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句,更加简洁;⑤句可以修改为一个含有比较级的句子;⑥句可以拓展为一个复合句,进而提升语言魅力。
[升格专练]
A. 单句改错:请找出并改正下列句子中唯一的一处错误。
1. She smiled and thanked me warm.
2. These small acts made me realised that kindness spreads easily.
B. 句式升级:请根据要求完成下列句子。
1. Doing these is tiring. I felt happy inside.(用 though 改为复合句)
2. Small acts can create a warm world.(用比较级和 if 改写句子)
3. They mean a lot.(用 because 补充句子)
[高分范文] Small acts mean a lot
Great people not only make big achieve- ments in their work, but also care about others and warm the world. As middle school students, we can also help by doing some small acts.
Last month, I helped an old lady carry heavy bags upstairs. She smiled and thanked me warmly. Another time, I picked up litter in our schoolyard. Though doing these is tiring, I felt happy inside. These small acts made me realise that kindness spreads easily. A simple act of help can brighten someone's day. We don't need to do big things to make a difference. Small acts can create a warmer world if everyone can do small things for others.
So let's start with small acts. We should call on more people to do more small things because they mean a lot to others.
[升格专练]
A. 单句改错:请找出并改正下列句子中唯一的一处错误。
1. She smiled and thanked me warm.
She smiled and thanked me warmly.
2. These small acts made me realised that kindness spreads easily.
These small acts made me realise that kindness spreads easily.
B. 句式升级:请根据要求完成下列句子。
1. Doing these is tiring. I felt happy inside.(用 though 改为复合句)
Though doing these is tiring, I felt happy inside.
2. Small acts can create a warm world.(用比较级和 if 改写句子)
Small acts can create a warmer world if everyone can do small things for others.
3. They mean a lot.(用 because 补充句子)
We should call on more people to do more small things because they mean a lot to others.
[高分范文] Small acts mean a lot
Great people not only make big achieve- ments in their work, but also care about others and warm the world. As middle school students, we can also help by doing some small acts.
Last month, I helped an old lady carry heavy bags upstairs. She smiled and thanked me warmly. Another time, I picked up litter in our schoolyard. Though doing these is tiring, I felt happy inside. These small acts made me realise that kindness spreads easily. A simple act of help can brighten someone's day. We don't need to do big things to make a difference. Small acts can create a warmer world if everyone can do small things for others.
So let's start with small acts. We should call on more people to do more small things because they mean a lot to others.
答案
A. 1. She smiled and thanked me warmly.
2. These small acts made me realise that kindness spreads easily.
B. 1. Though doing these is tiring, I felt happy inside.
2. Small acts can create a warmer world if everyone can do small things for others.
3. We should call on more people to do more small things because they mean a lot to others.
2. These small acts made me realise that kindness spreads easily.
B. 1. Though doing these is tiring, I felt happy inside.
2. Small acts can create a warmer world if everyone can do small things for others.
3. We should call on more people to do more small things because they mean a lot to others.
自主训练
假定你是李华，考试临近，同学们压力较大。英语老师 Mrs. White 为此组织了以“A few ways to deal with stress”为题的活动。请根据你们小组讨论后制作的海报，写一篇英语发言稿，代表小组在班上作总结发言。词数80左右。提示：
A few ways to deal with stress
Good morning, everyone! Recently, many students have felt stressed because exams are coming. In our group, we discussed a few ways to deal with stress.
Thank you for listening!
假定你是李华，考试临近，同学们压力较大。英语老师 Mrs. White 为此组织了以“A few ways to deal with stress”为题的活动。请根据你们小组讨论后制作的海报，写一篇英语发言稿，代表小组在班上作总结发言。词数80左右。提示：
A few ways to deal with stress
Good morning, everyone! Recently, many students have felt stressed because exams are coming. In our group, we discussed a few ways to deal with stress.
First, listening to soft music can help us relax our minds.
Second, we should exercise every day to keep our bodies strong and our minds sharp.
Third, eating proper meals is important.
Besides, getting enough rest every night is necessary for us.
We should also express our feelings to friends or family when we feel worried.
Most importantly, we should stay positive.
Believing in ourselves can reduce stress a lot.
Let's try these ways and relieve our stress to face exams with a calm mind.
Thank you for listening!
答案
One possible version:
A few ways to deal with stress
Good morning, everyone! Recently, many students have felt stressed because exams are coming. In our group, we discussed a few ways to deal with stress.
First, listening to soft music can help us relax our minds. Second, we should exercise every day to keep our bodies strong and our minds sharp. Third, eating proper meals is important. Besides, getting enough rest every night is necessary for us. We should also express our feelings to friends or family when we feel worried. Most importantly, we should stay positive. Believing in ourselves can reduce stress a lot.
Let's try these ways and relieve our stress to face exams with a calm mind.
Thank you for listening!
A few ways to deal with stress
Good morning, everyone! Recently, many students have felt stressed because exams are coming. In our group, we discussed a few ways to deal with stress.
First, listening to soft music can help us relax our minds. Second, we should exercise every day to keep our bodies strong and our minds sharp. Third, eating proper meals is important. Besides, getting enough rest every night is necessary for us. We should also express our feelings to friends or family when we feel worried. Most importantly, we should stay positive. Believing in ourselves can reduce stress a lot.
Let's try these ways and relieve our stress to face exams with a calm mind.
Thank you for listening!
