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七、书面表达(共1大题,满分20分)
每位中学生都对未来怀有美好的憧憬,你的梦想是什么呢? 请你根据以下内容提示,以"My Dream"为题写一篇英语短文,介绍你的梦想。
What do you want to be in the future?
Why do you have such a dream?
How can you achieve your dream?
Write something more about your dream.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右(标题和开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
My Dream
I want to be a(n) in the future.
每位中学生都对未来怀有美好的憧憬,你的梦想是什么呢? 请你根据以下内容提示,以"My Dream"为题写一篇英语短文,介绍你的梦想。
What do you want to be in the future?
Why do you have such a dream?
How can you achieve your dream?
Write something more about your dream.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右(标题和开头已给出的词不计入总词数)。
My Dream
I want to be a(n) in the future.
答案
[参考范文]
My Dream
I want to be a scientist in the future. I have this dream because I love learning about how things work in science class. Also, I want to solve environmental problems and invent helpful technologies to make the world cleaner and healthier.
To achieve my goal, I will study hard, especially in science and maths. I’ll join science clubs, read more books, and ask teachers for advice. Most importantly, I’ll stay curious and never give up when facing challenges.
By working step by step and keeping on learning, I believe I can make my dream come true!
My Dream
I want to be a scientist in the future. I have this dream because I love learning about how things work in science class. Also, I want to solve environmental problems and invent helpful technologies to make the world cleaner and healthier.
To achieve my goal, I will study hard, especially in science and maths. I’ll join science clubs, read more books, and ask teachers for advice. Most importantly, I’ll stay curious and never give up when facing challenges.
By working step by step and keeping on learning, I believe I can make my dream come true!
解析
【分析】
解题思路：首先明确题目要求，围绕“My Dream”主题，需涵盖未来职业、梦想原因、实现方法及补充内容四部分。第一步，确定具体职业（如科学家）；第二步，结合自身兴趣（如热爱科学课）和社会需求（如解决环境问题）说明原因；第三步，列举实现梦想的具体行动（如努力学习理科、参加科学社团等）；第四步，总结信念，确保语言流畅、词数符合要求且不透露个人信息。
【解析】
My Dream
I want to be a scientist in the future. I have this dream because I love learning about how things work in science class. Also, I want to solve environmental problems and invent helpful technologies to make the world cleaner and healthier.
To achieve my goal, I will study hard, especially in science and maths. I’ll join science clubs, read more books, and ask teachers for advice. Most importantly, I’ll stay curious and never give up when facing challenges.
By working step by step and keeping on learning, I believe I can make my dream come true!
【答案】
My Dream
I want to be a scientist in the future. I have this dream because I love learning about how things work in science class. Also, I want to solve environmental problems and invent helpful technologies to make the world cleaner and healthier.
To achieve my goal, I will study hard, especially in science and maths. I’ll join science clubs, read more books, and ask teachers for advice. Most importantly, I’ll stay curious and never give up when facing challenges.
By working step by step and keeping on learning, I believe I can make my dream come true!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、梦想话题写作、理由与措施阐述
【点评】
本文紧扣题目所有要点，结构清晰，语言通顺，内容积极向上，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的英语书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
解题思路：首先明确题目要求，围绕“My Dream”主题，需涵盖未来职业、梦想原因、实现方法及补充内容四部分。第一步，确定具体职业（如科学家）；第二步，结合自身兴趣（如热爱科学课）和社会需求（如解决环境问题）说明原因；第三步，列举实现梦想的具体行动（如努力学习理科、参加科学社团等）；第四步，总结信念，确保语言流畅、词数符合要求且不透露个人信息。
【解析】
My Dream
I want to be a scientist in the future. I have this dream because I love learning about how things work in science class. Also, I want to solve environmental problems and invent helpful technologies to make the world cleaner and healthier.
To achieve my goal, I will study hard, especially in science and maths. I’ll join science clubs, read more books, and ask teachers for advice. Most importantly, I’ll stay curious and never give up when facing challenges.
By working step by step and keeping on learning, I believe I can make my dream come true!
【答案】
My Dream
I want to be a scientist in the future. I have this dream because I love learning about how things work in science class. Also, I want to solve environmental problems and invent helpful technologies to make the world cleaner and healthier.
To achieve my goal, I will study hard, especially in science and maths. I’ll join science clubs, read more books, and ask teachers for advice. Most importantly, I’ll stay curious and never give up when facing challenges.
By working step by step and keeping on learning, I believe I can make my dream come true!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、梦想话题写作、理由与措施阐述
【点评】
本文紧扣题目所有要点，结构清晰，语言通顺，内容积极向上，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的英语书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
