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(2025·江苏无锡宜兴实验中学调研)旅行让人开阔眼界，增长知识。假如你们学校的英语报刊以“Man who travels far knows more”为题进行征稿，请根据以下要点提示，用英语写一份稿件投稿，介绍一次令你印象深刻的旅行经历以及这次旅行带给你的收获或感悟。
【要点】
1. When and where did you travel? How did you go there?
2. What did you do during your travel?
3. What have you got from this travel experience?
【要求】
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，表达清楚，语法正确。
2. 必须包括所有相关信息，可作适当发挥。
3. 词数不少于90，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Man who travels far knows more
I have travelled to some places.
(2025·江苏无锡宜兴实验中学调研)旅行让人开阔眼界，增长知识。假如你们学校的英语报刊以“Man who travels far knows more”为题进行征稿，请根据以下要点提示，用英语写一份稿件投稿，介绍一次令你印象深刻的旅行经历以及这次旅行带给你的收获或感悟。
【要点】
1. When and where did you travel? How did you go there?
2. What did you do during your travel?
3. What have you got from this travel experience?
【要求】
1. 语句通顺，意思连贯，表达清楚，语法正确。
2. 必须包括所有相关信息，可作适当发挥。
3. 词数不少于90，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Man who travels far knows more
I have travelled to some places.
答案
Man who travels far knows more
I have travelled to some places. Last summer, I went to Hangzhou with my parents by high-speed train. It was a fast and comfortable trip that only took us three hours.
Hangzhou is well-known for the West Lake. We spent most of our days around this beautiful lake. We rented a tandem bike and rode along the lake paths, enjoying the pretty views of pink lotus flowers and waving willow branches. We also visited Leifeng Pagoda, where we learned the famous story of the White Snake from the guide. Besides, we tasted lots of local delicious food, like West Lake Vinegar Fish and sweet osmanthus cakes. We even chatted with some local elders in a small teahouse, who shared many old stories about Hangzhou's history.
From this travel experience, I have gained a lot. I not only enjoyed amazing natural scenery but also learned rich local culture that I couldn't get from textbooks. I realize that travelling is a wonderful way to open my mind. It makes me understand that the world is full of amazing things to explore, and we can learn more about life when we go out and see the world with our own eyes. I'm looking forward to my next journey!
I have travelled to some places. Last summer, I went to Hangzhou with my parents by high-speed train. It was a fast and comfortable trip that only took us three hours.
Hangzhou is well-known for the West Lake. We spent most of our days around this beautiful lake. We rented a tandem bike and rode along the lake paths, enjoying the pretty views of pink lotus flowers and waving willow branches. We also visited Leifeng Pagoda, where we learned the famous story of the White Snake from the guide. Besides, we tasted lots of local delicious food, like West Lake Vinegar Fish and sweet osmanthus cakes. We even chatted with some local elders in a small teahouse, who shared many old stories about Hangzhou's history.
From this travel experience, I have gained a lot. I not only enjoyed amazing natural scenery but also learned rich local culture that I couldn't get from textbooks. I realize that travelling is a wonderful way to open my mind. It makes me understand that the world is full of amazing things to explore, and we can learn more about life when we go out and see the world with our own eyes. I'm looking forward to my next journey!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先要先明确核心要求：这是一篇主题为“Man who travels far knows more”的英语征稿，需要完整覆盖题干给出的三个指定要点，同时做到语句通顺、词数达标。我们可以按三步梳理思路：第一步先搭建行文框架，确定用夹叙夹议的三段式结构，分别对应三个要点；第二步填充内容，第一部分承接给定开头，直接交代旅行的时间、地点、交通方式这些基础信息，补充合理细节让内容更真实；第二部分围绕目的地的特色设计具体的旅行活动，不要生硬罗列，加入景点、美食、人文互动的细节，满足“适当发挥”的要求；第三部分紧扣标题的“远行知更多”核心，把旅行收获和课本之外的知识、眼界拓展结合起来升华主题；最后写完后核查所有要点是否全覆盖，时态语法是否准确，确认词数满足不少于90的要求，调整语句让衔接更通顺。
【解析】
步骤1：搭建清晰的行文结构，匹配所有写作要求：
① 开篇承接给定开头，完成要点1内容：明确交代旅行时间为去年夏天，和父母一起乘坐高铁前往杭州，补充高铁行程仅耗时3小时的细节，清晰传递全部基础信息。
② 主体段落完成要点2内容：围绕杭州的标志性特色展开叙事，依次描写环湖骑行赏荷、游览雷峰塔了解白蛇传传说、品尝西湖醋鱼等特色美食、在茶馆和当地老人聊天了解城市历史的具体活动，细节饱满，逻辑连贯。
③ 结尾段落完成要点3内容：紧扣征稿主题，点明本次旅行既欣赏了优美的自然风光，又收获了课本之外的本土文化知识，真正实现了开阔眼界的意义，直接呼应标题“Man who travels far knows more”，升华主旨。
步骤2：合规性核查：确认所有题干指定要点全部覆盖，叙事部分统一使用一般过去时、感悟部分使用现在完成时/一般现在时，时态运用准确，总词数远超90词，完全符合所有写作规则。
【答案】
Man who travels far knows more
I have travelled to some places. Last summer, I went to Hangzhou with my parents by high-speed train. It was a fast and comfortable trip that only took us three hours.
