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(2025·江苏淮安金湖期中)假设你叫李华，刚刚收到外国交换生 John 的一封电子邮件。他已经来北京两个月了，但是还未参观过北京的景点。请给他回复一封电子邮件，简要介绍一下你参观过的某一个北京著名景点，你做了什么，并给他一些在北京游玩的建议。
提示词语：wonderful, photos, traditional food, shoes
Dear Li Hua,
I have been in Beijing for two months. In fact, I don't know much about this city. Can you tell me one place that you have been to? What did you do during the trip? Can you give me some advice if I go there?
Yours,
John
Dear John,
I'm glad that you have been in Beijing for two months. Beijing is a big city and there are many interesting places
If you have any questions, you can send an email to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
(2025·江苏淮安金湖期中)假设你叫李华，刚刚收到外国交换生 John 的一封电子邮件。他已经来北京两个月了，但是还未参观过北京的景点。请给他回复一封电子邮件，简要介绍一下你参观过的某一个北京著名景点，你做了什么，并给他一些在北京游玩的建议。
提示词语：wonderful, photos, traditional food, shoes
Dear Li Hua,
I have been in Beijing for two months. In fact, I don't know much about this city. Can you tell me one place that you have been to? What did you do during the trip? Can you give me some advice if I go there?
Yours,
John
Dear John,
I'm glad that you have been in Beijing for two months. Beijing is a big city and there are many interesting places
such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum and the Forbidden City. The Great Wall is one of the Seven Wonders of the World. You can only appreciate the Great Wall when you climb it yourself. I've been to the Great Wall before. Also, I took a lot of pictures. If you want to go to the Great Wall, I can give you some advice.
Firstly, you should get a pair of comfortable shoes. Because you'll be walking for a long time. Having a comfortable pair of shoes will make your journey more enjoyable.
Secondly, you should wear a mask.
Finally, you should check the weather forecast in advance and choose a sunny day.
If you have any questions, you can send an email to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
One possible version
Dear John,
I'm glad that you have been in Beijing for two months. Beijing is a big city and there are many interesting places, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum and the Forbidden City. The Great Wall is one of the Seven Wonders of the World. You can only appreciate the Great Wall when you climb it yourself. I've been to the Great Wall before. Also, I took a lot of pictures. If you want to go to the Great Wall, I can give you some advice.
Firstly, you should get a pair of comfortable shoes. Because you'll be walking for a long time. Having a comfortable pair of shoes will make your journey more enjoyable. Secondly, you should wear a mask. Finally, you should check the weather forecast in advance and choose a sunny day.
If you have any questions, you can send an email to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear John,
I'm glad that you have been in Beijing for two months. Beijing is a big city and there are many interesting places, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum and the Forbidden City. The Great Wall is one of the Seven Wonders of the World. You can only appreciate the Great Wall when you climb it yourself. I've been to the Great Wall before. Also, I took a lot of pictures. If you want to go to the Great Wall, I can give you some advice.
Firstly, you should get a pair of comfortable shoes. Because you'll be walking for a long time. Having a comfortable pair of shoes will make your journey more enjoyable. Secondly, you should wear a mask. Finally, you should check the weather forecast in advance and choose a sunny day.
If you have any questions, you can send an email to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
拿到这道题首先要明确写作任务：这是一封回复外国交换生的电子邮件，需要覆盖三个核心要求：1. 介绍一个自己游览过的北京知名景点；2. 说明游览时的相关活动；3. 给John给出实用的游玩建议，同时要合理使用给出的四个提示词。首先第一步，承接题目已经给出的开头句，先列举几个大众熟知的北京景点，自然引出要介绍的核心景点，比如最具代表性的长城，先简单介绍长城的地位让John有初步认知。第二步，切换到过去时态，讲述之前游览长城的经历，自然融入提示词，把游玩过程讲清楚。第三步，提建议的时候首先对应提示词shoes，提醒对方准备舒适的鞋子，再补充其他贴合出行的实用建议，最后衔接题目给出的结尾句，保证全文语气亲切符合朋友交流的感觉，逻辑通顺没有遗漏要点。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇承接：顺着题干给出的开头，先列举长城、颐和园、故宫等多个北京知名景点，引出核心介绍对象长城，点明它是世界七大奇迹之一，凸显景点的知名度。
2. 叙述自身游览经历：说明自己此前去过长城，那次旅行体验十分美妙，沿途拍摄了大量风景照片，完整覆盖自身游玩过程的描述，自然融入相关提示词。
3. 给出游玩建议：分点给出实用建议，首先提醒对方准备一双舒适的鞋子，避免长时间行走劳累，再补充佩戴口罩、提前查看天气预报、选择晴天出行等贴合实际的出行提示。
4. 收尾衔接题干给出的固定结尾句，检查全文时态是否正确：介绍景点用一般现在时，描述过往经历用现在完成时/一般过去时，提建议多用should引导的句型，确认所有要点都已覆盖，没有语法错误。
【答案】
One possible version
Dear John,
I'm glad that you have been in Beijing for two months. Beijing is a big city and there are many interesting places, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum and the Forbidden City. The Great Wall is one of the Seven Wonders of the World. You can only appreciate the Great Wall when you climb it yourself. I've been to the Great Wall before. Also, I took a lot of pictures. If you want to go to the Great Wall, I can give you some advice.
