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[开头句]
1. As a result, we soon died out. （指出问题）
2. But these years the number of frogs is becoming smaller and smaller. （揭示危机）
[中间句]
1. Over the years, he saved many lives. （人物行为）
2. We should keep enough living areas for frogs and shouldn't catch frogs. （提出建议）
[结尾句]
1. Let's try our best to save animals in danger! （发出呼吁）
2. The world is full of fantastic animals. Please try your best to help them. （呼吁行动）
[名言警句]
1. Love me. Love my dog. 爱屋及乌。
2. The early bird catches the worm. 早起的鸟儿有虫吃。
写作演练＞＞
如今有很多野生动物濒临灭绝，我们应该拯救它们，创造一个人与自然和谐共处的美好未来。请根据提示写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示：1. 为什么有些野生动物濒临灭绝？
2. 为什么保护野生动物很重要？3. 我们应该如何保护它们？
[思路点拨]
1. 时态:以一般现在时为主;2. 人称:以第一人称为主;3. 写作时:第一段开篇点题,介绍野生动物生存现状及原因;第二段详细介绍动物的重要性及保护措施;第三段表达期待。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
[开头句]
1. As a result, we soon died out. （指出问题）
2. But these years the number of frogs is becoming smaller and smaller. （揭示危机）
[中间句]
1. Over the years, he saved many lives. （人物行为）
2. We should keep enough living areas for frogs and shouldn't catch frogs. （提出建议）
[结尾句]
1. Let's try our best to save animals in danger! （发出呼吁）
2. The world is full of fantastic animals. Please try your best to help them. （呼吁行动）
[名言警句]
1. Love me. Love my dog. 爱屋及乌。
2. The early bird catches the worm. 早起的鸟儿有虫吃。
写作演练＞＞
如今有很多野生动物濒临灭绝，我们应该拯救它们，创造一个人与自然和谐共处的美好未来。请根据提示写一篇80词左右的短文。
提示：1. 为什么有些野生动物濒临灭绝？
2. 为什么保护野生动物很重要？3. 我们应该如何保护它们？
[思路点拨]
1. 时态:以一般现在时为主;2. 人称:以第一人称为主;3. 写作时:第一段开篇点题,介绍野生动物生存现状及原因;第二段详细介绍动物的重要性及保护措施;第三段表达期待。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
（更多精彩作文素材见“强基手册”）
答案
One possible version:
There are many wild animals in danger around the world, such as tigers and pandas. Because people cut down forests, tigers and pandas have no place to live. And people kill wild animals for their fur.
We can't live without the animals around us, so protecting wild animals is very important. We must protect all kinds of animals in danger. We must do something to stop some people from killing wild animals. We should try to let them live in peace.
If each of us can plant more trees and stop polluting the water, the world will be more beautiful. The animals' life will be better, too.
There are many wild animals in danger around the world, such as tigers and pandas. Because people cut down forests, tigers and pandas have no place to live. And people kill wild animals for their fur.
We can't live without the animals around us, so protecting wild animals is very important. We must protect all kinds of animals in danger. We must do something to stop some people from killing wild animals. We should try to let them live in peace.
If each of us can plant more trees and stop polluting the water, the world will be more beautiful. The animals' life will be better, too.
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一篇关于保护濒危野生动物的英语短文，需分三段完成：第一段点明野生动物濒危的现状及原因；第二段说明保护野生动物的重要性并提出保护措施；第三段发出呼吁并表达美好期待。写作时需以一般现在时为主，覆盖题目给出的三个提示问题，控制词数在80左右，语言准确流畅。
【解析】
1. 第一段：开篇点题，列举老虎、熊猫等濒危动物，说明濒危原因（人类砍伐森林使其无家可归、为皮毛猎杀它们），对应提示1；
2. 第二段：阐述保护野生动物的重要性（人类离不开它们），提出具体保护措施（阻止猎杀、保护动物生存空间），对应提示2；
3. 第三段：呼吁大家行动（种树、不污染水源），表达对美好未来的期待，对应提示3。整体结构清晰，符合初中英语写作规范。
【答案】
One possible version:
There are many wild animals in danger around the world, such as tigers and pandas. Because people cut down forests, tigers and pandas have no place to live. And people kill wild animals for their fur.
We can't live without the animals around us, so protecting wild animals is very important. We must protect all kinds of animals in danger. We must do something to stop some people from killing wild animals. We should try to let them live in peace.
If each of us can plant more trees and stop polluting the water, the world will be more beautiful. The animals' life will be better, too.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时运用、保护野生动物话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，分三段对应提示的三个问题，语言准确流畅，符合初中英语写作的要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求写一篇关于保护濒危野生动物的英语短文，需分三段完成：第一段点明野生动物濒危的现状及原因；第二段说明保护野生动物的重要性并提出保护措施；第三段发出呼吁并表达美好期待。写作时需以一般现在时为主，覆盖题目给出的三个提示问题，控制词数在80左右，语言准确流畅。
【解析】
1. 第一段：开篇点题，列举老虎、熊猫等濒危动物，说明濒危原因（人类砍伐森林使其无家可归、为皮毛猎杀它们），对应提示1；
2. 第二段：阐述保护野生动物的重要性（人类离不开它们），提出具体保护措施（阻止猎杀、保护动物生存空间），对应提示2；
3. 第三段：呼吁大家行动（种树、不污染水源），表达对美好未来的期待，对应提示3。整体结构清晰，符合初中英语写作规范。
【答案】
One possible version:
There are many wild animals in danger around the world, such as tigers and pandas. Because people cut down forests, tigers and pandas have no place to live. And people kill wild animals for their fur.
We can't live without the animals around us, so protecting wild animals is very important. We must protect all kinds of animals in danger. We must do something to stop some people from killing wild animals. We should try to let them live in peace.
If each of us can plant more trees and stop polluting the water, the world will be more beautiful. The animals' life will be better, too.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时运用、保护野生动物话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，分三段对应提示的三个问题，语言准确流畅，符合初中英语写作的要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
