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七、书面表达(共1大题,满分20分)
如果你是李华,你所组建的社团计划在寒假期间设计并制作飞机模型,学校里一名来自英国的同学Eric有意参与。请你根据以下内容提示写一封英文信,从社团活动时间、活动内容和活动意义等方面,向Eric介绍社团的情况。
When will the club start during winter vacation?
What will you do in the club?
Why did you start the club?
Write something more about the club.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出的词不计入总词数)。
Dear Eric,
How is everything going?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
如果你是李华,你所组建的社团计划在寒假期间设计并制作飞机模型,学校里一名来自英国的同学Eric有意参与。请你根据以下内容提示写一封英文信,从社团活动时间、活动内容和活动意义等方面,向Eric介绍社团的情况。
When will the club start during winter vacation?
What will you do in the club?
Why did you start the club?
Write something more about the club.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出的词不计入总词数)。
Dear Eric,
How is everything going?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
[参考范文]
Dear Eric,
How is everything going?
I'm happy to know that you're interested in model aeroplane. And I'm writing to tell you about the exciting project in my club during the winter vacation.
As for the schedule, it will start from the first day of the winter holiday and last for one week. In the morning, we will get together at the school gate at 9:00 a.m. And then we'll stay in the club room till 4:00 p.m. At noon, we'll have lunch in the school dining hall.
In the club, we are going to design and build model aeroplane. I'm sure that it would be a great chance to improve our skills as we share our ideas along the way. It will also inspire us a lot and bring us together.
The winter project of the club will mean much to us all if you can join us.
Look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Eric,
How is everything going?
I'm happy to know that you're interested in model aeroplane. And I'm writing to tell you about the exciting project in my club during the winter vacation.
As for the schedule, it will start from the first day of the winter holiday and last for one week. In the morning, we will get together at the school gate at 9:00 a.m. And then we'll stay in the club room till 4:00 p.m. At noon, we'll have lunch in the school dining hall.
In the club, we are going to design and build model aeroplane. I'm sure that it would be a great chance to improve our skills as we share our ideas along the way. It will also inspire us a lot and bring us together.
The winter project of the club will mean much to us all if you can join us.
Look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】本题要求以李华的身份给英国同学Eric写一封英文信，需围绕社团活动时间、活动内容、活动意义及补充社团相关信息展开。写作时，首先要回应Eric对社团的兴趣，接着清晰说明活动时间、活动内容、活动意义，最后表达邀请并期待回复，同时需注意词数要求和英文书信格式。
【解析】按照英文书信的标准结构，先点明写信目的，再依次介绍活动时间、活动内容、活动意义，补充社团的价值，最后发出邀请与期待。写作时使用准确的时间表达、活动描述，符合书信的友好语气，控制词数在要求范围内，不透露个人真实信息。
【答案】Dear Eric,
How is everything going?
I'm happy to know that you're interested in model aeroplane. And I'm writing to tell you about the exciting project in my club during the winter vacation.
As for the schedule, it will start from the first day of the winter holiday and last for one week. In the morning, we will get together at the school gate at 9:00 a.m. And then we'll stay in the club room till 4:00 p.m. At noon, we'll have lunch in the school dining hall.
In the club, we are going to design and build model aeroplane. I'm sure that it would be a great chance to improve our skills as we share our ideas along the way. It will also inspire us a lot and bring us together.
The winter project of the club will mean much to us all if you can join us.
Look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、英文应用文写作
【点评】本题为英语书面表达题，贴近学生校园生活，提示明确，考查学生整合信息、运用英文句式完成应用文写作的能力，是常见的基础写作题型，能有效检验学生的英语综合运用水平。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】按照英文书信的标准结构，先点明写信目的，再依次介绍活动时间、活动内容、活动意义，补充社团的价值，最后发出邀请与期待。写作时使用准确的时间表达、活动描述，符合书信的友好语气，控制词数在要求范围内，不透露个人真实信息。
【答案】Dear Eric,
How is everything going?
I'm happy to know that you're interested in model aeroplane. And I'm writing to tell you about the exciting project in my club during the winter vacation.
As for the schedule, it will start from the first day of the winter holiday and last for one week. In the morning, we will get together at the school gate at 9:00 a.m. And then we'll stay in the club room till 4:00 p.m. At noon, we'll have lunch in the school dining hall.
In the club, we are going to design and build model aeroplane. I'm sure that it would be a great chance to improve our skills as we share our ideas along the way. It will also inspire us a lot and bring us together.
The winter project of the club will mean much to us all if you can join us.
Look forward to your reply.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、英文应用文写作
【点评】本题为英语书面表达题，贴近学生校园生活，提示明确，考查学生整合信息、运用英文句式完成应用文写作的能力，是常见的基础写作题型，能有效检验学生的英语综合运用水平。
【难度系数】0.5
