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【写作导引】
本单元写作情境为“有意义的人生”，属于“人与自我”主题范畴中的“生活与学习、做人与做事”这一主题群，涉及子主题“人生价值、榜样力量、责任担当、对有意义人生的追求”。常见的写作任务是介绍对自己影响深远的人，讲述其事迹与品质，分享对有意义人生的理解，表达向榜样学习、实现人生价值的决心。
【写作任务】
学习榜样力量，承担时代责任。新时代涌现了许多优秀的典范人物，他们的勇气与担当深深
影响着我们。学校英语角将举办演讲比赛，请你以李红的身份参赛，写一篇演讲稿。
提示：(1) 榜样人物带给你的感受；(2) 你的榜样及从他/她身上学到的品质；(3) 你将如何向榜样学习，成为更好的自己。
要求：语句连贯，词数100左右（作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear teachers and classmates,
Good morning, everyone. My name is Li Hong.
I am very glad to make a speech here.
本单元写作情境为“有意义的人生”，属于“人与自我”主题范畴中的“生活与学习、做人与做事”这一主题群，涉及子主题“人生价值、榜样力量、责任担当、对有意义人生的追求”。常见的写作任务是介绍对自己影响深远的人，讲述其事迹与品质，分享对有意义人生的理解，表达向榜样学习、实现人生价值的决心。
【写作任务】
学习榜样力量，承担时代责任。新时代涌现了许多优秀的典范人物，他们的勇气与担当深深
影响着我们。学校英语角将举办演讲比赛，请你以李红的身份参赛，写一篇演讲稿。
提示：(1) 榜样人物带给你的感受；(2) 你的榜样及从他/她身上学到的品质；(3) 你将如何向榜样学习，成为更好的自己。
要求：语句连贯，词数100左右（作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear teachers and classmates,
Good morning, everyone. My name is Li Hong.
I am very glad to make a speech here.
Today, I'd like to talk about role models. Their spirit is worth learning. In our life, we will meet all kinds of difficulties, and sometimes we just want to give up. But role models always overcome any difficulty they meet in life. They encourage us to be stronger and more confident.
Edison is my role model. He failed many times while inventing the light bulb, but he never gave up and kept working towards his goal. From him, I learn that success never comes without hard work. In the future, I will keep working hard at school to make my dream come true.
答案
1. Today, I'd like to talk about role models. Their spirit is worth learning. In our life, we will meet all kinds of difficulties, and sometimes we just want to give up. But role models always overcome any difficulty they meet in life. They encourage us to be stronger and more confident.
2. Edison is my role model. He failed many times while inventing the light bulb, but he never gave up and kept working towards his goal. From him, I learn that success never comes without hard work. In the future, I will keep working hard at school to make my dream come true.
2. Edison is my role model. He failed many times while inventing the light bulb, but he never gave up and kept working towards his goal. From him, I learn that success never comes without hard work. In the future, I will keep working hard at school to make my dream come true.
解析
【分析】
首先明确演讲主题为“学习榜样力量，承担时代责任”，身份是李红，开头已给出，需补写内容紧扣三个提示：1. 阐述榜样带来的感受（如激励克服困难）；2. 选具体榜样（如爱迪生），讲其事迹与品质；3. 说明向榜样学习的具体行动。需注意词数100左右，语句连贯，符合演讲语气。
【解析】
步骤1：承接开头，引出演讲主题，说明榜样对自己的激励作用（对应提示1）；步骤2：介绍榜样爱迪生，叙述其发明电灯多次失败仍坚持的事迹，提炼学到的“成功源于不懈努力”的品质（对应提示2）；步骤3：结合自身，说明未来在学校努力学习、实现梦想的行动（对应提示3），确保内容完整、符合词数要求。
【答案】
Today, I'd like to talk about role models. Their spirit is worth learning. In our life, we will meet all kinds of difficulties, and sometimes we just want to give up. But role models always overcome any difficulty they meet in life. They encourage us to be stronger and more confident.
Edison is my role model. He failed many times while inventing the light bulb, but he never gave up and kept working towards his goal. From him, I learn that success never comes without hard work. In the future, I will keep working hard at school to make my dream come true.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、人物事迹表达、个人感悟抒发
【点评】
这篇演讲稿紧扣主题，结构清晰，覆盖了题目要求的三个提示点，语言简洁流畅，符合演讲语境，能体现出对榜样精神的理解和向榜样学习的决心，是一篇符合要求的习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确演讲主题为“学习榜样力量，承担时代责任”，身份是李红，开头已给出，需补写内容紧扣三个提示：1. 阐述榜样带来的感受（如激励克服困难）；2. 选具体榜样（如爱迪生），讲其事迹与品质；3. 说明向榜样学习的具体行动。需注意词数100左右，语句连贯，符合演讲语气。
【解析】
步骤1：承接开头，引出演讲主题，说明榜样对自己的激励作用（对应提示1）；步骤2：介绍榜样爱迪生，叙述其发明电灯多次失败仍坚持的事迹，提炼学到的“成功源于不懈努力”的品质（对应提示2）；步骤3：结合自身，说明未来在学校努力学习、实现梦想的行动（对应提示3），确保内容完整、符合词数要求。
【答案】
Today, I'd like to talk about role models. Their spirit is worth learning. In our life, we will meet all kinds of difficulties, and sometimes we just want to give up. But role models always overcome any difficulty they meet in life. They encourage us to be stronger and more confident.