Hangzhou is well-known for the West Lake. We spent most of our days around this beautiful lake. We rented a tandem bike and rode along the lake paths, enjoying the pretty views of pink lotus flowers and waving willow branches. We also visited Leifeng Pagoda, where we learned the famous story of the White Snake from the guide. Besides, we tasted lots of local delicious food, like West Lake Vinegar Fish and sweet osmanthus cakes. We even chatted with some local elders in a small teahouse, who shared many old stories about Hangzhou's history.
From this travel experience, I have gained a lot. I not only enjoyed amazing natural scenery but also learned rich local culture that I couldn't get from textbooks. I realize that travelling is a wonderful way to open my mind. It makes me understand that the world is full of amazing things to explore, and we can learn more about life when we go out and see the world with our own eyes. I'm looking forward to my next journey!
【知识点】
1. 旅行类话题写作
2. 一般过去时应用
3. 夹叙夹议行文
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干所有要求的信息点，叙事部分细节饱满有画面感，感悟部分精准扣住征稿主题，将旅行的收获与“远行增知、开阔眼界”的核心立意深度结合，用到了定语从句、场景描写等多样的表达技巧，语句衔接流畅自然，是一篇符合投稿要求的高质量征文，也为同类旅行主题写作提供了非常规范的参考范本。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题首先要先明确核心要求：这是一篇主题为“Man who travels far knows more”的英语征稿，需要完整覆盖题干给出的三个指定要点，同时做到语句通顺、词数达标。我们可以按三步梳理思路：第一步先搭建行文框架，确定用夹叙夹议的三段式结构，分别对应三个要点；第二步填充内容，第一部分承接给定开头，直接交代旅行的时间、地点、交通方式这些基础信息，补充合理细节让内容更真实；第二部分围绕目的地的特色设计具体的旅行活动，不要生硬罗列，加入景点、美食、人文互动的细节，满足“适当发挥”的要求；第三部分紧扣标题的“远行知更多”核心，把旅行收获和课本之外的知识、眼界拓展结合起来升华主题；最后写完后核查所有要点是否全覆盖，时态语法是否准确，确认词数满足不少于90的要求，调整语句让衔接更通顺。
【解析】
步骤1：搭建清晰的行文结构，匹配所有写作要求：
① 开篇承接给定开头，完成要点1内容：明确交代旅行时间为去年夏天，和父母一起乘坐高铁前往杭州，补充高铁行程仅耗时3小时的细节，清晰传递全部基础信息。
② 主体段落完成要点2内容：围绕杭州的标志性特色展开叙事，依次描写环湖骑行赏荷、游览雷峰塔了解白蛇传传说、品尝西湖醋鱼等特色美食、在茶馆和当地老人聊天了解城市历史的具体活动，细节饱满，逻辑连贯。
③ 结尾段落完成要点3内容：紧扣征稿主题，点明本次旅行既欣赏了优美的自然风光，又收获了课本之外的本土文化知识，真正实现了开阔眼界的意义，直接呼应标题“Man who travels far knows more”，升华主旨。
步骤2：合规性核查：确认所有题干指定要点全部覆盖，叙事部分统一使用一般过去时、感悟部分使用现在完成时/一般现在时，时态运用准确，总词数远超90词，完全符合所有写作规则。
【答案】
Man who travels far knows more
I have travelled to some places. Last summer, I went to Hangzhou with my parents by high-speed train. It was a fast and comfortable trip that only took us three hours.
Hangzhou is well-known for the West Lake. We spent most of our days around this beautiful lake. We rented a tandem bike and rode along the lake paths, enjoying the pretty views of pink lotus flowers and waving willow branches. We also visited Leifeng Pagoda, where we learned the famous story of the White Snake from the guide. Besides, we tasted lots of local delicious food, like West Lake Vinegar Fish and sweet osmanthus cakes. We even chatted with some local elders in a small teahouse, who shared many old stories about Hangzhou's history.
From this travel experience, I have gained a lot. I not only enjoyed amazing natural scenery but also learned rich local culture that I couldn't get from textbooks. I realize that travelling is a wonderful way to open my mind. It makes me understand that the world is full of amazing things to explore, and we can learn more about life when we go out and see the world with our own eyes. I'm looking forward to my next journey!
【知识点】
1. 旅行类话题写作
2. 一般过去时应用
3. 夹叙夹议行文
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干所有要求的信息点，叙事部分细节饱满有画面感，感悟部分精准扣住征稿主题，将旅行的收获与“远行增知、开阔眼界”的核心立意深度结合，用到了定语从句、场景描写等多样的表达技巧，语句衔接流畅自然，是一篇符合投稿要求的高质量征文，也为同类旅行主题写作提供了非常规范的参考范本。
【难度系数】
0.6
