第三部分 书面表达
在运动中,我们总能感受到一种强大的力量。它或许是比赛落后时队友的鼓励,是筋疲力尽时坚持到底的决心,是团队协作中彼此支撑的温暖……我校英语社团正在组织“The Spirit of Sports”英文故事征集活动,请你以此为题,分享一次在运动中感受到力量与成长的经历。提示:
1. What sport did you take part in?
2. What challenge did you face?
3. Who encouraged you, or how did you show your spirit?
4. What did you learn from this experience?
要求:1. 不少于80词(首段已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 必须包含提示中的所有信息,可适当添加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
The Spirit of Sports
Sports are more than just games. They teach us important lessons about courage, teamwork, and never giving up. I once had an experience that made me truly understand the spirit of sports.
在运动中,我们总能感受到一种强大的力量。它或许是比赛落后时队友的鼓励,是筋疲力尽时坚持到底的决心,是团队协作中彼此支撑的温暖……我校英语社团正在组织“The Spirit of Sports”英文故事征集活动,请你以此为题,分享一次在运动中感受到力量与成长的经历。提示:
1. What sport did you take part in?
2. What challenge did you face?
3. Who encouraged you, or how did you show your spirit?
4. What did you learn from this experience?
要求:1. 不少于80词(首段已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 必须包含提示中的所有信息,可适当添加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
The Spirit of Sports
Sports are more than just games. They teach us important lessons about courage, teamwork, and never giving up. I once had an experience that made me truly understand the spirit of sports.
答案
Last year, I took part in the 1000-meter race at the school sports meeting. I ran smoothly at the beginning, but after I covered half the distance, I felt extremely tired and my legs hurt badly. I could hardly hold on and planned to quit the race.
Just then, all my classmates standing by the track shouted my name loudly and cheered for me. Their eyes were full of trust. I told myself I should never give up, so I moved forward step by step with my last strength, and finally crossed the finish line.
I didn't win any award that day, but I truly understood the spirit of sports. It is not just about getting prizes. It is the courage to stick to the end when you are almost worn out, and the warm power of support from people around you.
Just then, all my classmates standing by the track shouted my name loudly and cheered for me. Their eyes were full of trust. I told myself I should never give up, so I moved forward step by step with my last strength, and finally crossed the finish line.
I didn't win any award that day, but I truly understood the spirit of sports. It is not just about getting prizes. It is the courage to stick to the end when you are almost worn out, and the warm power of support from people around you.
解析
这是一篇叙事类主题英语作文,写作时需注意:
1. 严格覆盖题干给出的全部4个提示要点:先清晰交代自己参与的运动项目,再描述过程中遇到的具体挑战,接着说明获得的外界鼓励以及自己践行体育精神的过程,最后点明经历带来的成长感悟。
2. 选用七年级已掌握的基础词汇和句式,避免超纲表达,适当补充细节让故事逻辑连贯,总词数满足不少于80词的要求,不出现真实姓名和校名,贴合"The Spirit of Sports"的主题。
1. 严格覆盖题干给出的全部4个提示要点:先清晰交代自己参与的运动项目,再描述过程中遇到的具体挑战,接着说明获得的外界鼓励以及自己践行体育精神的过程,最后点明经历带来的成长感悟。
2. 选用七年级已掌握的基础词汇和句式,避免超纲表达,适当补充细节让故事逻辑连贯,总词数满足不少于80词的要求,不出现真实姓名和校名,贴合"The Spirit of Sports"的主题。
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