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51. 英文刊物 Teens Magazine 的 Graduation 专栏正面向九年级学生征稿。请阅读栏目要求，用英文撰写一篇征文。
GRADUATION
Hi, guys! You will graduate soon. Thinking of this year's studying experiences at school, you must have a lot to share with next year's Grade 9 students.
Write an article about it. Your article should include:
(1)how you feel about your middle school life;
(2)who is the most unforgettable person(a friend or a teacher) in your middle school life;
(3)what suggestions you would like to offer to next year's Grade 9 students.
注意:(1)短文必须包含所有提示信息,并适当发挥;(2)80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear fellows,
How time flies! I'm now in the final term of my junior high school.
GRADUATION
Hi, guys! You will graduate soon. Thinking of this year's studying experiences at school, you must have a lot to share with next year's Grade 9 students.
Write an article about it. Your article should include:
(1)how you feel about your middle school life;
(2)who is the most unforgettable person(a friend or a teacher) in your middle school life;
(3)what suggestions you would like to offer to next year's Grade 9 students.
注意:(1)短文必须包含所有提示信息,并适当发挥;(2)80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;(3)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Dear fellows,
How time flies! I'm now in the final term of my junior high school.
答案
One possible version:
Dear fellows,
How time flies! I'm now in the final term of my junior high school.Looking back at the past three years, I've gone through ups and downs.These unforgettable experiences help me grow greatly.
I'll miss my maths teacher most after graduation.He not only teaches me knowledge, but also helps make me a full person.Whenever I face difficulties, he always encourages me patiently.
Here, I also get some advice for you.First, manage your time well.Second, try to keep a balance between study and ay time.Finally, don't give up.
Believe in yourself and I'm sure you will achieve your dreams.
Dear fellows,
How time flies! I'm now in the final term of my junior high school.Looking back at the past three years, I've gone through ups and downs.These unforgettable experiences help me grow greatly.
I'll miss my maths teacher most after graduation.He not only teaches me knowledge, but also helps make me a full person.Whenever I face difficulties, he always encourages me patiently.
Here, I also get some advice for you.First, manage your time well.Second, try to keep a balance between study and ay time.Finally, don't give up.
Believe in yourself and I'm sure you will achieve your dreams.
解析
【分析】本题为初中英语毕业主题的英文应用文写作题，要求围绕三个核心要点完成征文：一是表达对初中生活的感受，二是介绍最难忘的人，三是给下一届九年级学生提建议。解题思路为：先承接给定开头，开篇点明初中三年的成长与感悟；接着明确最难忘的人物（如老师），结合具体事例说明其带来的影响；最后给出实用建议并收尾鼓励，确保覆盖所有要求、语言通顺且符合词数要求。
【解析】写作需严格遵循题目要求：① 对初中生活的感受：回顾三年的起伏与收获，体现成长；② 最难忘的人：选择老师或朋友，说明其帮助自己的具体经历；③ 给学弟学妹的建议：提出2-3条合理建议，如时间管理、平衡学习与休息等。开头已给出，续写时注意避免真实人名、校名，控制词数在80词左右，语言简洁通顺。
【答案】Dear fellows,
How time flies! I'm now in the final term of my junior high school.Looking back at the past three years, I've gone through ups and downs.These unforgettable experiences help me grow greatly.
I'll miss my maths teacher most after graduation.He not only teaches me knowledge, but also helps make me a full person.Whenever I face difficulties, he always encourages me patiently.
Here, I also get some advice for you.First, manage your time well.Second, try to keep a balance between study and free time.Finally, don't give up.
Believe in yourself and I'm sure you will achieve your dreams.
【知识点】英文应用文写作、初中英语写作要点覆盖
【点评】本题贴合初中毕业季的真实场景，考查学生的英语语言组织能力与要点整合能力，是初中英语常见的写作题型，要求学生结合合理的虚构经历完成写作，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作需严格遵循题目要求：① 对初中生活的感受：回顾三年的起伏与收获，体现成长；② 最难忘的人：选择老师或朋友，说明其帮助自己的具体经历；③ 给学弟学妹的建议：提出2-3条合理建议，如时间管理、平衡学习与休息等。开头已给出，续写时注意避免真实人名、校名，控制词数在80词左右，语言简洁通顺。
【答案】Dear fellows,
How time flies! I'm now in the final term of my junior high school.Looking back at the past three years, I've gone through ups and downs.These unforgettable experiences help me grow greatly.
I'll miss my maths teacher most after graduation.He not only teaches me knowledge, but also helps make me a full person.Whenever I face difficulties, he always encourages me patiently.
Here, I also get some advice for you.First, manage your time well.Second, try to keep a balance between study and free time.Finally, don't give up.
Believe in yourself and I'm sure you will achieve your dreams.
【知识点】英文应用文写作、初中英语写作要点覆盖
【点评】本题贴合初中毕业季的真实场景，考查学生的英语语言组织能力与要点整合能力，是初中英语常见的写作题型，要求学生结合合理的虚构经历完成写作，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