Firstly, you should get a pair of comfortable shoes. Because you'll be walking for a long time. Having a comfortable pair of shoes will make your journey more enjoyable. Secondly, you should wear a mask. Finally, you should check the weather forecast in advance and choose a sunny day.
If you have any questions, you can send an email to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文电子邮件写作，景点话题表达，建议类句型运用
【点评】
本题是初中阶段典型的应用文书信写作题，题干给出了邮件首尾的固定内容，还给出了提示词辅助搭建内容框架，写作门槛较低。学生只需要紧扣介绍景点、叙述自身游玩经历、给出出行建议三个核心要求，保证时态切换准确，语气符合朋友交流的亲切感，逻辑连贯就能拿到高分，日常可以多积累国内知名景点相关的英文表达，进一步提升内容丰富度。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道题首先要明确写作任务：这是一封回复外国交换生的电子邮件，需要覆盖三个核心要求：1. 介绍一个自己游览过的北京知名景点；2. 说明游览时的相关活动；3. 给John给出实用的游玩建议，同时要合理使用给出的四个提示词。首先第一步，承接题目已经给出的开头句，先列举几个大众熟知的北京景点，自然引出要介绍的核心景点，比如最具代表性的长城，先简单介绍长城的地位让John有初步认知。第二步，切换到过去时态，讲述之前游览长城的经历，自然融入提示词，把游玩过程讲清楚。第三步，提建议的时候首先对应提示词shoes，提醒对方准备舒适的鞋子，再补充其他贴合出行的实用建议，最后衔接题目给出的结尾句，保证全文语气亲切符合朋友交流的感觉，逻辑通顺没有遗漏要点。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：
1. 开篇承接：顺着题干给出的开头，先列举长城、颐和园、故宫等多个北京知名景点，引出核心介绍对象长城，点明它是世界七大奇迹之一，凸显景点的知名度。
2. 叙述自身游览经历：说明自己此前去过长城，那次旅行体验十分美妙，沿途拍摄了大量风景照片，完整覆盖自身游玩过程的描述，自然融入相关提示词。
3. 给出游玩建议：分点给出实用建议，首先提醒对方准备一双舒适的鞋子，避免长时间行走劳累，再补充佩戴口罩、提前查看天气预报、选择晴天出行等贴合实际的出行提示。
4. 收尾衔接题干给出的固定结尾句，检查全文时态是否正确：介绍景点用一般现在时，描述过往经历用现在完成时/一般过去时，提建议多用should引导的句型，确认所有要点都已覆盖，没有语法错误。
【答案】
One possible version
Dear John,
I'm glad that you have been in Beijing for two months. Beijing is a big city and there are many interesting places, such as the Great Wall, the Summer Palace, the Palace Museum and the Forbidden City. The Great Wall is one of the Seven Wonders of the World. You can only appreciate the Great Wall when you climb it yourself. I've been to the Great Wall before. Also, I took a lot of pictures. If you want to go to the Great Wall, I can give you some advice.
Firstly, you should get a pair of comfortable shoes. Because you'll be walking for a long time. Having a comfortable pair of shoes will make your journey more enjoyable. Secondly, you should wear a mask. Finally, you should check the weather forecast in advance and choose a sunny day.
If you have any questions, you can send an email to me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英文电子邮件写作，景点话题表达，建议类句型运用
【点评】
本题是初中阶段典型的应用文书信写作题，题干给出了邮件首尾的固定内容，还给出了提示词辅助搭建内容框架，写作门槛较低。学生只需要紧扣介绍景点、叙述自身游玩经历、给出出行建议三个核心要求，保证时态切换准确，语气符合朋友交流的亲切感，逻辑连贯就能拿到高分，日常可以多积累国内知名景点相关的英文表达，进一步提升内容丰富度。
【难度系数】
0.6
