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同学们，故事之中总是充满奇妙和惊喜。今天给大家分享一个有趣的故事开头：主人公爱丽丝在整理奶奶房间时，发现了一个神秘的音乐盒。当她打开盒子时，房间瞬间就变样了。请你们发挥想象，用英语续写这个故事的结尾，开始动笔吧！
希望下面的问题能帮到你！
1. What colours were the fairies’ wings（精灵的翅膀）and how did those colours make the room look different?
2. When the fairies were dancing around Alice, what was going on in her mind at that moment?
3. Why did Alice want to tell her best friend about this magical thing instead of keeping it to herself completely?
The Mysterious Music Box
Alice was tidying up her grandmother’s room when she found an old music box on the dresser. It looked nice with some pretty patterns on it. When she turned it on, a soft and nice melody filled the air. And then, the room started to change.
同学们，故事之中总是充满奇妙和惊喜。今天给大家分享一个有趣的故事开头：主人公爱丽丝在整理奶奶房间时，发现了一个神秘的音乐盒。当她打开盒子时，房间瞬间就变样了。请你们发挥想象，用英语续写这个故事的结尾，开始动笔吧！
希望下面的问题能帮到你！
1. What colours were the fairies’ wings（精灵的翅膀）and how did those colours make the room look different?
2. When the fairies were dancing around Alice, what was going on in her mind at that moment?
3. Why did Alice want to tell her best friend about this magical thing instead of keeping it to herself completely?
The Mysterious Music Box
Alice was tidying up her grandmother’s room when she found an old music box on the dresser. It looked nice with some pretty patterns on it. When she turned it on, a soft and nice melody filled the air. And then, the room started to change.
答案
One possible version:
The Mysterious Music Box
The fairies’ wings were pink, purple and blue. Their colours mixed with the warm light, making the room feel even more dreamlike. As they danced around her gracefully, twirling and spinning, Alice was excited and full of wonder. She felt like she was in a real fairy tale world.
She wanted to tell her best friend as they both loved magic stories. Sharing it would bring joy. Then she put the music box away safely, hoping to relive the magic again.
The Mysterious Music Box
The fairies’ wings were pink, purple and blue. Their colours mixed with the warm light, making the room feel even more dreamlike. As they danced around her gracefully, twirling and spinning, Alice was excited and full of wonder. She felt like she was in a real fairy tale world.
She wanted to tell her best friend as they both loved magic stories. Sharing it would bring joy. Then she put the music box away safely, hoping to relive the magic again.
解析
【分析】续写时需紧扣题目给出的三个问题展开：首先描述精灵翅膀的颜色及这些颜色对房间的影响，接着刻画爱丽丝看到精灵跳舞时的心理活动，最后说明爱丽丝想告诉好友的原因，同时补充合理的后续动作（如收好音乐盒），让故事完整连贯，契合童话的奇幻氛围。
【解析】根据上述思路，结合提示问题组织语言，续写内容如下：
The fairies’ wings were pink, purple and blue. Their colours mixed with the warm light, making the room feel even more dreamlike. As they danced around her gracefully, twirling and spinning, Alice was excited and full of wonder. She felt like she was in a real fairy tale world. She wanted to tell her best friend as they both loved magic stories. Sharing it would bring joy. Then she put the music box away safely, hoping to relive the magic again.
【答案】The fairies’ wings were pink, purple and blue. Their colours mixed with the warm light, making the room feel even more dreamlike. As they danced around her gracefully, twirling and spinning, Alice was excited and full of wonder. She felt like she was in a real fairy tale world. She wanted to tell her best friend as they both loved magic stories. Sharing it would bring joy. Then she put the music box away safely, hoping to relive the magic again.
【知识点】英语故事续写、英语情景表达
【点评】该续写紧扣题目要求，清晰回应了三个提示问题，情节连贯自然，充满奇幻色彩，语言符合英语表达习惯，完整呈现了故事的后续发展。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】根据上述思路，结合提示问题组织语言，续写内容如下：
The fairies’ wings were pink, purple and blue. Their colours mixed with the warm light, making the room feel even more dreamlike. As they danced around her gracefully, twirling and spinning, Alice was excited and full of wonder. She felt like she was in a real fairy tale world. She wanted to tell her best friend as they both loved magic stories. Sharing it would bring joy. Then she put the music box away safely, hoping to relive the magic again.
【答案】The fairies’ wings were pink, purple and blue. Their colours mixed with the warm light, making the room feel even more dreamlike. As they danced around her gracefully, twirling and spinning, Alice was excited and full of wonder. She felt like she was in a real fairy tale world. She wanted to tell her best friend as they both loved magic stories. Sharing it would bring joy. Then she put the music box away safely, hoping to relive the magic again.
【知识点】英语故事续写、英语情景表达
【点评】该续写紧扣题目要求，清晰回应了三个提示问题，情节连贯自然，充满奇幻色彩，语言符合英语表达习惯，完整呈现了故事的后续发展。
【难度系数】0.6
