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「2026江苏南京二十九中月考」
注意:1.词数不少于80(开头已给出,不计入词数);2.须包含全部提示内容,可适当发挥。
One Earth, One Home
The earth is home to both humans and animals. But today, wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans.
注意:1.词数不少于80(开头已给出,不计入词数);2.须包含全部提示内容,可适当发挥。
One Earth, One Home
The earth is home to both humans and animals. But today, wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans.
Firstly, humans cut down forests and hunt animals, destroying habitats and even pushing some species to extinction. What’s worse, some people kill wild animals for their fur or bones to make money.
We need to protect wild animals because they play an important part in the ecosystem of our planet. As students, we should play an active role in protecting wild animals. First, we can tell others about animal protection. Second, we should avoid buying products made from animals. Finally, we can plant trees to expand habitats to help the animals.
Remember: saving animals is saving ourselves! Let’s take action together to make a more beautiful home for both humans and animals.
We need to protect wild animals because they play an important part in the ecosystem of our planet. As students, we should play an active role in protecting wild animals. First, we can tell others about animal protection. Second, we should avoid buying products made from animals. Finally, we can plant trees to expand habitats to help the animals.
Remember: saving animals is saving ourselves! Let’s take action together to make a more beautiful home for both humans and animals.
答案
One Earth, One Home
The earth is home to both humans and animals. But today, wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans.
Firstly¹, humans cut down forests² and hunt animals, destroying habitats² and even pushing some species to extinction². What’s worse¹, some people kill wild animals for their fur or bones to make money.
We need to protect wild animals because³ they play an important part in the ecosystem of our planet. As students, we should play an active role in protecting wild animals. First¹, we can tell others about animal protection. Second¹, we should avoid buying products² made from animals. Finally¹, we can plant trees to expand habitats² to help the animals.
Remember: saving animals is saving ourselves! Let’s take action together⁴ to make a more beautiful home for both humans and animals.
亮点评析
① 用衔接词 Firstly、What’s worse、First、Second 及 Finally 有条不紊地点明野生动物所面临的问题及学生该做什么；
② 用 cut down forests、destroying habitats、pushing some species to extinction、avoid buying products、expand habitats 等动词短语点明人类的恶行和学生可以做的具体措施；
③用 because 引导原因状语从句点明保护野生动物的理由；
④用祈使句 Let’s do sth. 号召人们行动起来，积极保护野生动物。
The earth is home to both humans and animals. But today, wild animals are facing serious problems because of humans.
Firstly¹, humans cut down forests² and hunt animals, destroying habitats² and even pushing some species to extinction². What’s worse¹, some people kill wild animals for their fur or bones to make money.
We need to protect wild animals because³ they play an important part in the ecosystem of our planet. As students, we should play an active role in protecting wild animals. First¹, we can tell others about animal protection. Second¹, we should avoid buying products² made from animals. Finally¹, we can plant trees to expand habitats² to help the animals.
Remember: saving animals is saving ourselves! Let’s take action together⁴ to make a more beautiful home for both humans and animals.
亮点评析
① 用衔接词 Firstly、What’s worse、First、Second 及 Finally 有条不紊地点明野生动物所面临的问题及学生该做什么；
② 用 cut down forests、destroying habitats、pushing some species to extinction、avoid buying products、expand habitats 等动词短语点明人类的恶行和学生可以做的具体措施；
③用 because 引导原因状语从句点明保护野生动物的理由；
④用祈使句 Let’s do sth. 号召人们行动起来，积极保护野生动物。
