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除了学习,还有什么是你特别喜爱做的事情?假设你是王乐,将你的爱好及与之相关的故事写信告诉远在美国的笔友戴维吧。
要求:1. 介绍你的爱好。2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,中心突出。3. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
[思路点拨]
1. 文体:应用文。2. 时态:以一般现在时为主。3. 人称:以第一人称和第三人称为主。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear David,
Thank you for your last letter. You asked me to tell you something about my hobby.
Would you like to tell me about your hobby?
Yours,
Wang Le
实战练笔,夯实写作功底
除了学习,还有什么是你特别喜爱做的事情?假设你是王乐,将你的爱好及与之相关的故事写信告诉远在美国的笔友戴维吧。
要求:1. 介绍你的爱好。2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,中心突出。3. 词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
[思路点拨]
1. 文体:应用文。2. 时态:以一般现在时为主。3. 人称:以第一人称和第三人称为主。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Dear David,
Thank you for your last letter. You asked me to tell you something about my hobby.
Painting is my favourite. I take an interest in painting. I like to use different colours to show the beauty of the world.
Whenever I have free time, I grab my brushes and start creating.
Sometimes I find it difficult to get the right colours, like when I try to paint a sunset's warm glow.
But I never give up. I keep practising and mixing hues until they match what's in my mind.
Now I do well in painting. It brings me pleasure and success. Each of my pictures is valuable to me.
Would you like to tell me about your hobby?
Yours,
Wang Le
答案
One possible version:
Dear David,
Thank you for your last letter. You asked me to tell you something about my hobby.
Painting is my favourite. I take an interest in painting. I like to use different colours to show the beauty of the world. Whenever I have free time, I grab my brushes and start creating. Sometimes I find it difficult to get the right colours, like when I try to paint a sunset's warm glow. But I never give up. I keep practising and mixing hues until they match what's in my mind.
Now I do well in painting. It brings me pleasure and success. Each of my pictures is valuable to me.
Would you like to tell me about your hobby?
Yours,
Wang Le
Dear David,
Thank you for your last letter. You asked me to tell you something about my hobby.
Painting is my favourite. I take an interest in painting. I like to use different colours to show the beauty of the world. Whenever I have free time, I grab my brushes and start creating. Sometimes I find it difficult to get the right colours, like when I try to paint a sunset's warm glow. But I never give up. I keep practising and mixing hues until they match what's in my mind.
Now I do well in painting. It brings me pleasure and success. Each of my pictures is valuable to me.
Would you like to tell me about your hobby?
Yours,
Wang Le
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书信写作题，任务是给笔友戴维介绍自己的爱好，已给出书信开头，需结合思维导图的三个模块（开篇点题、叙述爱好、收获）完成内容。需以一般现在时为主，第一人称叙述，使用题目给出的相关句型，确保语句通顺、中心突出，词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题已给出“You asked me to tell you something about my hobby”，接下来用“Painting is my favourite”明确爱好；
2. 叙述爱好部分，用“I take an interest in painting”引出爱好，再用“I like to use different colours to show the beauty of the world”说明爱好的具体内容，补充日常创作的细节，再用“Sometimes I find it difficult to get the right colours, like when I try to paint a sunset's warm glow”写出遇到的困难；
3. 收获部分，用“Now I do well in painting”说明进步，再用“It brings me pleasure and success”写出爱好带来的收获，最后连贯语句，确保内容连贯、符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear David,
Thank you for your last letter. You asked me to tell you something about my hobby.
Painting is my favourite. I take an interest in painting. I like to use different colours to show the beauty of the world. Whenever I have free time, I grab my brushes and start creating. Sometimes I find it difficult to get the right colours, like when I try to paint a sunset's warm glow. But I never give up. I keep practising and mixing hues until they match what's in my mind.
Now I do well in painting. It brings me pleasure and success. Each of my pictures is valuable to me.
Would you like to tell me about your hobby?
Yours,
Wang Le
【知识点】
英语书信写作、爱好话题表达、一般现在时运用
【点评】
该写作符合书信格式，结构清晰，紧扣爱好主题，运用了指定句型，内容连贯，中心明确，符合题目要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语书信写作题，任务是给笔友戴维介绍自己的爱好，已给出书信开头，需结合思维导图的三个模块（开篇点题、叙述爱好、收获）完成内容。需以一般现在时为主，第一人称叙述，使用题目给出的相关句型，确保语句通顺、中心突出，词数符合要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题已给出“You asked me to tell you something about my hobby”，接下来用“Painting is my favourite”明确爱好；
2. 叙述爱好部分，用“I take an interest in painting”引出爱好，再用“I like to use different colours to show the beauty of the world”说明爱好的具体内容，补充日常创作的细节，再用“Sometimes I find it difficult to get the right colours, like when I try to paint a sunset's warm glow”写出遇到的困难；
3. 收获部分，用“Now I do well in painting”说明进步，再用“It brings me pleasure and success”写出爱好带来的收获，最后连贯语句，确保内容连贯、符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear David,
Thank you for your last letter. You asked me to tell you something about my hobby.
Painting is my favourite. I take an interest in painting. I like to use different colours to show the beauty of the world. Whenever I have free time, I grab my brushes and start creating. Sometimes I find it difficult to get the right colours, like when I try to paint a sunset's warm glow. But I never give up. I keep practising and mixing hues until they match what's in my mind.
Now I do well in painting. It brings me pleasure and success. Each of my pictures is valuable to me.
Would you like to tell me about your hobby?
Yours,
Wang Le
【知识点】
英语书信写作、爱好话题表达、一般现在时运用
【点评】
该写作符合书信格式，结构清晰，紧扣爱好主题，运用了指定句型，内容连贯，中心明确，符合题目要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
