八、书面表达
某英语学习网站正在举办题为“The Memory That Changed Me”的征文活动，邀请同学们分享一段对自己影响深远的记忆。假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，写一篇英语短文投稿。
提示：
1. 简要描述这段记忆发生的时间、地点和经过；
2. 谈谈这段经历对你的影响或从中获得的感悟；
3. 词数100词左右。

One possible version：
The Memory That Changed Me
I will never forget the day I joined the school speech competition. At first, I was so nervous that I almost gave up. My teacher noticed my worry and sat down to talk with me. She told me that the most important thing was not winning, but trying my best.
With her encouragement, I practiced my speech every day after class. When I finally stood on the stage, I took a deep breath and did my best. Although I only won third place, this experience taught me to be brave and confident. It is a memory I will always keep in my heart.

【分析】
本次征文主题为“The Memory That Changed Me”，需紧扣提示完成：1. 清晰描述记忆的时间、地点与经过（如参加学校演讲比赛的具体经历）；2. 阐述该经历对自身的影响或感悟；3. 控制词数在100词左右。写作时以第一人称叙述，开头点题，中间叙事完整，结尾升华感悟，确保所有提示要点均被覆盖，语言符合英语书面表达的要求。
【解析】
首先拟定征文标题，开头点明核心记忆是参加学校演讲比赛；接着叙述过程：起初因紧张想放弃，老师察觉后给予鼓励，告知重在参与而非胜负；随后写自己在鼓励下坚持练习，最终参赛虽仅获第三名，但收获了成长；最后点明感悟：学会勇敢自信，这段记忆将永远铭记。全文结构清晰，覆盖所有提示要点，语言流畅，符合词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version：
The Memory That Changed Me
I will never forget the day I joined the school speech competition. At first, I was so nervous that I almost gave up. My teacher noticed my worry and sat down to talk with me. She told me that the most important thing was not winning, but trying my best.
With her encouragement, I practiced my speech every day after class. When I finally stood on the stage, I took a deep breath and did my best. Although I only won third place, this experience taught me to be brave and confident. It is a memory I will always keep in my heart.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、记叙文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，完整覆盖提示要求的所有要点，结构清晰（点题-叙事-感悟），语言流畅自然，符合词数要求，生动体现了记忆对自身的积极改变，是一篇优秀的参赛短文。
【难度系数】
0.5