Ⅰ. 例题
（2025·镇江中考改编）为了给学生营造更好的成长环境，你校通过校报英文专栏向初二学生征集学校改善场地、筹划活动等方面的建议。请写一篇短文投稿。

要求:1. 文中须包含要点提示,可适当发挥;
2. 不少于 100 词(开头不计入总词数)。
During the past two years' school life, I have so many good memories, I remember that

During the past two years' school life, I have so many good memories, I remember that we held the autumn sports meeting on the playground last year. My classmates cheered for me loudly when I joined the 1000-metre race. We also had wonderful New Year shows in the school hall, all of us sang and laughed together. In our classroom, we always had fun talking about our problems with teachers and classmates after class.
These moments always make me feel warm and happy. To make our school life better, I have some small advice. First, we can add more benches on the playground so that students can have a rest after doing sports. Second, we can organize more different club activities in the school hall to develop our different hobbies. Third, we can set up a small book corner at the back of each classroom to share different books. I hope our school will become more wonderful for all of us.

【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作题，要求结合给定的地点、活动、感受、建议等要点，围绕学校生活回忆及改善建议完成短文。解题思路：1. 承接给定开头，回忆学校生活中对应不同地点的具体活动，搭配真实的感受；2. 针对学校场地、活动等提出具体可行的建议，分点阐述使内容清晰；3. 确保内容完整，符合词数要求，语言通顺自然。
【解析】
首先承接开头，回忆学校生活的具体场景：在操场举办秋季运动会，同学为自己加油；在学校礼堂举办新年演出，大家欢笑；在课后和师生在教室交流问题，表达温暖开心的感受。接着从操场增加休息长椅、礼堂组织更多社团活动、教室设立图书角三个方面提出合理建议，最后表达对学校的美好期望，满足题目要求。
【答案】
During the past two years' school life, I have so many good memories, I remember that we held the autumn sports meeting on the playground last year. My classmates cheered for me loudly when I joined the 1000-metre race. We also had wonderful New Year shows in the school hall, all of us sang and laughed together. In our classroom, we always had fun talking about our problems with teachers and classmates after class.
These moments always make me feel warm and happy. To make our school life better, I have some small advice. First, we can add more benches on the playground so that students can have a rest after doing sports. Second, we can organize more different club activities in the school hall to develop our different hobbies. Third, we can set up a small book corner at the back of each classroom to share different books. I hope our school will become more wonderful for all of us.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；校园话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，涵盖所有要点，内容充实，语言流畅，符合初二学生的英语水平，是一篇优秀的投稿短文。
【难度系数】
0.5

Ⅱ. 写作策略
写这篇投稿短文时，需先结合提示选取校园场地，回忆并描述一次活动经历，再表达此次经历的感受与想法，最后针对问题提出具体改善建议。写作时以一般过去时描述经历，一般现在时表达感受和建议，借助衔接词划分“经历——感受——建议”三层结构，合理使用从句丰富句式，做到经历具体、感受真实、建议贴合实际，符合投稿短文的书写要求。

答案略

【分析】
本题要求完成一篇符合规范的校园投稿短文，解题思路为：先选取具体校园场地，回忆并以一般过去时描述一次真实的校园活动经历（需细节具体）；再转换为一般现在时表达此次经历的真实感受；最后针对活动相关问题提出贴合实际的具体改善建议；全程需用衔接词划分“经历—感受—建议”三层结构，适当使用从句丰富句式，满足投稿短文的书写要求。
【解析】
写作时按以下步骤推进：1. 确定核心要素：选取校园场地（如学校操场），明确具体活动（如秋季运动会接力赛）；2. 描述经历：用一般过去时，交代时间、场景、事件经过（如自己掉棒后队友默契配合反超的细节）；3. 表达感受：用一般现在时，阐述从经历中获得的感悟（如团队合作的重要性）；4. 提出建议：针对活动问题（如赛前缺乏专业指导），给出具体建议（如学校增设接力赛赛前培训课程）；5. 结构衔接：使用First、What's more、Finally等衔接词划分三层，运用定语从句、状语从句丰富句式，确保内容具体、逻辑清晰。
【答案】
答案略
【知识点】
英语写作策略、时态运用、短文结构划分
【点评】
本题综合考察学生的写作规划能力、时态运用能力及内容表达能力，要求结合校园实际经历完成投稿，既贴合学生生活，又能检验写作基本功的掌握情况。
【难度系数】
0.5

Ⅰ. 话题词汇
1. 总的来说
2. 回想
3. 充分利用

1. in general
2. reflect on
3. make full use of

【分析】本题考查英语常用话题短语的汉译英，需准确掌握对应固定搭配，平时积累核心短语即可解答。
【解析】1. “总的来说”对应的英语固定短语为in general；2. “回想”对应的英语固定短语为reflect on；3. “充分利用”对应的英语固定短语为make full use of，这些均为英语中常用的固定搭配，需准确记忆。
【答案】1. in general；2. reflect on；3. make full use of
【知识点】英语短语翻译；固定搭配
【点评】本题为基础英语词汇考查题，聚焦核心话题短语的掌握，难度较低，适合巩固基础。
【难度系数】0.8

Ⅱ. 佳句翻译
1. 我仍记得我们在学校礼堂举办的那场难忘的活动。

2. 舒适的校园环境不仅让我们心情愉悦，还能帮助我们拥有更美好的校园生活。

1. I still remember the unforgettable activity that we heldin the school hall.
2. A comfortable campus environment not only makes us feelhappy but also helps us have a more wonderful school life.

【分析】本题为英语汉译英题型，需掌握定语从句的用法及“not only...but also...”的并列结构。第1句中“那场难忘的活动”是先行词，需用that引导定语从句修饰，“举办活动”对应动词hold；第2句需用“not only...but also...”连接两个并列谓语，注意固定搭配的正确使用。
【解析】1. 主语“我”译为I，“仍记得”译为still remember，“那场难忘的活动”译为the unforgettable activity，其后接定语从句“我们在学校礼堂举办的”，用that引导，“举办”用过去式held，“在学校礼堂”译为in the school hall，组合得：I still remember the unforgettable activity that we held in the school hall。2. “舒适的校园环境”译为A comfortable campus environment，“不仅...还...”译为not only...but also...，“让我们心情愉悦”译为makes us feel happy，“帮助我们拥有更美好的校园生活”译为helps us have a more wonderful school life，组合得：A comfortable campus environment not only makes us feel happy but also helps us have a more wonderful school life。
【答案】
1. I still remember the unforgettable activity that we held in the school hall.
2. A comfortable campus environment not only makes us feel happy but also helps us have a more wonderful school life.
【知识点】汉译英、定语从句、并列连词结构
【点评】本题考查基础汉译英，涉及定语从句和常用并列句式，需准确运用核心词汇及语法结构，属于基础巩固类题型。
【难度系数】0.5