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五、学以致用·主题写作实战演练
假定英语课上你们正在就“课堂表现”开展同伴互评活动,下面是你的同伴张军的自我课堂表现记录(Class Record),请你根据记录内容写一篇短文,总结他五个方面的课堂表现并进行简单评价,然后就他需要改进的两个方面提出建议。
注意:1. 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
2. 词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Well done, Zhang Jun! You listened to the teacher carefully in class and
假定英语课上你们正在就“课堂表现”开展同伴互评活动,下面是你的同伴张军的自我课堂表现记录(Class Record),请你根据记录内容写一篇短文,总结他五个方面的课堂表现并进行简单评价,然后就他需要改进的两个方面提出建议。
注意:1. 短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
2. 词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Well done, Zhang Jun! You listened to the teacher carefully in class and
answered questions actively. You also worked very well in your group. That's really good.
However, you didn't ask any questions in class. You didn't take notes, either. So you need to get improved. I mean, you'd better try to ask questions in class. That will make you think more deeply. Take notes when necessary, especially the key points. They're helpful when you go over the lesson after class.
You know, good learners know the best way of learning. Try harder!
However, you didn't ask any questions in class. You didn't take notes, either. So you need to get improved. I mean, you'd better try to ask questions in class. That will make you think more deeply. Take notes when necessary, especially the key points. They're helpful when you go over the lesson after class.
You know, good learners know the best way of learning. Try harder!
答案
Well done, Zhang Jun! You listened to the teacher carefully in class and answered questions actively. You also worked very well in your group. That's really good.
However, you didn't ask any questions in class. You didn't take notes, either. So you need to get improved. I mean, you'd better try to ask questions in class. That will make you think more deeply. Take notes when necessary, especially the key points. They're helpful when you go over the lesson after class.
You know, good learners know the best way of learning. Try harder!
