登录
成长路上，你或许曾被一位音乐家的故事或作品所触动。这个人可能并不为你所熟知，但他的经历或音乐却在某个瞬间深深影响了你，让你对梦想、坚持或文化有了新的认识。请结合自身经历，以“A Musician Made a Difference to Me”为题，写一篇英语短文，词数100左右。
A Musician Made a Difference to Me
写作佳句
1. 但对我影响最大的那个人是音乐家贝多芬。
But the one who
2. 当我小的时候，我每天被迫练习弹钢琴。
When I was young, I
3. 它听起来很动人，仿佛在直接向我的灵魂倾诉。
It sounded
4. 虽然他逐渐失去了听力，但他从未放弃自己的音乐梦想。
Though he lost his hearing gradually, he never
5. 它不是浪费时间，而是一种表达情感和讲述故事的方式。
思路导引
1. 人称：第
2. 时态：
3. 体裁：
4. 列提纲
---
思维导图（红框内）
A Musician Made a Difference to Me
- 开门见山，引出主题 → the one who influenced me the most is the musician Beethoven
- 过去的困境
- was forced to practise playing the piano every day
- got tired of it
- playing music was just a waste of time
- 转折与触动
- 贝多芬的作品 → 图1
- deeply moving
- was speaking directly to my soul
- 了解贝多芬的故事
- lost his hearing gradually but never gave up his music dream
- created many great pieces
- 感悟与改变
- 领悟到音乐的意义 → not a waste of time, but a way to express feelings and tell stories
- 行动改变 → started playing the piano again
---
写作范例
A Musician Made a Difference to Me
In our life, many people may make a difference to us. But the one who influenced me the most is the musician Beethoven.
When I was young, I was forced to practise playing the piano every day. Day after day, I got tired of it. I thought playing music was just a waste of time.
Last month, I happened to hear a piece of music—Symphony No. 9 in D Minor, Op. 125, created by Beethoven. It sounded deeply moving, as if it was speaking directly to my soul. I lost myself in the music. Later, I learnt more about him. Though he lost his hearing gradually, he never gave up his music dream. He created many great pieces in his life.
From then on I realized the meaning of music. It is not a waste of time, but a way to express feelings and tell stories. I started playing the piano again, and this time, I played for myself.
A Musician Made a Difference to Me
写作佳句
1. 但对我影响最大的那个人是音乐家贝多芬。
But the one who
influenced
me
the
most
is the musician Beethoven.2. 当我小的时候，我每天被迫练习弹钢琴。
When I was young, I
was
forced
to
practise playing the piano every day.3. 它听起来很动人，仿佛在直接向我的灵魂倾诉。
It sounded
deeply
moving
, as
if
it was speaking directly to my soul.4. 虽然他逐渐失去了听力，但他从未放弃自己的音乐梦想。
Though he lost his hearing gradually, he never
gave
up
his music dream.5. 它不是浪费时间，而是一种表达情感和讲述故事的方式。
It
is
not
a waste of time, but
a way to express feelings and tell stories.思路导引
1. 人称：第
一、三
人称2. 时态：
一般过去时
3. 体裁：
记叙
文4. 列提纲
---
思维导图（红框内）
A Musician Made a Difference to Me
- 开门见山，引出主题 → the one who influenced me the most is the musician Beethoven
- 过去的困境
- was forced to practise playing the piano every day
- got tired of it
- playing music was just a waste of time
- 转折与触动
- 贝多芬的作品 → 图1
- deeply moving
- was speaking directly to my soul
- 了解贝多芬的故事
- lost his hearing gradually but never gave up his music dream
- created many great pieces
- 感悟与改变
- 领悟到音乐的意义 → not a waste of time, but a way to express feelings and tell stories
- 行动改变 → started playing the piano again
---
写作范例
A Musician Made a Difference to Me
In our life, many people may make a difference to us. But the one who influenced me the most is the musician Beethoven.
When I was young, I was forced to practise playing the piano every day. Day after day, I got tired of it. I thought playing music was just a waste of time.
Last month, I happened to hear a piece of music—Symphony No. 9 in D Minor, Op. 125, created by Beethoven. It sounded deeply moving, as if it was speaking directly to my soul. I lost myself in the music. Later, I learnt more about him. Though he lost his hearing gradually, he never gave up his music dream. He created many great pieces in his life.
From then on I realized the meaning of music. It is not a waste of time, but a way to express feelings and tell stories. I started playing the piano again, and this time, I played for myself.
答案
1. influenced me the most
2. was forced to
3. deeply moving; as if
4. gave up
5. It is not; but
1. 一、三 2. 一般过去时 3. 记叙
2. was forced to
3. deeply moving; as if
4. gave up
5. It is not; but
1. 一、三 2. 一般过去时 3. 记叙
