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兴趣是最好的老师,不同的兴趣爱好带给每个人不同的感受。你校英语俱乐部正在举行英语征文比赛,请你以“My favourite hobby”为题,用英语写一篇文章参赛。
要点:
1. 你的兴趣爱好。
2. 你喜欢这项兴趣爱好的原因(至少2个)。
3. 你的偶像及梦想。
要求:
1. 内容必须包含所给要点的信息。
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 文中不得透露个人信息。
4. 词数90左右,已给出部分不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]1. 文体:记叙文。2. 时态:一般现在时。3. 人称:以第一人称为主。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
My favourite hobby
Different people have different hobbies.
兴趣是最好的老师,不同的兴趣爱好带给每个人不同的感受。你校英语俱乐部正在举行英语征文比赛,请你以“My favourite hobby”为题,用英语写一篇文章参赛。
要点:
1. 你的兴趣爱好。
2. 你喜欢这项兴趣爱好的原因(至少2个)。
3. 你的偶像及梦想。
要求:
1. 内容必须包含所给要点的信息。
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3. 文中不得透露个人信息。
4. 词数90左右,已给出部分不计入总词数。
[思路点拨]1. 文体:记叙文。2. 时态:一般现在时。3. 人称:以第一人称为主。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
My favourite hobby
Different people have different hobbies.
As for me, I like playing basketball best.
First, it is fun to play basketball. I often play basketball with my friends after school. What's more, we often talk about basketball and watch basketball matches on TV.
Second, basketball can also make me feel proud when we win the matches. I'm a member of our school basketball team. We often play basketball with other teams after school. It is really great to win the games.
Yao Ming is my favourite basketball player and my hero.
I want to be a great basketball player like him. I hope my dream can come true.
答案
One possible version:
My favourite hobby
Different people have different hobbies. As for me, I like playing basketball best.
First, it is fun to play basketball. I often play basketball with my friends after school. What's more, we often talk about basketball and watch basketball matches on TV. Second, basketball can also make me feel proud when we win the matches. I'm a member of our school basketball team. We often play basketball with other teams after school. It is really great to win the games.
Yao Ming is my favourite basketball player and my hero. I want to be a great basketball player like him. I hope my dream can come true.
My favourite hobby
Different people have different hobbies. As for me, I like playing basketball best.
First, it is fun to play basketball. I often play basketball with my friends after school. What's more, we often talk about basketball and watch basketball matches on TV. Second, basketball can also make me feel proud when we win the matches. I'm a member of our school basketball team. We often play basketball with other teams after school. It is really great to win the games.
Yao Ming is my favourite basketball player and my hero. I want to be a great basketball player like him. I hope my dream can come true.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇英语话题记叙文写作，主题为“My favourite hobby”。解题时需先确定具体爱好，再围绕“爱好的原因（至少2点）、偶像及梦想”三个核心要点展开，使用一般现在时、第一人称，补充细节使行文连贯，满足词数要求即可。
【解析】
1. 开头承接给定句“Different people have different hobbies.”，点明自己的爱好（如playing basketball）；
2. 分两点说明喜欢的原因：第一点阐述爱好的趣味性（和朋友打球、讨论、看比赛）；第二点说明爱好带来的积极感受（赢比赛的自豪感、加入校队的经历）；
3. 写出相关偶像（如Yao Ming），并明确自己的梦想（成为像偶像一样的篮球运动员）；
4. 结尾表达对梦想的期望，确保内容完整、语句通顺，符合征文要求。
【答案】
My favourite hobby
Different people have different hobbies. As for me, I like playing basketball best.
First, it is fun to play basketball. I often play basketball with my friends after school. What's more, we often talk about basketball and watch basketball matches on TV. Second, basketball can also make me feel proud when we win the matches. I'm a member of our school basketball team. We often play basketball with other teams after school. It is really great to win the games.
Yao Ming is my favourite basketball player and my hero. I want to be a great basketball player like him. I hope my dream can come true.
【知识点】
英语话题作文；英语记叙文写作
【点评】
本题围绕“爱好”主题，要求覆盖指定要点，写作时需紧扣核心内容，合理补充细节，运用正确时态和人称，使文章连贯自然，符合征文的规范要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一篇英语话题记叙文写作，主题为“My favourite hobby”。解题时需先确定具体爱好，再围绕“爱好的原因（至少2点）、偶像及梦想”三个核心要点展开，使用一般现在时、第一人称，补充细节使行文连贯，满足词数要求即可。
【解析】
1. 开头承接给定句“Different people have different hobbies.”，点明自己的爱好（如playing basketball）；
2. 分两点说明喜欢的原因：第一点阐述爱好的趣味性（和朋友打球、讨论、看比赛）；第二点说明爱好带来的积极感受（赢比赛的自豪感、加入校队的经历）；
3. 写出相关偶像（如Yao Ming），并明确自己的梦想（成为像偶像一样的篮球运动员）；
4. 结尾表达对梦想的期望，确保内容完整、语句通顺，符合征文要求。
【答案】
My favourite hobby
Different people have different hobbies. As for me, I like playing basketball best.
First, it is fun to play basketball. I often play basketball with my friends after school. What's more, we often talk about basketball and watch basketball matches on TV. Second, basketball can also make me feel proud when we win the matches. I'm a member of our school basketball team. We often play basketball with other teams after school. It is really great to win the games.
Yao Ming is my favourite basketball player and my hero. I want to be a great basketball player like him. I hope my dream can come true.
【知识点】
英语话题作文；英语记叙文写作
【点评】
本题围绕“爱好”主题，要求覆盖指定要点，写作时需紧扣核心内容，合理补充细节，运用正确时态和人称，使文章连贯自然，符合征文的规范要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
