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假设你是Dave,由于父母的工作变动,两年前随父母来到了中国,你想给祖父母写一封信,描述你到中国后的各种变化。请你根据表格内容和要求完成这封信。
审主题 审人称:以第一人称为主
审时态①:一般过去时 审时态②:一般现在时
审要点
| | In England (used to) | In China (now) |
| --- | --- | --- |
| Free Time | talk with you; happy |
parents are always busy |
| Breakfast | have bread and milk; delicious | be used to eating noodles and eggs; make me stronger |
| Sports | not play ball games; boring | be interested in; play basketball; fun |
要求:1.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;2.词数80—100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear grandparents,
Yours,
Dave
写作支架
开头 — 问好并表达思念：How’s everything going? It has been since , and I .
中间 — 具体描述到中国后的变化：
空闲时间：I used to when I was free. That made me feel . But now I have nobody to talk with at home because .（高分句式1）
早饭：My eating habits have changed too. I used to for breakfast in
nd. I thought they . But now I . They make me .
运动：As for sports, I didn’t use to . I always thought they were .（高分句式2）But now I am interested in . It’s fun to play with friends after school.
结尾 — 总结并表达祝福：That’s all I want to share with you. Wish you happy and healthy.
优秀范文
Dear grandparents,
How’s everything going? It has been two years since I last saw you, and I miss you so much.
I used to¹ talk with you when I was free. That made me feel very happy. But now I have nobody to talk with at home because my parents are always busy².
My eating habits have changed too. I used to¹ have bread and milk for breakfast in England. I thought they were delicious³. But now I am used to eating noodles and eggs. They make me stronger than before.
As for sports, I didn’t use to¹ play ball games. I always thought they were boring and not my cup of tea³. But now I am interested in playing basketball. It’s fun to play with friends after school.
That’s all I want to share with you. Wish you happy and healthy.
Yours,
Dave
初中英语
九年级
全一册
人教版
亮点评析
①多次使用 used to 结构,描述过去的情况,突出了“过去与现在的变化”这一核心主题。
②用 because 引导的原因状语从句解释在家无人可交谈的原因,使整个表达更有逻辑性。
③使用宾语从句有助于表达详细信息,使整个表达层次更分明、语义更连贯。
审主题 审人称:以第一人称为主
审时态①:一般过去时 审时态②:一般现在时
审要点
| | In England (used to) | In China (now) |
| --- | --- | --- |
| Free Time | talk with you; happy |
parents are always busy || Breakfast | have bread and milk; delicious | be used to eating noodles and eggs; make me stronger |
| Sports | not play ball games; boring | be interested in; play basketball; fun |
要求:1.条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;2.词数80—100,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear grandparents,
Yours,
Dave
写作支架
开头 — 问好并表达思念：How’s everything going? It has been since , and I .
中间 — 具体描述到中国后的变化：
空闲时间：I used to when I was free. That made me feel . But now I have nobody to talk with at home because .（高分句式1）
早饭：My eating habits have changed too. I used to for breakfast in
nd. I thought they . But now I . They make me .运动：As for sports, I didn’t use to . I always thought they were .（高分句式2）But now I am interested in . It’s fun to play with friends after school.
结尾 — 总结并表达祝福：That’s all I want to share with you. Wish you happy and healthy.
优秀范文
Dear grandparents,
How’s everything going? It has been two years since I last saw you, and I miss you so much.
I used to¹ talk with you when I was free. That made me feel very happy. But now I have nobody to talk with at home because my parents are always busy².
My eating habits have changed too. I used to¹ have bread and milk for breakfast in England. I thought they were delicious³. But now I am used to eating noodles and eggs. They make me stronger than before.
As for sports, I didn’t use to¹ play ball games. I always thought they were boring and not my cup of tea³. But now I am interested in playing basketball. It’s fun to play with friends after school.
That’s all I want to share with you. Wish you happy and healthy.
Yours,
Dave
初中英语
九年级
全一册
人教版
亮点评析
①多次使用 used to 结构,描述过去的情况,突出了“过去与现在的变化”这一核心主题。
②用 because 引导的原因状语从句解释在家无人可交谈的原因,使整个表达更有逻辑性。
③使用宾语从句有助于表达详细信息,使整个表达层次更分明、语义更连贯。
答案
How's everything going? It has been two years since I last saw you, and I miss you so much.
I used to talk with you when I was free. That made me feel very happy. But now I have nobody to talk with at home because my parents are always busy.
My eating habits have changed too. I used to have bread and milk for breakfast in England. I thought they were delicious. But now I am used to eating noodles and eggs. They make me stronger than before.
As for sports, I didn't use to play ball games. I always thought they were boring. But now I am interested in playing basketball. It's fun to play with friends after school.
That's all I want to share with you. Wish you happy and healthy.
Yours,
Dave
I used to talk with you when I was free. That made me feel very happy. But now I have nobody to talk with at home because my parents are always busy.
My eating habits have changed too. I used to have bread and milk for breakfast in England. I thought they were delicious. But now I am used to eating noodles and eggs. They make me stronger than before.
As for sports, I didn't use to play ball games. I always thought they were boring. But now I am interested in playing basketball. It's fun to play with friends after school.
That's all I want to share with you. Wish you happy and healthy.
Yours,
Dave
解析
本题为人教版九年级全一册的书信类主题写作，写作核心是Dave向祖父母介绍迁居中国两年后的生活变化。写作要点：① 以第一人称为叙事主体，区分时态：用一般过去时搭配used to结构描述过去在英国的生活状态，用一般现在时描述当下在中国的日常；② 紧扣表格给出的空闲时间、早餐、运动三个模块的对比信息，可适当补充细节，借助原因状语从句、宾语从句让表达更连贯有逻辑；③ 词数控制在80-100，保留题目给出的首尾内容即可。
