【实战演练】
1.假设你要参加一场英语演讲比赛,比赛内容为分享一项你参与过的有意义的课外活动,并谈谈你的收获。

要求:(1)短文必须包含表中相关信息,可适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;(3)80词左右;(4)短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Last term, I took part in , which turned out to be a really meaningful experience for me.
1.假设你要参加一场英语演讲比赛,比赛内容为分享一项你参与过的有意义的课外活动,并谈谈你的收获。
要求:(1)短文必须包含表中相关信息,可适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;(3)80词左右;(4)短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Last term, I took part in , which turned out to be a really meaningful experience for me.
答案
1. One possible version:
Last term, I took part in the school's English debate club, which turned out to be a really meaningful experience for me.
I wasn't good at speaking in public at first, but my clubmates guided me patiently. We practised every weekend, and those hours made me express ideas bravely. Our first debate was about environmental protection. I not only improved my spoken English but also learnt logical thinking. The experience gave me more than skills, and it's a way to step out of my comfort zone and make sincere friends.
This activity taught me the importance of teamwork. I've become more outgoing and confident, and I'll cherish this experience.
(92 words)
Last term, I took part in the school's English debate club, which turned out to be a really meaningful experience for me.
I wasn't good at speaking in public at first, but my clubmates guided me patiently. We practised every weekend, and those hours made me express ideas bravely. Our first debate was about environmental protection. I not only improved my spoken English but also learnt logical thinking. The experience gave me more than skills, and it's a way to step out of my comfort zone and make sincere friends.
This activity taught me the importance of teamwork. I've become more outgoing and confident, and I'll cherish this experience.
(92 words)
解析
【分析】这是一道英语话题写作题,要求围绕“有意义的课外活动”完成演讲内容,需包含表中核心信息(课外活动内容、参与经历、团队合作的重要性、技能提升等),还要衔接给定开头,控制字数,避免出现真实姓名、学校等信息。解题时,先选定一个具体的课外活动(如英语辩论社),再补充具体参与细节(如初期的不足、同伴的帮助),最后点明收获,确保内容连贯且紧扣要点。
【解析】写作步骤如下:1. 承接开头,明确参与的课外活动(如学校英语辩论社);2. 补充具体经历:初期不擅长公开演讲,在同伴指导下周末练习,第一次辩论的主题;3. 点明收获:提升口语、逻辑思维,学会团队合作,变得外向自信;4. 检查是否包含所有要求要点,调整字数至80词左右,确保无真实信息。
【答案】One possible version:
Last term, I took part in the school's English debate club, which turned out to be a really meaningful experience for me.
I wasn't good at speaking in public at first, but my clubmates guided me patiently. We practised every weekend, and those hours made me express ideas bravely. Our first debate was about environmental protection. I not only improved my spoken English but also learnt logical thinking. The experience gave me more than skills, and it's a way to step out of my comfort zone and make sincere friends.
This activity taught me the importance of teamwork. I've become more outgoing and confident, and I'll cherish this experience.
【知识点】英语话题写作、应用文写作
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求,涵盖了课外活动、参与经历、团队合作重要性、技能提升等核心要点,内容具体真实,语言流畅自然,符合演讲语境,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤如下:1. 承接开头,明确参与的课外活动(如学校英语辩论社);2. 补充具体经历:初期不擅长公开演讲,在同伴指导下周末练习,第一次辩论的主题;3. 点明收获:提升口语、逻辑思维,学会团队合作,变得外向自信;4. 检查是否包含所有要求要点,调整字数至80词左右,确保无真实信息。
【答案】One possible version:
Last term, I took part in the school's English debate club, which turned out to be a really meaningful experience for me.
I wasn't good at speaking in public at first, but my clubmates guided me patiently. We practised every weekend, and those hours made me express ideas bravely. Our first debate was about environmental protection. I not only improved my spoken English but also learnt logical thinking. The experience gave me more than skills, and it's a way to step out of my comfort zone and make sincere friends.
This activity taught me the importance of teamwork. I've become more outgoing and confident, and I'll cherish this experience.
