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Ⅶ. Think and write.
In our daily life, there may be a problem you face. Please come up with an idea for an invention to solve it. Then write an advertisement for your invention.
Your advertisement should be at least 80 words and include:
(1)What everyday problem do you face?
(2)How does the problem trouble you?
(3)What invention could solve the problem?
(4)How does the invention work?
My new invention
I face the problem of
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In our daily life, there may be a problem you face. Please come up with an idea for an invention to solve it. Then write an advertisement for your invention.
Your advertisement should be at least 80 words and include:
(1)What everyday problem do you face?
(2)How does the problem trouble you?
(3)What invention could solve the problem?
(4)How does the invention work?
My new invention
I face the problem of
doing laundry. Sorting clothes is a headache, and what’s worse, I often forget to take them out of the washing machine in time, making them smell bad.
I’m going to invent a Laundry Savior. I must lend a hand to those troubled by the same problem.
It will be able to use sensors to sort clothes by colors and fabrics(面料).
When the washing finishes, it sends a reminder to your phone.
Most importantly, it costs only 50, much cheaper than other similar products.
It will surely blow you away!
Get one for yourself now!
答案
A possible version:
My new invention
I face the problem of doing laundry. Sorting clothes is a headache, and what’s worse, I often forget to take them out of the washing machine in time, making them smell bad.
I’m going to invent a Laundry Savior. I must lend a hand to those troubled by the same problem. It will be able to use sensors to sort clothes by colors and fabrics(面料). When the washing finishes, it sends a reminder to your phone. Most importantly, it costs only 50, much cheaper than other similar products. It will surely blow you away!
Get one for yourself now!
My new invention
I face the problem of doing laundry. Sorting clothes is a headache, and what’s worse, I often forget to take them out of the washing machine in time, making them smell bad.
I’m going to invent a Laundry Savior. I must lend a hand to those troubled by the same problem. It will be able to use sensors to sort clothes by colors and fabrics(面料). When the washing finishes, it sends a reminder to your phone. Most importantly, it costs only 50, much cheaper than other similar products. It will surely blow you away!
Get one for yourself now!
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作题，要求撰写一则发明广告，需紧扣四个核心要点：①日常面临的问题；②问题带来的困扰；③发明的名称；④发明的工作原理及优势，且字数不少于80词。解题思路为：先选取贴近生活的常见问题，再详细描述问题的具体困扰，接着构思解决该问题的发明，最后说明发明的功能、优势，用广告的活泼语气组织语言，确保覆盖所有要求要点。
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 确定日常问题：选取贴近生活的洗衣问题；2. 描述问题困扰：说明洗衣时分类麻烦、常忘取衣物导致异味等具体困扰；3. 构思发明：命名为“Laundry Savior”；4. 说明发明功能与优势：用传感器按颜色和面料分类，洗衣结束后给手机发送提醒，价格低廉；5. 组织语言：采用广告式的活泼表达，确保字数达标，覆盖所有要求要点。
【答案】A possible version:
My new invention
I face the problem of doing laundry. Sorting clothes is a headache, and what’s worse, I often forget to take them out of the washing machine in time, making them smell bad.
I’m going to invent a Laundry Savior. I must lend a hand to those troubled by the same problem. It will be able to use sensors to sort clothes by colors and fabrics(面料). When the washing finishes, it sends a reminder to your phone. Most importantly, it costs only 50, much cheaper than other similar products. It will surely blow you away!
Get one for yourself now!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、日常话题表达、发明类话题写作
【点评】本题结合生活实际，考查学生的英语综合运用能力，要求围绕给定要点完成广告写作，既锻炼学生的创意表达，又贴合生活场景，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 确定日常问题：选取贴近生活的洗衣问题；2. 描述问题困扰：说明洗衣时分类麻烦、常忘取衣物导致异味等具体困扰；3. 构思发明：命名为“Laundry Savior”；4. 说明发明功能与优势：用传感器按颜色和面料分类，洗衣结束后给手机发送提醒，价格低廉；5. 组织语言：采用广告式的活泼表达，确保字数达标，覆盖所有要求要点。
【答案】A possible version:
My new invention
I face the problem of doing laundry. Sorting clothes is a headache, and what’s worse, I often forget to take them out of the washing machine in time, making them smell bad.
I’m going to invent a Laundry Savior. I must lend a hand to those troubled by the same problem. It will be able to use sensors to sort clothes by colors and fabrics(面料). When the washing finishes, it sends a reminder to your phone. Most importantly, it costs only 50, much cheaper than other similar products. It will surely blow you away!
Get one for yourself now!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、日常话题表达、发明类话题写作
【点评】本题结合生活实际，考查学生的英语综合运用能力，要求围绕给定要点完成广告写作，既锻炼学生的创意表达，又贴合生活场景，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
