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话题概述
本单元的主题是“户外乐趣”，要求学生能用所学的词汇和句型介绍户外活动。与此相关的写作维度有：①介绍一种户外活动形式；②介绍一次户外活动经历。
考查学生介绍户外活动的文章的命题方式有多种，如：根据文字叙述、表格信息、发帖、回帖和思维导图等，写一篇说明文、记叙文、回一封信、发一封电子邮件等。通常要介绍：某种户外活动的名称、方式、好处和安全提醒；某次户外活动经历的时间、地点、参与者、活动过程、感受及收获等内容。
写作实例
同学们，户外活动能给我们带来很多快乐和收获！请以“My favourite outdoor activity”为题，写一篇英语短文。要点：1.介绍你最喜欢的户外活动形式；2.分享一次参与该活动的经历；3.谈谈你在这次经历中的收获。
要求：1.短文应包含所有给出的提示信息，并适当发挥。2.词数90左右。
My favourite outdoor activity
审题指导
1.体裁：记叙文 2.时态：以一般过去时为主 3.人称：以第一人称为主
4.必备词汇：①take in fresh air 呼吸新鲜空气 ②enjoy beautiful views 欣赏美景 ③early in the morning 清晨 ④take some great photos 拍一些精彩照片 ⑤be worth sth.值得某事 ⑥a great chance to do sth.一次做某事的绝佳机会 ⑦be close to nature 亲近大自然 ⑧can’t wait to do sth.迫不及待地想要做某事
谋篇布局
佳作剖析
教材原文
P82...I went on a cycling trip with my friends.
P82...took some great photos.
P87 I was very tired when I came back home, but it was worth it.
P90 It was a great chance to be close to nature.
P82 I can’t wait to do it again.
优秀范文
My favourite outdoor activity
My favourite outdoor activity is cycling. I can not only exercise but also① take in fresh air and enjoy beautiful views.
Last Saturday I went on a cycling trip with my friends. We set off early in the morning. We cycled along a river for two hours. The sun was shining, and the birds were singing.② We laughed a lot and took some great photos.
I was very tired when I came back home, but it was worth it. It was a great chance to be close to nature. I can’t wait to do it again.③
亮点评析
①使用高级词汇 not only...but also...是加分项。
②恰当使用过去进行时和并列句体现作者扎实的语言基本功，是文章的亮点。
③结尾使用本单元所学句型表达感受和收获，以及对下次活动的期待。
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①get close to nature 亲近大自然 ②enjoy cycling 喜爱骑行 ③get fun from sth.从某事中获得乐趣 ④a good way to do sth.做某事的好方法 ⑤go camping 去露营 ⑥put up a tent 搭帐篷 ⑦make a fire 生火 ⑧Cycling is becoming popular.骑行正变得流行。
佳作剖析
教材原文
P82...I went on a cycling trip with my friends.
P82...took some great photos.
P87 I was very tired when I came back home, but it was worth it.
P90 It was a great chance to be close to nature.
P82 I can’t wait to do it again.
优秀范文
My favourite outdoor activity
My favourite outdoor activity is cycling. I can not only exercise but also① take in fresh air and enjoy beautiful views.
Last Saturday I went on a cycling trip with my friends. We set off early in the morning. We cycled along a river for two hours. The sun was shining, and the birds were singing.② We laughed a lot and took some great photos.
I was very tired when I came back home, but it was worth it. It was a great chance to be close to nature. I can’t wait to do it again.③
亮点评析
①使用高级词汇 not only...but also...是加分项。
②恰当使用过去进行时和并列句体现作者扎实的语言基本功，是文章的亮点。
③结尾使用本单元所学句型表达感受和收获，以及对下次活动的期待。
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①get close to nature 亲近大自然 ②enjoy cycling 喜爱骑行 ③get fun from sth.从某事中获得乐趣 ④a good way to do sth.做某事的好方法 ⑤go camping 去露营 ⑥put up a tent 搭帐篷 ⑦make a fire 生火 ⑧Cycling is becoming popular.骑行正变得流行。
写作实战
答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D40
「2025江苏扬州期末」
在过去一年的初一学习、生活中，你肯定参加过一些户外活动，像 go on a school trip、go camping、go mountain climbing 或 go cycling 等。你班将开展以“A wonderful outdoor activity”为题的英语作文比赛活动，并在班级内展示。请根据以下要求完成一篇文章。要点：
1.When and where was the activity? 2.What did you do in the activity?（至少三点）3.How did you feel about the activity?（至少两点）
注意：
1.词数不少于100，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2.内容必须包括但不限于已给出的要点，可以适当发挥，使短文完整、流畅。
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
A wonderful outdoor activity
Time flies by quickly. In the past year, I took part in many wonderful outdoor activities.
