八、书面表达18分
现在越来越多的学生使用手机上的应用软件来搜查他们不会做的题目。对此,不同的人有不同的看法。请根据以下提示,适当发表自己的观点,写一篇英语短文。
△solve problems in time △study at home
△be more interested in studying...
○play games instead of studying ○depend on phones
○a waste of time...
• Your ideas and advice?
注意:1. 词数90左右。开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。2. 短文须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。3. 参考词汇:convenient方便的,便利的;think independently独立思考。
Today, more and more students are using the apps on their mobile phones to help with their homework. However, different people have different ideas about it.
Some people think
现在越来越多的学生使用手机上的应用软件来搜查他们不会做的题目。对此,不同的人有不同的看法。请根据以下提示,适当发表自己的观点,写一篇英语短文。
△solve problems in time △study at home
△be more interested in studying...
○play games instead of studying ○depend on phones
○a waste of time...
• Your ideas and advice?
注意:1. 词数90左右。开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。2. 短文须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥,使短文连贯、通顺。3. 参考词汇:convenient方便的,便利的;think independently独立思考。
Today, more and more students are using the apps on their mobile phones to help with their homework. However, different people have different ideas about it.
Some people think
答案
八、One possible version:
Today, more and more students are using the apps on
their mobile phones to help with their homework. However,
different people have different ideas about it.
Some people think it's useful. The apps can help students
solve problems in their studies in time. It's easy and
convenient for them. They can study at home. They can
choose teachers they like, and they will be more interested in
studying.
However, others don't think so. They think some
students just pretend to study, but in fact they play games.
They depend on phones too much. They don't want to think
independently, but only copy the answers. They don't care
about their studies at all. It's a waste of time.
→want to do sth 意为"想要做某事"。
I think it's good for students who are hard-working.
They can study better. But for students who don't want to
study, it's very bad.
思路引导 [总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文,要求根据所给提示发表自己
对于越来越多的学生借助手机应用软件解题的看法。②时
态:一般现在时。③提示:写作要点已给出,注意提示信息
均要一一阐述,并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,说明人们对于越来越多的学生借助
手机应用软件来解题的看法不同;第二步,从正面阐述借助
手机解题的益处;第三步,从反面阐述借助手机解题给学生
带来的不良影响;第四步,发表自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①easy and convenient 简单又方便 ②copy the answers 抄
写答案 ③care about their studies 关心他们的学业
[高分句型]
①They can choose teachers they like...(定语从句)
②They don't want to think independently, but only copy
the answers. (并列句)
③I think it's good for students who are hard-working. (宾
语从句;who 引导定语从句)
Today, more and more students are using the apps on
their mobile phones to help with their homework. However,
different people have different ideas about it.
Some people think it's useful. The apps can help students
solve problems in their studies in time. It's easy and
convenient for them. They can study at home. They can
choose teachers they like, and they will be more interested in
studying.
However, others don't think so. They think some
students just pretend to study, but in fact they play games.
They depend on phones too much. They don't want to think
independently, but only copy the answers. They don't care
about their studies at all. It's a waste of time.
→want to do sth 意为"想要做某事"。
I think it's good for students who are hard-working.
They can study better. But for students who don't want to
study, it's very bad.
思路引导 [总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文,要求根据所给提示发表自己
对于越来越多的学生借助手机应用软件解题的看法。②时
态:一般现在时。③提示:写作要点已给出,注意提示信息
均要一一阐述,并适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,说明人们对于越来越多的学生借助
手机应用软件来解题的看法不同;第二步,从正面阐述借助
手机解题的益处;第三步,从反面阐述借助手机解题给学生
带来的不良影响;第四步,发表自己的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①easy and convenient 简单又方便 ②copy the answers 抄
写答案 ③care about their studies 关心他们的学业
[高分句型]
①They can choose teachers they like...(定语从句)
②They don't want to think independently, but only copy
the answers. (并列句)
③I think it's good for students who are hard-working. (宾
语从句;who 引导定语从句)
解析
【分析】
本题为英语材料观点类书面表达,需围绕“学生使用手机APP解题”的正反观点及个人看法展开。写作思路为:1. 承接开头,引出正面观点及对应益处;2. 转折阐述反面观点及弊端;3. 表达个人看法,区分不同学生群体的适用性,确保涵盖所有提示要点,内容连贯。
【解析】
按照写作步骤:第一步,承接开头,说明部分人认为手机APP有用,列举益处:及时解决学习问题、方便在家学习、提升学习兴趣;第二步,转折说明另一部分人的反对观点,指出弊端:部分学生借APP玩游戏、过度依赖、不独立思考、浪费时间;第三步,表达个人观点,区分勤奋学生和不愿学习的学生的不同情况,使内容完整连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Today, more and more students are using the apps on their mobile phones to help with their homework. However, different people have different ideas about it.
Some people think it's useful. The apps can help students solve problems in their studies in time. It's easy and convenient for them. They can study at home. They can choose teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying.
However, others don't think so. They think some students just pretend to study, but in fact they play games. They depend on phones too much. They don't want to think independently, but only copy the answers. They don't care about their studies at all. It's a waste of time.
I think it's good for students who are hard-working. They can study better. But for students who don't want to study, it's very bad.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、观点类议论文写作、一般现在时运用
【点评】
本文严格遵循题目要求,涵盖所有提示要点,结构清晰(正反观点+个人看法),运用了定语从句、宾语从句等句型,词汇丰富恰当,符合初中英语书面表达的高分标准,词数达标,内容连贯通顺。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语材料观点类书面表达,需围绕“学生使用手机APP解题”的正反观点及个人看法展开。写作思路为:1. 承接开头,引出正面观点及对应益处;2. 转折阐述反面观点及弊端;3. 表达个人看法,区分不同学生群体的适用性,确保涵盖所有提示要点,内容连贯。
【解析】
按照写作步骤:第一步,承接开头,说明部分人认为手机APP有用,列举益处:及时解决学习问题、方便在家学习、提升学习兴趣;第二步,转折说明另一部分人的反对观点,指出弊端:部分学生借APP玩游戏、过度依赖、不独立思考、浪费时间;第三步,表达个人观点,区分勤奋学生和不愿学习的学生的不同情况,使内容完整连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Today, more and more students are using the apps on their mobile phones to help with their homework. However, different people have different ideas about it.
Some people think it's useful. The apps can help students solve problems in their studies in time. It's easy and convenient for them. They can study at home. They can choose teachers they like, and they will be more interested in studying.
However, others don't think so. They think some students just pretend to study, but in fact they play games. They depend on phones too much. They don't want to think independently, but only copy the answers. They don't care about their studies at all. It's a waste of time.
I think it's good for students who are hard-working. They can study better. But for students who don't want to study, it's very bad.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、观点类议论文写作、一般现在时运用
【点评】
本文严格遵循题目要求,涵盖所有提示要点,结构清晰(正反观点+个人看法),运用了定语从句、宾语从句等句型,词汇丰富恰当,符合初中英语书面表达的高分标准,词数达标,内容连贯通顺。
【难度系数】
0.6
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