Edison is my role model. He failed many times while inventing the light bulb, but he never gave up and kept working towards his goal. From him, I learn that success never comes without hard work. In the future, I will keep working hard at school to make my dream come true.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、人物事迹表达、个人感悟抒发
【点评】
这篇演讲稿紧扣主题，结构清晰，覆盖了题目要求的三个提示点，语言简洁流畅，符合演讲语境，能体现出对榜样精神的理解和向榜样学习的决心，是一篇符合要求的习作。
【难度系数】
0.6
跟踪演练
青少年是国家和民族的希望，拥有一个有意义、有价值的人生，对青少年自己和整个民族都具有重要意义。某英文网站正在开展以“Live a more meaningful life”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请根据思维导图和写作提示，用英语写一篇120词左右的投稿。
提示：1. 你认为怎样的人生才是更有意义的人生？2. 如何实现“更有意义的人生”？
青少年是国家和民族的希望，拥有一个有意义、有价值的人生，对青少年自己和整个民族都具有重要意义。某英文网站正在开展以“Live a more meaningful life”为主题的征文活动，假如你是李华，请根据思维导图和写作提示，用英语写一篇120词左右的投稿。
提示：1. 你认为怎样的人生才是更有意义的人生？2. 如何实现“更有意义的人生”？
答案
# Live a more meaningful life
As teenagers, we are the hope of our nation. In my view, a more meaningful life is a fulfilled life where we can bring positive influence to both ourselves and people around us.
To achieve this goal, first we should be hard-working to learn enough useful knowledge for our future. Besides, we need to be caring and responsible, and try to help people in need whenever we can. It is also a good choice to develop healthy hobbies like reading to enrich our spare time. What's more, we must keep doing exercise to make sure we are both physically and mentally healthy.
Let's work together to live a more meaningful life!
As teenagers, we are the hope of our nation. In my view, a more meaningful life is a fulfilled life where we can bring positive influence to both ourselves and people around us.
To achieve this goal, first we should be hard-working to learn enough useful knowledge for our future. Besides, we need to be caring and responsible, and try to help people in need whenever we can. It is also a good choice to develop healthy hobbies like reading to enrich our spare time. What's more, we must keep doing exercise to make sure we are both physically and mentally healthy.
Let's work together to live a more meaningful life!
解析
【分析】本题为英语主题征文，主题是“Live a more meaningful life”，需结合思维导图的四个核心要点（be caring and responsible、be hard-working、have many hobbies、be healthy），回答两个问题：一是怎样的人生更有意义，二是如何实现有意义的人生。写作时需采用“总-分-总”结构，开头点明有意义的人生的内涵，中间分点结合思维导图要点阐述实现路径，结尾发出呼吁，确保词数符合要求。
【解析】1. 开头段：明确作为青少年，有意义的人生是能对自己和他人带来积极影响的人生，点题；2. 主体段：结合思维导图要点，分四点说明实现方法：①努力学习积累知识；②关爱他人、承担责任帮助有需要的人；③培养健康爱好丰富课余；④坚持锻炼保持身心健康；3. 结尾段：发出呼吁，号召大家共同努力过有意义的人生，控制词数约120词。
【答案】Live a more meaningful life
As teenagers, we are the hope of our nation. In my view, a more meaningful life is a fulfilled life where we can bring positive influence to both ourselves and people around us.
To achieve this goal, first we should be hard-working to learn enough useful knowledge for our future. Besides, we need to be caring and responsible, and try to help people in need whenever we can. It is also a good choice to develop healthy hobbies like reading to enrich our spare time. What's more, we must keep doing exercise to make sure we are both physically and mentally healthy.
Let's work together to live a more meaningful life!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、主题作文构思
【点评】本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，覆盖了思维导图的所有核心要点，准确回应题目要求，语言流畅，符合征文的正式语气，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 开头段：明确作为青少年，有意义的人生是能对自己和他人带来积极影响的人生，点题；2. 主体段：结合思维导图要点，分四点说明实现方法：①努力学习积累知识；②关爱他人、承担责任帮助有需要的人；③培养健康爱好丰富课余；④坚持锻炼保持身心健康；3. 结尾段：发出呼吁，号召大家共同努力过有意义的人生，控制词数约120词。
【答案】Live a more meaningful life
As teenagers, we are the hope of our nation. In my view, a more meaningful life is a fulfilled life where we can bring positive influence to both ourselves and people around us.
To achieve this goal, first we should be hard-working to learn enough useful knowledge for our future. Besides, we need to be caring and responsible, and try to help people in need whenever we can. It is also a good choice to develop healthy hobbies like reading to enrich our spare time. What's more, we must keep doing exercise to make sure we are both physically and mentally healthy.
Let's work together to live a more meaningful life!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、主题作文构思
【点评】本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，覆盖了思维导图的所有核心要点，准确回应题目要求，语言流畅，符合征文的正式语气，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.6