本单元的主题是“户外乐趣”，要求学生能用所学的词汇和句型介绍户外活动。与此相关的写作维度有：①介绍一种户外活动形式；②介绍一次户外活动经历。
考查学生介绍户外活动的文章的命题方式有多种，如：根据文字叙述、表格信息、发帖、回帖和思维导图等，写一篇说明文、记叙文、回一封信、发一封电子邮件等。通常要介绍：某种户外活动的名称、方式、好处和安全提醒；某次户外活动经历的时间、地点、参与者、活动过程、感受及收获等内容。
写作实例
同学们，户外活动能给我们带来很多快乐和收获！请以“My favourite outdoor activity”为题，写一篇英语短文。要点：1.介绍你最喜欢的户外活动形式；2.分享一次参与该活动的经历；3.谈谈你在这次经历中的收获。
要求：1.短文应包含所有给出的提示信息，并适当发挥。2.词数90左右。
My favourite outdoor activity
My favourite outdoor activity is cycling. I can not only exercise but also take in fresh air and enjoy beautiful views.
Last Saturday I went on a cycling trip with my friends. We set off early in the morning. We cycled along a river for two hours. The sun was shining, and the birds were singing. We laughed a lot and took some great photos.
审题指导
1.体裁：记叙文 2.时态：以一般过去时为主 3.人称：以第一人称为主
4.必备词汇：①take in fresh air 呼吸新鲜空气 ②enjoy beautiful views 欣赏美景 ③early in the morning 清晨 ④take some great photos 拍一些精彩照片 ⑤be worth sth.值得某事 ⑥a great chance to do sth.一次做某事的绝佳机会 ⑦be close to nature 亲近大自然 ⑧can’t wait to do sth.迫不及待地想要做某事
谋篇布局
佳作剖析
教材原文
P82...I went on a cycling trip with my friends.
P82...took some great photos.
P87 I was very tired when I came back home, but it was worth it.
P90 It was a great chance to be close to nature.
P82 I can’t wait to do it again.
优秀范文
My favourite outdoor activity
My favourite outdoor activity is cycling. I can not only exercise but also① take in fresh air and enjoy beautiful views.
Last Saturday I went on a cycling trip with my friends. We set off early in the morning. We cycled along a river for two hours. The sun was shining, and the birds were singing.② We laughed a lot and took some great photos.
I was very tired when I came back home, but it was worth it. It was a great chance to be close to nature. I can’t wait to do it again.③
亮点评析
①使用高级词汇 not only...but also...是加分项。
②恰当使用过去进行时和并列句体现作者扎实的语言基本功，是文章的亮点。
③结尾使用本单元所学句型表达感受和收获，以及对下次活动的期待。
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①get close to nature 亲近大自然 ②enjoy cycling 喜爱骑行 ③get fun from sth.从某事中获得乐趣 ④a good way to do sth.做某事的好方法 ⑤go camping 去露营 ⑥put up a tent 搭帐篷 ⑦make a fire 生火 ⑧Cycling is becoming popular.骑行正变得流行。
佳作剖析
教材原文
P82...I went on a cycling trip with my friends.
P82...took some great photos.
P87 I was very tired when I came back home, but it was worth it.
P90 It was a great chance to be close to nature.
P82 I can’t wait to do it again.
优秀范文
My favourite outdoor activity
My favourite outdoor activity is cycling. I can not only exercise but also① take in fresh air and enjoy beautiful views.
