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模块写作提优专训 介绍自己的旅游计划
一 方法指导 介绍自己想要去旅行的地方，可按“三步五要素法”写作。第一步，开头，点明自己想要去哪里旅行；第二步，正文，介绍自己旅行的时间、出行的方式、同行人物、景点的特色、在旅游地点的活动五要素；第三步，结尾，表达自己旅行的感受。
二 素材积累
三 以读促写（阅读范文，补全思维导图，体悟写法）
I want to visit Beijing this winter holiday. I will go there with my parents. We will go to Beijing by plane. We want to go to the Great Wall. The Great Wall is very long and old. We can climb to the top of the Great Wall. And we want to eat Beijing Roast Duck. I think it is very delicious. There are many interesting places in Beijing. We want to visit the Summer Palace, the Temple of Heaven and the Bird’s Nest.
After this trip, we can know more about the history of China. I believe we will have a good time.
四 小试身手（参照以上范文，自己动手写一写吧）请以“My Winter Holiday Trip”为题，写一篇短文。
提示词：Harbin, go skiing, see the ice lanterns, eat delicious dumplings, by train...
My Winter Holiday Trip
The winter holiday is coming! I want to visit
一 方法指导 介绍自己想要去旅行的地方，可按“三步五要素法”写作。第一步，开头，点明自己想要去哪里旅行；第二步，正文，介绍自己旅行的时间、出行的方式、同行人物、景点的特色、在旅游地点的活动五要素；第三步，结尾，表达自己旅行的感受。
二 素材积累
三 以读促写（阅读范文，补全思维导图，体悟写法）
I want to visit Beijing this winter holiday. I will go there with my parents. We will go to Beijing by plane. We want to go to the Great Wall. The Great Wall is very long and old. We can climb to the top of the Great Wall. And we want to eat Beijing Roast Duck. I think it is very delicious. There are many interesting places in Beijing. We want to visit the Summer Palace, the Temple of Heaven and the Bird’s Nest.
After this trip, we can know more about the history of China. I believe we will have a good time.
四 小试身手（参照以上范文，自己动手写一写吧）请以“My Winter Holiday Trip”为题，写一篇短文。
提示词：Harbin, go skiing, see the ice lanterns, eat delicious dumplings, by train...
My Winter Holiday Trip
The winter holiday is coming! I want to visit
Harbin with my parents. We want to go there by train. I want to go skiing. I want to see the ice lanterns. I think they are very interesting. I want to eat delicious dumplings. It will be a fun trip.
答案
1. Beijing
2. We want to go to the Great Wall.
3. It is very long and old.
4. We want to eat Beijing Roast Duck.
5. We want to visit the Summer Palace, the Temple of Heaven and the Bird’s Nest.
四范文：
My Winter Holiday Trip
The winter holiday is coming! I want to visit Harbin with my parents. We want to go there by train. I want to go skiing. I want to see the ice lanterns. I think they are very interesting. I want to eat delicious dumplings. It will be a fun trip.
2. We want to go to the Great Wall.
3. It is very long and old.
4. We want to eat Beijing Roast Duck.
5. We want to visit the Summer Palace, the Temple of Heaven and the Bird’s Nest.
四范文：
My Winter Holiday Trip
The winter holiday is coming! I want to visit Harbin with my parents. We want to go there by train. I want to go skiing. I want to see the ice lanterns. I think they are very interesting. I want to eat delicious dumplings. It will be a fun trip.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以“My Winter Holiday Trip”为题写英语短文，需遵循题目给出的“三步五要素法”写作。解题思路为：第一步开头点明旅行地点（提示词给出Harbin）；第二步正文涵盖旅行时间（寒假）、同行人物、出行方式（by train）、景点活动（go skiing、see ice lanterns）、美食（delicious dumplings）五个要素；第三步结尾表达旅行感受，同时结合提示词和范文结构组织语言，确保内容完整、符合要求。
【解析】
按照“三步五要素法”写作：1. 开头：点明寒假要去哈尔滨，即“The winter holiday is coming! I want to visit Harbin...”；2. 正文：依次补充同行人物（with my parents）、出行方式（by train）、活动（go skiing、see the ice lanterns）、美食（eat delicious dumplings），并添加简单评价（they are very interesting）；3. 结尾：表达旅行的愉快感受（It will be a fun trip），最终形成符合要求的短文。
【答案】
My Winter Holiday Trip
The winter holiday is coming! I want to visit Harbin with my parents. We want to go there by train. I want to go skiing. I want to see the ice lanterns. I think they are very interesting. I want to eat delicious dumplings. It will be a fun trip.
【知识点】
英语写作、旅游话题表达、一般将来时运用
【点评】
本题为英语写作提优专项训练，通过给定“三步五要素法”和范文，引导学生掌握旅游计划类短文的写作结构，结合提示词降低写作难度，既考查词汇运用，又锻炼篇章组织能力，实用性强。
【难度系数】
0.3
本题要求以“My Winter Holiday Trip”为题写英语短文，需遵循题目给出的“三步五要素法”写作。解题思路为：第一步开头点明旅行地点（提示词给出Harbin）；第二步正文涵盖旅行时间（寒假）、同行人物、出行方式（by train）、景点活动（go skiing、see ice lanterns）、美食（delicious dumplings）五个要素；第三步结尾表达旅行感受，同时结合提示词和范文结构组织语言，确保内容完整、符合要求。
【解析】
按照“三步五要素法”写作：1. 开头：点明寒假要去哈尔滨，即“The winter holiday is coming! I want to visit Harbin...”；2. 正文：依次补充同行人物（with my parents）、出行方式（by train）、活动（go skiing、see the ice lanterns）、美食（eat delicious dumplings），并添加简单评价（they are very interesting）；3. 结尾：表达旅行的愉快感受（It will be a fun trip），最终形成符合要求的短文。
【答案】
My Winter Holiday Trip
The winter holiday is coming! I want to visit Harbin with my parents. We want to go there by train. I want to go skiing. I want to see the ice lanterns. I think they are very interesting. I want to eat delicious dumplings. It will be a fun trip.
【知识点】
英语写作、旅游话题表达、一般将来时运用
【点评】
本题为英语写作提优专项训练，通过给定“三步五要素法”和范文，引导学生掌握旅游计划类短文的写作结构，结合提示词降低写作难度，既考查词汇运用，又锻炼篇章组织能力，实用性强。
【难度系数】
0.3
