写作例析
某初三年级正在开展以“How do students learn English?”为主题的讨论,请使用图表中的调查结果,用英语写一篇短文向该年级公众号投稿。
内容包括:1. 对调查结果的描述。
2. 就你的学习情况提出相关建议。

要求:80~100词(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Recently, we have carried out a survey on students' ways of learning English. Here are the results.
[审题指导]
1. 人称:以第一人称和第三人称为主
2. 时态:以一般现在时
[思路构建]

[精彩范文]
Recently, we have carried out a survey on students' ways of learning English. Here are the results.
According to the survey, 67% of the students learn English by reading English textbooks, and it is the most popular method. 18% of them prefer watching English movies, while 11% choose to listen to English songs. Only 4% of the students practice by having conversations with friends.
In my case, I like watching videos and chatting with classmates in English. I believe we should use

Recently, we have carried out a survey on students' ways of learning English. Here are the results.
According to the survey, 67% of the students learn English by reading English textbooks, and it is the most popular method. 18% of them prefer watching English movies, while 11% choose to listen to English songs. Only 4% of the students practice by having conversations with friends.
In my case, I like watching videos and chatting with classmates in English. I believe we should use different methods to improve our English, such as taking more chances to talk with partners in English, which will help us make progress in spoken English quickly.

本题要求写一篇关于学生英语学习方式调查的投稿短文，写作要点如下：1. 准确描述图表中四类学习方式对应的占比数据，清晰说明不同学习方式的受欢迎程度；2. 结合自身学习实际给出合理的英语学习建议，倡导多样化的学习方法，侧重提升口语这类普遍薄弱的能力；3. 控制总词数在80~100词，使用一般现在时，人称符合要求，语句通顺连贯。

实战演练
“书山有路勤为径，学海无涯苦作舟。”学习就像行驶的小船在水中逆流而上，需要持续不断地付出努力才能前进。英文校刊针对初三学生发起了一场题为“How can I become a good learner?”的征文活动，请写一篇英语短文投稿，综合下图所示的笔记内容，可适当拓展，分享你的学习方法和心得。

要求:80 ~100词。
How can I become a good learner?
Learning is like a journey, which can be both exciting and challenging. Here are some ways that help me study better.

How can I become a good learner?
Learning is like a journey, which can be both exciting and challenging. Here are some ways that help me study better.
First, I make a study plan. It helps me use my time wisely and remember what to do every day. Second, I try to improve my learning skills. For example, I take notes carefully in class and review them after school. I also like to study with my classmates. We share ideas and solve problems together. Besides, practice is very important. I keep doing exercises and never give up.
All in all, I believe that with good habits and hard work, everyone can become a good learner!
【思路分析】第一步:写作意图开头已给出。第二步:具体阐述写作内容。第三步:书写结语,表达心得。