佳作赏析
[经典例题]
近些年,全球多灾多难,火灾、洪水、地震等频发,如何应对自然灾害是学生生存的必备知识和技能,为此你校英语俱乐部正在开展征文活动,要求给出一些应对自然灾害的建议。请根据下图中的信息,用英语写一篇短文参加活动。

注意事项:
1. 短文须包括图中所有信息,要求语句通顺,意思连贯,符合题意;
2. 80词左右,已给出部分(画直线部分)不计入总词数。
[高分范文]
There are many natural disasters around the world these years.
News of natural disasters like fires, floods, and earthquakes from around the world comes to us every day. ① It's time for us to learn more about how to keep us safe from the danger.
② If there's a fire, we should get out as soon as possible and we should cover our mouth and nose with a wet towel to protect ourselves from thick smoke. We must hide under something hard and never stand near a window if an earthquake happens.
③ I do hope these tips can be helpful.
[名师点评]
短文结构紧凑,语言简练,开头总述近年来有许多自然灾害,接下来具体阐述有关自然灾害的建议,叙事流畅,表达清晰。
① “It's time for sb. to do sth.”句式的使用体现了作者扎实的基本功;
② if引导的条件状语从句和短语get out as soon as possible、“cover ... with ...”“protect ... from ...”的使用增强了文章的表现力;
③ 结尾句使用了宾语从句,且使用了“助动词do +动词原形”结构来强调谓语动词,表达了作者强烈的希望。
素材积累
[开头句]
1. There are many natural disasters around the world.
2. Have you ever thought about how to stay safe in natural disasters and emergencies?
3. I'll tell you what to do when an earthquake happens.
[中间句]
1. To keep safe, we can follow these tips.
2. If it's serious, you should go and see a doctor right away.
3. Many cars hit each other in the accident.
[结尾句]
1. Safety is very important.
2. It's important to keep safe.
3. All of us were happy that we were safe.
[名言警句]
1. In the face of disasters, humanity is at its best when it comes together. 灾难面前,人类团结时方能展现最伟大的一面。

参考范文：
There are many natural disasters around the world these years.
Now we often get news about different natural disasters like fires, earthquakes and so on. It's necessary for us to learn self-protection tips for these disasters. If a fire happens, we should get out as soon as possible, and remember to cover our nose and mouth with a wet towel. If an earthquake happens, we should hide under something hard, and we must not stand near the window. I hope these tips can help us stay safe.

这是一篇提示类英语写作题，写作要求如下：1. 内容需覆盖所有提示要点：点明近年火灾、地震等自然灾害频发，说明掌握自救方法的必要性；分别说明火灾发生时尽快撤离、遮挡口鼻的自救要点，以及地震发生时躲在硬物下方、不要站在窗边的自救要点；2. 语句通顺连贯，总词数控制在80词左右，已给出的开头内容不计入总词数。写作时可灵活运用八年级所学的if条件状语从句、It's time for sb. to do sth.等常用句式，符合对应年级的英语表达水平。