典型例题
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Lisa 给你写信,想请你推荐一首中国民歌。请根据以下提示写一封不少于80词的回信,介绍你最喜欢的民歌《好一朵美丽的茉莉花》(What a Beautiful Jasmine),并谈谈你对这首歌曲的感受。
提示:世界经典民歌(classical folk song)之一;源自《鲜花调》(Xianhuadiao),被传唱了几百年;1942年,14岁的何仿加工整理成《好一朵美丽的茉莉花》;国内外重要场合(occasion)必奏曲,香港、澳门回归时演奏。
【写作步骤】
Step 1 审题立意
审体裁——应用文
审时态——一般过去时、一般现在时
审人称——第一人称、第三人称
Step 2 写作提纲

Dear Lisa,
I'm glad to get your letter. You told me you wanted to know about a Chinese folk song, now let me tell you something about my favorite one, *What a Beautiful Jasmine*.
It is one of the world's famous classical folk songs. The song came from an old folk tune called Xianhuadiao, and it has been sung by people for hundreds of years. In 1942, 14-year-old He Fang processed and sorted it into the song we enjoy today. Now the song is often played on all kinds of important occasions at home and abroad, and it was even performed when Hong Kong and Macao returned to China.
The song sounds so sweet and peaceful that every time I listen to it, I feel really relaxed and happy. Why not search for it online and listen to it? I'm sure you will like it.
Yours,
Li Hua

【分析】本题是给英国笔友Lisa的回信，任务是推荐中国民歌。首先要明确写作结构：开头需点明写信意图，告知对方要介绍自己喜欢的民歌；中间部分要详细介绍《好一朵美丽的茉莉花》的相关信息，包括它的地位、来源、创作者、演奏场合，需结合提示内容；结尾要表达对歌曲的感受并推荐对方聆听。同时要注意时态（介绍歌曲现状用一般现在时，创作历史用一般过去时）、人称（第一人称和第三人称），符合书信格式，词数达标。
【解析】1. 审题：确定体裁为书信（应用文），时态结合一般现在时（介绍歌曲情况）和一般过去时（介绍创作事件），人称用第一人称（写信者视角）和第三人称（介绍歌曲）。2. 写作：①开头：用“Now let me tell you something about...”点明写作意图，引出推荐的民歌《好一朵美丽的茉莉花》；②中间：依次介绍歌曲是世界经典民歌，源自《鲜花调》，1942年14岁的何仿整理而成，在国内外重要场合（如港澳回归）演奏，涵盖所有提示信息；③结尾：用“so...that...”表达自己听歌曲的感受，用“Why not...?”推荐对方搜索聆听，符合要求。3. 检查：确保词数不少于80，语句通顺，信息完整。
【答案】
Dear Lisa,
I'm glad to get your letter. You told me you wanted to know about a Chinese folk song, now let me tell you something about my favorite one, *What a Beautiful Jasmine*.
It is one of the world's famous classical folk songs. The song came from an old folk tune called Xianhuadiao, and it has been sung by people for hundreds of years. In 1942, 14-year-old He Fang processed and sorted it into the song we enjoy today. Now the song is often played on all kinds of important occasions at home and abroad, and it was even performed when Hong Kong and Macao returned to China.
The song sounds so sweet and peaceful that every time I listen to it, I feel really relaxed and happy. Why not search for it online and listen to it? I'm sure you will like it.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】英语书信写作、英语应用文表达
【点评】本题考查英语应用文写作能力，要求学生结合给定的思维导图结构和提示信息完成书信，需掌握书信基本格式、相关英语表达，准确传递民歌相关信息，是初中英语写作的典型题型，注重语言运用的实用性。
【难度系数】0.5

Step 3 范文点睛
Dear Lisa,
Glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about my favourite song.
What a Beautiful Jasmine is my favourite folk song. ①. The song came from Xianhuadiao, which has been sung for centuries. ②. After that, people of all ages loved to sing it. ③. For example, when Hong Kong and Macao returned to China, it was played. ④. I always listen to the song in my free time. It can make me relaxed. ⑤?
Yours,
Li Hua

①用“one of...”结构来表达这首民歌是世界经典民歌之一。
②用非限制性定语从句介绍这首民歌的创作时间和创作人。
③用被动语态说明这首民歌是国内外重要场合的常用曲目。
④用“so...that...”结构表达这首民歌甜美、柔和，很受欢迎。
⑤用“Why not...?”句型推荐Lisa来听这首民歌。

① It is one of the classical folk songs around the world
② In 1942, He Fang, who was 14 years old, made up the song
③ The song is often played on some important occasions at home and abroad by Chinese
④ The song sounds so sweet and soft that it is very popular
⑤ Why not enjoy the beautiful song

【分析】
本题为英语书信补全题，需结合右侧给出的句型要求与《茉莉花》的相关常识，在对应位置填入符合语法和语境的内容。解题思路为：①空用“one of...”结构表达歌曲是世界经典民歌之一；②空用非限制性定语从句介绍创作时间和创作者；③空用被动语态说明其在国内外重要场合的使用情况；④空用“so...that...”结构描述歌曲特点及受欢迎程度；⑤空用“Why not...?”句型推荐对方听这首歌。
【解析】
① 按照要求用“one of...”结构，结合常识，《茉莉花》是世界经典民歌之一，故填It is one of the classical folk songs around the world；
② 按照要求用非限制性定语从句介绍创作时间和创作者，《茉莉花》由何仿1942年创作，当时14岁，故填In 1942, He Fang, who was 14 years old, made up the song；
③ 按照要求用被动语态说明是国内外重要场合常用曲目，故填The song is often played on some important occasions at home and abroad by Chinese；
④ 按照要求用“so...that...”结构，描述歌曲甜美柔和且受欢迎，故填The song sounds so sweet and soft that it is very popular；
⑤ 按照要求用“Why not...?”句型推荐，故填Why not enjoy the beautiful song。
【答案】
① It is one of the classical folk songs around the world
② In 1942, He Fang, who was 14 years old, made up the song
③ The song is often played on some important occasions at home and abroad by Chinese
④ The song sounds so sweet and soft that it is very popular
⑤ Why not enjoy the beautiful song
【知识点】
英语句型运用、非限制性定语从句、被动语态
【点评】
本题结合英语书信写作，考查学生对特定句型结构的掌握与运用能力，同时融入中国民歌《茉莉花》的文化常识，既落实语法知识，又强调语言实际运用，贴近生活实际。
【难度系数】
0.3