三、教材佳句仿写·核心句式训练
1. 教材原句:It helps me keep fit.
仿写:它帮助他得到了很多钱。

2. 教材原句:At home, he likes to take things apart.
仿写:她喜欢去不同的地方,并且了解世界是什么样子的。

3. 教材原句:What does he use the internet to do?
仿写:你使用这些工具做什么？

4. 教材原句:Do you plan to join the Painting Club?
仿写:我们计划去看望医院里的孩子们,让他们开心。

5. 教材原句:I hope my dream can come true.
仿写:我希望有一天我可以环游世界。

1. It helps him get a lot of money.
2. She likes to go to different places and learn what the world is like.
3. What do you use these tools to do?
4. We plan to visit the children in the hospital to make them happy.
5. I hope I can travel around the world one day.

四、典例剖析·主题写作行文指导
在繁忙而充实的学习之余,学生还应该拥有健康、阳光的爱好(如运动、绘画、读书等)。请选择一项你的爱好,以“ makes my life more colourful”为题写一篇短文。
1.要点:(1)What's your hobby?

2.要求:(1)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
(2)语意连贯,层次清楚,书写规范,70词左右,已给出的部分不计入总词数。
makes my life more colourful
It's important to take up some hobbies in life.






Step 1 谋篇布局指导

Step 2 高阶表达应用
1. Painting helps me make new friends. It also helps me build my confidence.(用“not only... but also...”升格)


2. We learn about great artists and good painting skills.(用as well as升格)


Step 3 佳作展示评析
Painting makes my life more colourful
It's important to take up some hobbies in life.
Painting is the hobby that makes my life more colourful.
At first, I enjoyed visiting museums, especially art museums. I was deeply interested in learning about^① the great paintings. Then I took the painting classes. The teachers taught me how to design the whole painting and encouraged me. The classmates were friendly and helped me a lot. I have not only made new friends but also^② built my confidence.
Painting makes my life more colourful. I really enjoy it.
①be interested in doing sth.为第一单元新学表达,做到了学以致用。
②"not only... but also..."结构说明绘画这一爱好带给作者的益处。
本文语句连贯,层次分明,条理清晰,详细介绍了培养绘画这一爱好的过程,并说明了自己的收获和感受。

1. Painting helps me not only make new friends but also build my confidence.
2. We learn about good painting skills as well as great artists.