【知识点】英语话题写作、应用文写作
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求,涵盖了课外活动、参与经历、团队合作重要性、技能提升等核心要点,内容具体真实,语言流畅自然,符合演讲语境,是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】0.5
2. 以“How I Relax After Busy Days”为题写短文,分享你日常忙碌后的放松方式、具体做法及它对你的帮助。需包含:
(1)你选择的放松方式是什么;
(2)你通常如何进行这项活动;
(3)它如何帮助你缓解压力、调整状态。
要求:(1)短文必须包含相关信息,可适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;(3)80词左右;(4)短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How I Relax After Busy Days
After busy school days, I have a special way to relax myself:
(1)你选择的放松方式是什么;
(2)你通常如何进行这项活动;
(3)它如何帮助你缓解压力、调整状态。
要求:(1)短文必须包含相关信息,可适当发挥;(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;(3)80词左右;(4)短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
How I Relax After Busy Days
After busy school days, I have a special way to relax myself:
答案
2. One possible version:
How I Relax After Busy Days
After busy school days, I have a special way to relax myself: gardening. I keep a small flower bed on the balcony. Every evening, I water the roses, cut the leaves, and talk to them softly—like sharing my tiredness with a friend.
Watching the buds bloom slowly calms my racing mind. It makes me forget homework stress and feel close to nature. This quiet activity not only rests my body but also lets my mind recharge, so I'm ready for new challenges the next day.
(74 words)
How I Relax After Busy Days
After busy school days, I have a special way to relax myself: gardening. I keep a small flower bed on the balcony. Every evening, I water the roses, cut the leaves, and talk to them softly—like sharing my tiredness with a friend.
Watching the buds bloom slowly calms my racing mind. It makes me forget homework stress and feel close to nature. This quiet activity not only rests my body but also lets my mind recharge, so I'm ready for new challenges the next day.
(74 words)
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“How I Relax After Busy Days”为题写80词左右的短文,需包含三个核心要点:明确放松方式、描述具体做法、说明对自己的帮助。首先需承接已给开头,选择贴近生活且易展开的放松方式;接着具体描述该活动的细节;最后阐述其缓解压力、调整状态的作用,同时要注意避免真实信息,控制词数。
【解析】
1. 承接开头点明放松方式:gardening;2. 具体描述做法:在阳台打理小花坛,每晚浇水、剪叶、轻声和花交流;3. 说明帮助:通过观察花苞开放平复思绪,忘记作业压力,亲近自然,实现身心充电,为次日挑战做好准备;4. 调整语言使词数符合要求,内容连贯无真实信息。
【答案】
How I Relax After Busy Days
After busy school days, I have a special way to relax myself: gardening. I keep a small flower bed on the balcony. Every evening, I water the roses, cut the leaves, and talk to them softly—like sharing my tiredness with a friend.
Watching the buds bloom slowly calms my racing mind. It makes me forget homework stress and feel close to nature. This quiet activity not only rests my body but also lets my mind recharge, so I'm ready for new challenges the next day.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、要点式书面表达
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖所有指定内容要点,内容具体生动,语言简洁流畅,符合词数要求,未出现真实信息,是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题要求以“How I Relax After Busy Days”为题写80词左右的短文,需包含三个核心要点:明确放松方式、描述具体做法、说明对自己的帮助。首先需承接已给开头,选择贴近生活且易展开的放松方式;接着具体描述该活动的细节;最后阐述其缓解压力、调整状态的作用,同时要注意避免真实信息,控制词数。
【解析】
1. 承接开头点明放松方式:gardening;2. 具体描述做法:在阳台打理小花坛,每晚浇水、剪叶、轻声和花交流;3. 说明帮助:通过观察花苞开放平复思绪,忘记作业压力,亲近自然,实现身心充电,为次日挑战做好准备;4. 调整语言使词数符合要求,内容连贯无真实信息。
【答案】
How I Relax After Busy Days
After busy school days, I have a special way to relax myself: gardening. I keep a small flower bed on the balcony. Every evening, I water the roses, cut the leaves, and talk to them softly—like sharing my tiredness with a friend.
Watching the buds bloom slowly calms my racing mind. It makes me forget homework stress and feel close to nature. This quiet activity not only rests my body but also lets my mind recharge, so I'm ready for new challenges the next day.
【知识点】
英语短文写作、要点式书面表达
【点评】
该范文紧扣题目要求,完整覆盖所有指定内容要点,内容具体生动,语言简洁流畅,符合词数要求,未出现真实信息,是一篇符合要求的优秀习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
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