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假如你叫李华，请根据以下要点写一篇短文来介绍你三餐的饮食习惯。
要点：1.你三餐都吃些什么？ 2.在所吃的食物中，哪些对身体有益或有害？ 3.对于有益或有害的食物，你打算怎样做呢？
注意：1.作文必须包括上述所有要点，可适当发挥；2.词数不少于80。
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假如你叫李华，请根据以下要点写一篇短文来介绍你三餐的饮食习惯。
要点：1.你三餐都吃些什么？ 2.在所吃的食物中，哪些对身体有益或有害？ 3.对于有益或有害的食物，你打算怎样做呢？
注意：1.作文必须包括上述所有要点，可适当发挥；2.词数不少于80。
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答案
Unit 3 主题写作专项
基础版范文
My name is Li Hua. I eat three meals a day. Let me tell you something about my three meals.
For breakfast, I usually have an egg, some bread and milk. Eggs are delicious and milk is good for my health.
I usually have some fish, tomatoes and rice for lunch. Sometimes I eat fast food. Fish, tomatoes and rice are good for my health. But fast food has lots of fat and salt. It may cause heart problems.
For dinner, I usually have some vegetables and porridge. Fresh vegetables are good for my health and I will eat more vegetables.
All in all, it is important to have good eating habits and I will have more healthy food and drinks and less fast food.
进阶版范文
My name is Li Hua. I eat three meals a day. Let me tell you something more about my three meals.
For breakfast, I usually have two pieces of bread, an egg and a glass of milk. Eggs are delicious, so they are my favourite food. I think that milk is good for my health and it can help me to have strong bones.
I usually have some fish, tomatoes and rice for lunch. They are good for my health. I eat fast food once in a while. However, fast food has lots of fat and salt. What's worse, it may cause heart problems.
For dinner, I usually have some vegetables and porridge. Fresh vegetables can keep me fit and I will eat as many vegetables as possible.
All in all, you are what you eat. It is important to have good eating habits and I will have more healthy food and less fast food.
基础版范文
My name is Li Hua. I eat three meals a day. Let me tell you something about my three meals.
For breakfast, I usually have an egg, some bread and milk. Eggs are delicious and milk is good for my health.
I usually have some fish, tomatoes and rice for lunch. Sometimes I eat fast food. Fish, tomatoes and rice are good for my health. But fast food has lots of fat and salt. It may cause heart problems.
For dinner, I usually have some vegetables and porridge. Fresh vegetables are good for my health and I will eat more vegetables.
All in all, it is important to have good eating habits and I will have more healthy food and drinks and less fast food.
进阶版范文
My name is Li Hua. I eat three meals a day. Let me tell you something more about my three meals.
For breakfast, I usually have two pieces of bread, an egg and a glass of milk. Eggs are delicious, so they are my favourite food. I think that milk is good for my health and it can help me to have strong bones.
I usually have some fish, tomatoes and rice for lunch. They are good for my health. I eat fast food once in a while. However, fast food has lots of fat and salt. What's worse, it may cause heart problems.
For dinner, I usually have some vegetables and porridge. Fresh vegetables can keep me fit and I will eat as many vegetables as possible.
All in all, you are what you eat. It is important to have good eating habits and I will have more healthy food and less fast food.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份介绍三餐饮食习惯，需覆盖三个要点：三餐食物、食物的利弊、针对利弊的打算。解题思路为：1. 开头点明身份与写作主题；2. 分早、中、晚三餐依次介绍所吃食物；3. 分析每种食物对健康的影响，区分有益与有害食物；4. 说明针对有益食物的坚持和有害食物的改进计划；5. 结尾总结良好饮食习惯的重要性，确保要点齐全、词数达标。
【解析】
按照写作思路，具体步骤如下：
1. 开头引入：My name is Li Hua. I eat three meals a day. Let me tell you something about my three meals.
2. 早餐描述：For breakfast, I usually have an egg, some bread and milk. Eggs are delicious and milk is good for my health.
3. 午餐描述：I usually have some fish, tomatoes and rice for lunch. Sometimes I eat fast food. Fish, tomatoes and rice are good for my health. But fast food has lots of fat and salt. It may cause heart problems.
4. 晚餐描述：For dinner, I usually have some vegetables and porridge. Fresh vegetables are good for my health and I will eat more vegetables.
5. 结尾总结：All in all, it is important to have good eating habits and I will have more healthy food and drinks and less fast food.
【答案】
My name is Li Hua. I eat three meals a day. Let me tell you something about my three meals.
For breakfast, I usually have an egg, some bread and milk. Eggs are delicious and milk is good for my health.
I usually have some fish, tomatoes and rice for lunch. Sometimes I eat fast food. Fish, tomatoes and rice are good for my health. But fast food has lots of fat and salt. It may cause heart problems.
For dinner, I usually have some vegetables and porridge. Fresh vegetables are good for my health and I will eat more vegetables.
All in all, it is important to have good eating habits and I will have more healthy food and drinks and less fast food.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、健康饮食话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖三餐食物、食物利弊、改进打算三个核心要点，语言通顺，结构清晰，符合初中英语写作的规范，是一篇优秀的范文，适合学生学习参考。
【难度系数】
0.7
本题要求以李华的身份介绍三餐饮食习惯，需覆盖三个要点：三餐食物、食物的利弊、针对利弊的打算。解题思路为：1. 开头点明身份与写作主题；2. 分早、中、晚三餐依次介绍所吃食物；3. 分析每种食物对健康的影响，区分有益与有害食物；4. 说明针对有益食物的坚持和有害食物的改进计划；5. 结尾总结良好饮食习惯的重要性，确保要点齐全、词数达标。
【解析】
按照写作思路，具体步骤如下：
1. 开头引入：My name is Li Hua. I eat three meals a day. Let me tell you something about my three meals.
2. 早餐描述：For breakfast, I usually have an egg, some bread and milk. Eggs are delicious and milk is good for my health.
3. 午餐描述：I usually have some fish, tomatoes and rice for lunch. Sometimes I eat fast food. Fish, tomatoes and rice are good for my health. But fast food has lots of fat and salt. It may cause heart problems.
4. 晚餐描述：For dinner, I usually have some vegetables and porridge. Fresh vegetables are good for my health and I will eat more vegetables.
5. 结尾总结：All in all, it is important to have good eating habits and I will have more healthy food and drinks and less fast food.
【答案】
My name is Li Hua. I eat three meals a day. Let me tell you something about my three meals.
For breakfast, I usually have an egg, some bread and milk. Eggs are delicious and milk is good for my health.
I usually have some fish, tomatoes and rice for lunch. Sometimes I eat fast food. Fish, tomatoes and rice are good for my health. But fast food has lots of fat and salt. It may cause heart problems.
For dinner, I usually have some vegetables and porridge. Fresh vegetables are good for my health and I will eat more vegetables.
All in all, it is important to have good eating habits and I will have more healthy food and drinks and less fast food.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、健康饮食话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖三餐食物、食物利弊、改进打算三个核心要点，语言通顺，结构清晰，符合初中英语写作的规范，是一篇优秀的范文，适合学生学习参考。
【难度系数】
0.7