Last Saturday I went on a cycling trip with my friends. We set off early in the morning. We cycled along a river for two hours. The sun was shining, and the birds were singing.② We laughed a lot and took some great photos.
I was very tired when I came back home, but it was worth it. It was a great chance to be close to nature. I can’t wait to do it again.③
亮点评析
①使用高级词汇 not only...but also...是加分项。
②恰当使用过去进行时和并列句体现作者扎实的语言基本功，是文章的亮点。
③结尾使用本单元所学句型表达感受和收获，以及对下次活动的期待。
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①get close to nature 亲近大自然 ②enjoy cycling 喜爱骑行 ③get fun from sth.从某事中获得乐趣 ④a good way to do sth.做某事的好方法 ⑤go camping 去露营 ⑥put up a tent 搭帐篷 ⑦make a fire 生火 ⑧Cycling is becoming popular.骑行正变得流行。
写作实战
答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D40
「2025江苏扬州期末」
在过去一年的初一学习、生活中，你肯定参加过一些户外活动，像 go on a school trip、go camping、go mountain climbing 或 go cycling 等。你班将开展以“A wonderful outdoor activity”为题的英语作文比赛活动，并在班级内展示。请根据以下要求完成一篇文章。要点：
1.When and where was the activity? 2.What did you do in the activity?（至少三点）3.How did you feel about the activity?（至少两点）
注意：
1.词数不少于100，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2.内容必须包括但不限于已给出的要点，可以适当发挥，使短文完整、流畅。
3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
A wonderful outdoor activity
Time flies by quickly. In the past year, I took part in many wonderful outdoor activities.
Last Sunday, I went to the Wetland Park with my classmates. We met at the school gate at 8:00 a.m. and took a bus there.
When we arrived, we first put up the tents. Then some of us carried water from the lake and made a fire for lunch. After lunch, we went boating. In the evening, we sat around the campfire, singing and dancing. We saw lots of stars in the sky.
This activity made me feel the beauty of nature. Also, I got closer to my classmates. It was really an amazing outdoor experience. I can't wait to do it again.
答案
1. 第一段：My favourite outdoor activity is cycling.I can not only exercise but also take in fresh air and enjoy beautiful views.2. 第二段：Last Saturday I went on a cycling trip with my friends.We set off early in the morning.We cycled along a river for two hours.The sun was shining, and the birds were singing.We laughed a lot and took some great photos.3. 第三段：I was very tired when I came back home, but it was worth it.It was a great chance to be close to nature.I can't wait to do it again.
@@基础版范文A wonderful outdoor activityTime flies by quickly. In the past year, I took part in many wonderful outdoor activities. Last Sunday, I went to the Wetland Park with my classmates. We met at the school gate at 8:00 a.m. and took a bus there.When we arrived, we first put up the tents. Then some of us carried water from the lake and made a fire for lunch. After lunch, we went boating. In the evening, we sat around the campfire, singing and dancing. We saw lots of stars in the sky.This activity made me feel the beauty of nature. Also, I got closer to my classmates. It was really an amazing outdoor experience. I can't wait to do it again.进阶版范文A wonderful outdoor activityTime flies by quickly. In the past year, I took part in many wonderful outdoor activities. Last Sunday, I had an unforgettable and wonderful school trip to the Wetland Park.We arrived there early in the morning, and couldn't wait to watch different animals. I used the app on my phone to know more about them. We also watched an animal show. How amazing it was! At noon, we had a picnic. We shared our delicious food with each other. After lunch, we put up a tent on the grassland. We lay in the tent, and chatted with each other. We even smelt the flowers and heard the birds sing.This activity was interesting and it also gave us a chance to take a break from our everyday life and get close to nature. I can't wait to do it again.
