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51. 初中阶段既是学习进步的关键时期，也是个人迅速成长的阶段。因此，初中生的成长之路就如同一场漫长的旅途。在这个过程中，他们既能收获满满的喜悦，也会遇到令人困惑的挑战。学校校园英语报正在围绕“Growing Up”这一主题开展征文活动，请你根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文介绍你成长过程中遇到的问题及对其感悟，参加该征文活动。
写作要点:(1)How do you understand the world? (2)How do you deal with problems you face as you grow up? (3)Your feelings about it.
写作要求:(1)征文须包括所给要点，可适当发挥;(2)语句通顺，语意连贯，条理清晰;(3)80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Growing Up
Growing up is like a long journey and I've experienced different facts.
写作要点:(1)How do you understand the world? (2)How do you deal with problems you face as you grow up? (3)Your feelings about it.
写作要求:(1)征文须包括所给要点，可适当发挥;(2)语句通顺，语意连贯，条理清晰;(3)80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Growing Up
Growing up is like a long journey and I've experienced different facts.
Learning about the world is part of growing up.I learn about people in different times and places through books.At home, my parents guide me to be kind.At school, I've learnt to get along with my classmates and teachers.
However, there are difficulties on the journey.I once failed to balance my schoolwork and hobbies.Luckily, my teacher advised me to use time wisely.
Though growth is hard, we should never lose heart.People around us will always support us.
And that's the beauty of growing up.
答案
One possible version:
Growing Up
Growing up is like a long journey and I've experienced different facts.
Learning about the world is part of growing up.I learn about people in different times and places through books.At home, my parents guide me to be kind.At school, I've learnt to get along with my classmates and teachers.
However, there are difficulties on the journey.I once failed to balance my schoolwork and hobbies.Luckily, my teacher advised me to use time wisely.
Though growth is hard, we should never lose heart.People around us will always support us.And that's the beauty of growing up.
Growing Up
Growing up is like a long journey and I've experienced different facts.
Learning about the world is part of growing up.I learn about people in different times and places through books.At home, my parents guide me to be kind.At school, I've learnt to get along with my classmates and teachers.
However, there are difficulties on the journey.I once failed to balance my schoolwork and hobbies.Luckily, my teacher advised me to use time wisely.
Though growth is hard, we should never lose heart.People around us will always support us.And that's the beauty of growing up.
解析
【分析】本题为英语主题征文写作题，需围绕“Growing Up”主题完成三个写作要点：①对世界的理解；②处理成长中问题的方式；③成长感悟。解题思路为：先明确固定开头，再依次紧扣三个要点展开内容，结合自身经历（如通过书籍、父母、学校了解世界，遇到学业与爱好平衡的问题并得到老师帮助），最后表达积极感悟，确保语句通顺、符合词数要求。
【解析】1. 明确写作要求：主题为“Growing Up”，需包含三个指定要点，开头已给出，词数控制在80左右；2. 内容展开：①对世界的理解：通过书籍了解不同时空的人物，父母引导树立品格，学校学习人际相处；②处理问题：遇到学业与爱好平衡的困难，采纳老师合理规划时间的建议；③成长感悟：成长虽有挑战，但有周围人的支持，这是成长的美好之处；3. 组织语言，确保连贯自然，符合初中英语表达规范。
【答案】One possible version:
Growing Up
Growing up is like a long journey and I've experienced different facts.
Learning about the world is part of growing up.I learn about people in different times and places through books.At home, my parents guide me to be kind.At school, I've learnt to get along with my classmates and teachers.
However, there are difficulties on the journey.I once failed to balance my schoolwork and hobbies.Luckily, my teacher advised me to use time wisely.
Though growth is hard, we should never lose heart.People around us will always support us.And that's the beauty of growing up.
【知识点】英语应用文写作，英语主题写作，书面表达
【点评】本题考查初中学生的英语书面表达能力，围绕成长主题，要求覆盖指定要点并结合自身经历，是初中英语常见的写作题型，注重考查学生的语言组织与主题理解能力。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 明确写作要求：主题为“Growing Up”，需包含三个指定要点，开头已给出，词数控制在80左右；2. 内容展开：①对世界的理解：通过书籍了解不同时空的人物，父母引导树立品格，学校学习人际相处；②处理问题：遇到学业与爱好平衡的困难，采纳老师合理规划时间的建议；③成长感悟：成长虽有挑战，但有周围人的支持，这是成长的美好之处；3. 组织语言，确保连贯自然，符合初中英语表达规范。
【答案】One possible version:
Growing Up
Growing up is like a long journey and I've experienced different facts.
Learning about the world is part of growing up.I learn about people in different times and places through books.At home, my parents guide me to be kind.At school, I've learnt to get along with my classmates and teachers.
However, there are difficulties on the journey.I once failed to balance my schoolwork and hobbies.Luckily, my teacher advised me to use time wisely.
Though growth is hard, we should never lose heart.People around us will always support us.And that's the beauty of growing up.
【知识点】英语应用文写作，英语主题写作，书面表达
【点评】本题考查初中学生的英语书面表达能力，围绕成长主题，要求覆盖指定要点并结合自身经历，是初中英语常见的写作题型，注重考查学生的语言组织与主题理解能力。
【难度系数】0.6
