Summer vacation is coming soon. It is the best time for us to read books.
Yours,
Li Hua
推荐书目：Journey to the West、Little Women、Treasure Island、Oliver Twist...
写作要求：(1)写作内容需包含思维导图的提示信息，内容可适当发挥；
(2)表达清晰，语法正确，逻辑合理，上下文连贯；
(3)字迹工整，书写规范；
(4)不得出现真实的姓名、校名；
(5)词数 100 左右(文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Jake,
Summer vacation is coming soon. It is the best time for us to read books.
I have read and kept many books from childhood. Among them, my favourite book is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer. It is written by Mark Twain.
The book is about a smart boy, Tom Sawyer, and his unusual childhood. He takes some unbelievable adventures with his friends. However, he doesn't fear in the face of difficulties.
I got this book on my 7th birthday and I have had it for seven years. It is special to me because it's my birthday gift from my dear father. What's more, I like it because I learnt a lot from Tom Sawyer. I will keep the book forever.
The book is about a smart boy, Tom Sawyer, and his unusual childhood. He takes some unbelievable adventures with his friends. However, he doesn't fear in the face of difficulties.
I got this book on my 7th birthday and I have had it for seven years. It is special to me because it's my birthday gift from my dear father. What's more, I like it because I learnt a lot from Tom Sawyer. I will keep the book forever.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
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Dear Jake,
Summer vacation is coming soon. It is the best time for us to read books. I have read and kept many books from childhood. Among them, my favourite book is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer. It is written by Mark Twain.
The book is about a smart boy, Tom Sawyer, and his unusual childhood. He takes some unbelievable adventures with his friends. However, he doesn't fear in the face of difficulties.
I got this book on my 7th birthday and I have had it for seven years. It is special to me because it's my birthday gift from my dear father. What's more, I like it because I learnt a lot from Tom Sawyer. I will keep the book forever.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jake,
Summer vacation is coming soon. It is the best time for us to read books. I have read and kept many books from childhood. Among them, my favourite book is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer. It is written by Mark Twain.
The book is about a smart boy, Tom Sawyer, and his unusual childhood. He takes some unbelievable adventures with his friends. However, he doesn't fear in the face of difficulties.
I got this book on my 7th birthday and I have had it for seven years. It is special to me because it's my birthday gift from my dear father. What's more, I like it because I learnt a lot from Tom Sawyer. I will keep the book forever.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题为英语书信写作题，要求给好友Jake写邮件推荐最喜欢的书，需覆盖思维导图的5个核心要点：①最喜欢的书是哪本；②如何得到这本书；③拥有这本书多久了；④这本书的内容；⑤为什么最喜欢它，同时需从给定推荐书目中选择，结合已给出的开头结尾，词数约100，表达清晰连贯。解题思路：首先确定推荐的书籍，接着依次回应思维导图的5个要点并补充细节，最后衔接开头结尾，确保符合书信格式和写作要求。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接开头，点明自己最喜欢的书为《汤姆索亚历险记》；2. 介绍书籍内容：讲述聪明男孩Tom Sawyer的不寻常童年及与朋友的冒险经历；3. 说明获得方式（7岁生日礼物）和拥有时长（已拥有7年）；4. 阐述喜欢的原因：既是父亲的礼物，又能从Tom身上学到面对困难不畏惧的品质；5. 收尾呼应，控制词数，确保语法正确、逻辑连贯。
【答案】Dear Jake,
Summer vacation is coming soon. It is the best time for us to read books. I have read and kept many books from childhood. Among them, my favourite book is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer. It is written by Mark Twain.
The book is about a smart boy, Tom Sawyer, and his unusual childhood. He takes some unbelievable adventures with his friends. However, he doesn't fear in the face of difficulties.
I got this book on my 7th birthday and I have had it for seven years. It is special to me because it's my birthday gift from my dear father. What's more, I like it because I learnt a lot from Tom Sawyer. I will keep the book forever.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、话题写作（书籍推荐）
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求围绕“推荐最喜欢的书”话题，结合思维导图要点完成写作，注重内容完整性、语法准确性与逻辑连贯性，符合初中英语写作的考查目标。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接开头，点明自己最喜欢的书为《汤姆索亚历险记》；2. 介绍书籍内容：讲述聪明男孩Tom Sawyer的不寻常童年及与朋友的冒险经历；3. 说明获得方式（7岁生日礼物）和拥有时长（已拥有7年）；4. 阐述喜欢的原因：既是父亲的礼物，又能从Tom身上学到面对困难不畏惧的品质；5. 收尾呼应，控制词数，确保语法正确、逻辑连贯。
【答案】Dear Jake,
Summer vacation is coming soon. It is the best time for us to read books. I have read and kept many books from childhood. Among them, my favourite book is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer. It is written by Mark Twain.
The book is about a smart boy, Tom Sawyer, and his unusual childhood. He takes some unbelievable adventures with his friends. However, he doesn't fear in the face of difficulties.
I got this book on my 7th birthday and I have had it for seven years. It is special to me because it's my birthday gift from my dear father. What's more, I like it because I learnt a lot from Tom Sawyer. I will keep the book forever.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、话题写作（书籍推荐）
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求围绕“推荐最喜欢的书”话题，结合思维导图要点完成写作，注重内容完整性、语法准确性与逻辑连贯性，符合初中英语写作的考查目标。
【难度系数】0.6