@@基础版范文A wonderful outdoor activityTime flies by quickly. In the past year, I took part in many wonderful outdoor activities. Last Sunday, I went to the Wetland Park with my classmates. We met at the school gate at 8:00 a.m. and took a bus there.When we arrived, we first put up the tents. Then some of us carried water from the lake and made a fire for lunch. After lunch, we went boating. In the evening, we sat around the campfire, singing and dancing. We saw lots of stars in the sky.This activity made me feel the beauty of nature. Also, I got closer to my classmates. It was really an amazing outdoor experience. I can't wait to do it again.进阶版范文A wonderful outdoor activityTime flies by quickly. In the past year, I took part in many wonderful outdoor activities. Last Sunday, I had an unforgettable and wonderful school trip to the Wetland Park.We arrived there early in the morning, and couldn't wait to watch different animals. I used the app on my phone to know more about them. We also watched an animal show. How amazing it was! At noon, we had a picnic. We shared our delicious food with each other. After lunch, we put up a tent on the grassland. We lay in the tent, and chatted with each other. We even smelt the flowers and heard the birds sing.This activity was interesting and it also gave us a chance to take a break from our everyday life and get close to nature. I can't wait to do it again.
解析
【分析】
首先审题：体裁为记叙文，时态以一般过去时为主，人称用第一人称；需包含活动的时间地点、至少三项活动内容、至少两点感受，词数不少于100，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 确定具体户外活动（如湿地公园露营），明确时间、地点和参与人员；2. 用连接词串联活动过程，列举至少三项具体内容；3. 表达至少两点活动感受，呼应主题。
【解析】
第一步：补充活动基本信息，如时间（Last Sunday）、地点（the Wetland Park）、参与人员（classmates）及集合交通细节；
第二步：按顺序描述活动过程，用first、then等连接词，列举搭帐篷、生火做饭、划船等至少三项具体活动；
第三步：表达活动感受，如亲近自然、增进同学友谊，最后呼应主题，确保时态为一般过去时，语言流畅。
【答案】
A wonderful outdoor activity
Time flies by quickly. In the past year, I took part in many wonderful outdoor activities. Last Sunday, I went to the Wetland Park with my classmates. We met at the school gate at 8:00 a.m. and took a bus there.
When we arrived, we first put up the tents. Then some of us carried water from the lake and made a fire for lunch. After lunch, we went boating. In the evening, we sat around the campfire, singing and dancing. We saw lots of stars in the sky.
This activity made me feel the beauty of nature. Also, I got closer to my classmates. It was really an amazing outdoor experience. I can't wait to do it again.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般过去时运用、户外活动词汇
【点评】
作文紧扣题目要点，包含活动时间地点、具体内容及两点感受，时态正确，语言流畅，有适当发挥，符合要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先审题：体裁为记叙文，时态以一般过去时为主，人称用第一人称；需包含活动的时间地点、至少三项活动内容、至少两点感受，词数不少于100，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 确定具体户外活动（如湿地公园露营），明确时间、地点和参与人员；2. 用连接词串联活动过程，列举至少三项具体内容；3. 表达至少两点活动感受，呼应主题。
【解析】
第一步：补充活动基本信息，如时间（Last Sunday）、地点（the Wetland Park）、参与人员（classmates）及集合交通细节；
第二步：按顺序描述活动过程，用first、then等连接词，列举搭帐篷、生火做饭、划船等至少三项具体活动；
第三步：表达活动感受，如亲近自然、增进同学友谊，最后呼应主题，确保时态为一般过去时，语言流畅。
【答案】
A wonderful outdoor activity
Time flies by quickly. In the past year, I took part in many wonderful outdoor activities. Last Sunday, I went to the Wetland Park with my classmates. We met at the school gate at 8:00 a.m. and took a bus there.
When we arrived, we first put up the tents. Then some of us carried water from the lake and made a fire for lunch. After lunch, we went boating. In the evening, we sat around the campfire, singing and dancing. We saw lots of stars in the sky.
This activity made me feel the beauty of nature. Also, I got closer to my classmates. It was really an amazing outdoor experience. I can't wait to do it again.
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、一般过去时运用、户外活动词汇
【点评】
作文紧扣题目要点，包含活动时间地点、具体内容及两点感受，时态正确，语言流畅，有适当发挥，符合要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
