十五、书面表达。(5分)
我们的国家地大物博,历史文化悠久,汇集了众多秀丽的自然风景和历史遗迹,勤劳好客的
中国人民欢迎世界各地的人们。请你根据思维导图,从以下几个方面介绍中国的基本情况!
温馨提示:
1.根据思维导图的提示信息,合理使用;
2.表达准确丰富,书写认真美观,注意标点和大小写;
3.不少于5句话。

China is a beautiful and great country.She has a long history and colourful culture.People
are very friendly and polite there.
我们的国家地大物博,历史文化悠久,汇集了众多秀丽的自然风景和历史遗迹,勤劳好客的
中国人民欢迎世界各地的人们。请你根据思维导图,从以下几个方面介绍中国的基本情况!
温馨提示:
1.根据思维导图的提示信息,合理使用;
2.表达准确丰富,书写认真美观,注意标点和大小写;
3.不少于5句话。
China is a beautiful and great country.She has a long history and colourful culture.People
are very friendly and polite there.
The weather is fine. There are many kinds of delicious food.
Chinese love sport, such as the Chinese kung fu and table tennis.
There are many famous cities, like Beijing, Shanghai, Hangzhou and so on.
There are also many kinds of animals. The giant pandas are very lovely.
People all over the world like them very much.
答案
One possible version:
China is a big and great country. She has
a long history and colourful culture. People
are very friendly and polite there. The weather is
fine. There are many kinds of delicious food.
Chinese love sport, such as the Chinese kung
fu and table tennis. There are many famous
cities, like Beijing, Shanghai, Hangzhou and
so on. There are also many kinds of animals.
The giant pandas are very lovely. People all
over the world like them very much.
China is a big and great country. She has
a long history and colourful culture. People
are very friendly and polite there. The weather is
fine. There are many kinds of delicious food.
Chinese love sport, such as the Chinese kung
fu and table tennis. There are many famous
cities, like Beijing, Shanghai, Hangzhou and
so on. There are also many kinds of animals.
The giant pandas are very lovely. People all
over the world like them very much.
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求:根据思维导图的weather、sport、animals、food、cities等类别,结合已给开头,完成不少于5句话的中国介绍短文。解题思路为:承接开头后,依次从思维导图的各类别选取合适内容,用准确的英语表达,确保语句通顺、语法正确,覆盖所有提示要点,满足句子数量要求。
【解析】
先续写开头,依次介绍思维导图中的内容:1. 介绍天气(The weather is fine.);2. 介绍食物(There are many kinds of delicious food.);3. 介绍运动(Chinese love sport, such as the Chinese kung fu and table tennis.);4. 介绍城市(There are many famous cities, like Beijing, Shanghai, Hangzhou and so on.);5. 介绍动物(There are also many kinds of animals. The giant pandas are very lovely. People all over the world like them very much.),保证内容贴合主题,语句连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
China is a big and great country. She has a long history and colourful culture. People are very friendly and polite there. The weather is fine. There are many kinds of delicious food. Chinese love sport, such as the Chinese kung fu and table tennis. There are many famous cities, like Beijing, Shanghai, Hangzhou and so on. There are also many kinds of animals. The giant pandas are very lovely. People all over the world like them very much.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作
【点评】
该作文结合思维导图提示,全面覆盖要求介绍的各方面,内容丰富具体,语句通顺自然,符合英语表达习惯,满足题目对句子数量和表达的要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确题目要求:根据思维导图的weather、sport、animals、food、cities等类别,结合已给开头,完成不少于5句话的中国介绍短文。解题思路为:承接开头后,依次从思维导图的各类别选取合适内容,用准确的英语表达,确保语句通顺、语法正确,覆盖所有提示要点,满足句子数量要求。
【解析】
先续写开头,依次介绍思维导图中的内容:1. 介绍天气(The weather is fine.);2. 介绍食物(There are many kinds of delicious food.);3. 介绍运动(Chinese love sport, such as the Chinese kung fu and table tennis.);4. 介绍城市(There are many famous cities, like Beijing, Shanghai, Hangzhou and so on.);5. 介绍动物(There are also many kinds of animals. The giant pandas are very lovely. People all over the world like them very much.),保证内容贴合主题,语句连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
China is a big and great country. She has a long history and colourful culture. People are very friendly and polite there. The weather is fine. There are many kinds of delicious food. Chinese love sport, such as the Chinese kung fu and table tennis. There are many famous cities, like Beijing, Shanghai, Hangzhou and so on. There are also many kinds of animals. The giant pandas are very lovely. People all over the world like them very much.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题写作
【点评】
该作文结合思维导图提示,全面覆盖要求介绍的各方面,内容丰富具体,语句通顺自然,符合英语表达习惯,满足题目对句子数量和表达的要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
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