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七、书面表达(共1大题,满分20分)
友谊是宝贵的财富。学校英语社团将举办以“Friendship”为主题的征文活动,请你根据以下内容提示写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对友谊的看法。
What do you have in common with your best friend?
What are the differences between you and your best friend?
What is your idea about friendship?
Write something more about your friendship.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右(开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
Friends are important in our lives.
友谊是宝贵的财富。学校英语社团将举办以“Friendship”为主题的征文活动,请你根据以下内容提示写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对友谊的看法。
What do you have in common with your best friend?
What are the differences between you and your best friend?
What is your idea about friendship?
Write something more about your friendship.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右(开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
Friends are important in our lives.
答案
Friends are important in our lives. My best friend and I have a lot in common. We both love reading and often exchange book-reading experiences. Also, we're crazy about basketball and enjoy playing together on weekends.
However, we do have differences. He's more outgoing and talkative, while I'm a bit quieter. He's better at maths, and I'm stronger in English.
In my opinion, friendship means accepting each other's strengths and weaknesses. It's about sharing joys and sorrows. True friends support and encourage one another. No matter how different we are, as long as we respect and care for each other, our friendship will last forever.
However, we do have differences. He's more outgoing and talkative, while I'm a bit quieter. He's better at maths, and I'm stronger in English.
In my opinion, friendship means accepting each other's strengths and weaknesses. It's about sharing joys and sorrows. True friends support and encourage one another. No matter how different we are, as long as we respect and care for each other, our friendship will last forever.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“Friendship”为主题写英语短文，需包含三个核心要点：与好友的共同点、与好友的不同点、对友谊的看法，还需补充相关内容，词数100左右且开头已给出。解题思路：1. 先选取贴近学生生活的共同点（如共同爱好），让内容真实自然；2. 再列举具体的不同点（如性格、学科优势），符合题目要求；3. 接着围绕友谊的核心内涵（接纳、支持、分享）阐述个人看法；4. 最后检查是否符合词数、不透露个人信息的要求，确保语言通顺。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，点明与好友的共同点：My best friend and I have a lot in common. We both love reading and often exchange book-reading experiences. Also, we're crazy about basketball and enjoy playing together on weekends.
2. 用转折词引出不同点：However, we do have differences. He's more outgoing and talkative, while I'm a bit quieter. He's better at maths, and I'm stronger in English.
3. 阐述对友谊的看法：In my opinion, friendship means accepting each other's strengths and weaknesses. It's about sharing joys and sorrows. True friends support and encourage one another.
4. 补充收尾，升华主题：No matter how different we are, as long as we respect and care for each other, our friendship will last forever.
【答案】
Friends are important in our lives. My best friend and I have a lot in common. We both love reading and often exchange book-reading experiences. Also, we're crazy about basketball and enjoy playing together on weekends.
However, we do have differences. He's more outgoing and talkative, while I'm a bit quieter. He's better at maths, and I'm stronger in English.
In my opinion, friendship means accepting each other's strengths and weaknesses. It's about sharing joys and sorrows. True friends support and encourage one another. No matter how different we are, as long as we respect and care for each other, our friendship will last forever.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、英语话题作文写作
【点评】
本题为初中英语典型的话题书面表达题，要求明确，要点清晰，既考查学生对友谊主题的理解，又考查英语语言的组织与运用能力，学生需紧扣提示要点，结合合理想象，做到语言通顺、要点齐全、符合词数要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以“Friendship”为主题写英语短文，需包含三个核心要点：与好友的共同点、与好友的不同点、对友谊的看法，还需补充相关内容，词数100左右且开头已给出。解题思路：1. 先选取贴近学生生活的共同点（如共同爱好），让内容真实自然；2. 再列举具体的不同点（如性格、学科优势），符合题目要求；3. 接着围绕友谊的核心内涵（接纳、支持、分享）阐述个人看法；4. 最后检查是否符合词数、不透露个人信息的要求，确保语言通顺。
【解析】
1. 承接开头，点明与好友的共同点：My best friend and I have a lot in common. We both love reading and often exchange book-reading experiences. Also, we're crazy about basketball and enjoy playing together on weekends.
2. 用转折词引出不同点：However, we do have differences. He's more outgoing and talkative, while I'm a bit quieter. He's better at maths, and I'm stronger in English.
3. 阐述对友谊的看法：In my opinion, friendship means accepting each other's strengths and weaknesses. It's about sharing joys and sorrows. True friends support and encourage one another.
4. 补充收尾，升华主题：No matter how different we are, as long as we respect and care for each other, our friendship will last forever.
【答案】
Friends are important in our lives. My best friend and I have a lot in common. We both love reading and often exchange book-reading experiences. Also, we're crazy about basketball and enjoy playing together on weekends.
However, we do have differences. He's more outgoing and talkative, while I'm a bit quieter. He's better at maths, and I'm stronger in English.
In my opinion, friendship means accepting each other's strengths and weaknesses. It's about sharing joys and sorrows. True friends support and encourage one another. No matter how different we are, as long as we respect and care for each other, our friendship will last forever.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、英语话题作文写作
【点评】
本题为初中英语典型的话题书面表达题，要求明确，要点清晰，既考查学生对友谊主题的理解，又考查英语语言的组织与运用能力，学生需紧扣提示要点，结合合理想象，做到语言通顺、要点齐全、符合词数要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
