写作突破
一、题目呈现
良好的记忆力是我们学习和生活中不可或缺的重要能力。请你以“How to Improve Our Memory”为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍提升记忆力的方法。
要求:要点齐全,语句通顺,行文连贯,可适当发挥,不少于80词。
二、写作模板
| 模块 | 内容 |
|--------|-|
| 开篇点题 | 引出话题,说明记忆力的重要性:
| 主要内容 | 详细介绍提升记忆力的方法:
| 收篇结尾 | 升华主题,谈谈自己的感悟:
(标注:图1)
三、经典词句
| 类别 | 内容 |
|------|-|
| 单词 | memory, habit, sleep, exercise, skill, efficient, important, helpful, repeat, review, concentrate |
| 短语 | play an important role in, improve one's memory, form a good habit, connect ... with ..., keep in mind |
| 句子 | ①Memory plays an important role in ...
②First, we should ... Second, we need to ... Third, we can ...
③In my opinion, a good memory is a(n) ...
④If we keep ..., our memory will ... |
(标注:图2)
四、例文展示
How to Improve Our Memory
Memory plays an important role in our studies and daily lives. A good memory can help us learn new things more quickly and remember important things more easily. So how can we improve our memory?
First, we should review what we have learnt regularly. Repeating information helps us keep it in our mind for a longer time. Second, we need to form healthy habits. Getting enough sleep and doing exercise every day can keep our brain active and make our memory sharper. Third, we can use some useful skills. For example, connecting new words with interesting pictures or grouping similar information together can make things easier to remember.
In my opinion, a good memory is a great helper in study. If we keep practising these methods, our memory will become better and better, and we will learn more efficiently.
一、题目呈现
良好的记忆力是我们学习和生活中不可或缺的重要能力。请你以“How to Improve Our Memory”为题,用英语写一篇短文,介绍提升记忆力的方法。
要求:要点齐全,语句通顺,行文连贯,可适当发挥,不少于80词。
二、写作模板
| 模块 | 内容 |
|--------|-|
| 开篇点题 | 引出话题,说明记忆力的重要性:
Memory plays an important role in our studies and daily lives.
|| 主要内容 | 详细介绍提升记忆力的方法:
First, we should ... Second, we need to ... Third, we can ...
|| 收篇结尾 | 升华主题,谈谈自己的感悟:
In my opinion, a good memory is a(n) ... If we keep ..., our memory will ...
|(标注:图1)
三、经典词句
| 类别 | 内容 |
|------|-|
| 单词 | memory, habit, sleep, exercise, skill, efficient, important, helpful, repeat, review, concentrate |
| 短语 | play an important role in, improve one's memory, form a good habit, connect ... with ..., keep in mind |
| 句子 | ①Memory plays an important role in ...
②First, we should ... Second, we need to ... Third, we can ...
③In my opinion, a good memory is a(n) ...
④If we keep ..., our memory will ... |
(标注:图2)
四、例文展示
How to Improve Our Memory
Memory plays an important role in our studies and daily lives. A good memory can help us learn new things more quickly and remember important things more easily. So how can we improve our memory?
First, we should review what we have learnt regularly. Repeating information helps us keep it in our mind for a longer time. Second, we need to form healthy habits. Getting enough sleep and doing exercise every day can keep our brain active and make our memory sharper. Third, we can use some useful skills. For example, connecting new words with interesting pictures or grouping similar information together can make things easier to remember.
In my opinion, a good memory is a great helper in study. If we keep practising these methods, our memory will become better and better, and we will learn more efficiently.
答案
引出话题,说明记忆力的重要性:Memory plays an important role in our studies and daily lives.
详细介绍提升记忆力的方法:First, we should ... Second, we need to ... Third, we can ...
升华主题,谈谈自己的感悟:In my opinion, a good memory is a(n) ... If we keep ..., our memory will ...
详细介绍提升记忆力的方法:First, we should ... Second, we need to ... Third, we can ...
升华主题,谈谈自己的感悟:In my opinion, a good memory is a(n) ... If we keep ..., our memory will ...
解析
【分析】
首先明确题目要求:以“How to Improve Our Memory”为题写英语短文,需包含开篇点题(说明记忆力重要性)、主要内容(提升记忆力的方法)、收篇结尾(个人感悟)三个模块,要求要点齐全、语句通顺、行文连贯、不少于80词。解题时需结合给定的写作模板、经典词句,运用指定句型组织内容,确保符合要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题:用指定句子“Memory plays an important role in our studies and daily lives.”引出话题,说明记忆力在学习和生活中的重要性,自然过渡到如何提升记忆力。
2. 主要内容:分三点介绍提升方法,用First、Second、Third连接,第一点是定期复习所学内容,第二点是养成健康习惯(保证充足睡眠、坚持锻炼),第三点是运用记忆技巧(如将新内容与熟悉事物关联),结合给定的单词、短语。
3. 收篇结尾:用指定句型“In my opinion...”升华主题,表达坚持这些方法会让记忆力越来越好的感悟,呼应开头。
【答案】
How to Improve Our Memory
Memory plays an important role in our studies and daily lives. A good memory can help us learn new things more quickly and remember important things more easily. So how can we improve our memory?
First, we should review what we have learnt regularly. Repeating information helps us keep it in our mind for a longer time. Second, we need to form healthy habits. Getting enough sleep and doing exercise every day can keep our brain active and make our memory sharper. Third, we can use some useful skills. For example, connecting new words with interesting pictures or grouping similar information together can make things easier to remember.
In my opinion, a good memory is a great helper in study. If we keep practising these methods, our memory will become better and better, and we will learn more efficiently.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语常用表达运用
【点评】
该范文结构清晰,严格遵循题目要求,要点齐全,运用了指定的单词、短语和句型,语句通顺,行文连贯,符合不少于80词的要求,是一篇符合标准的优秀写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
首先明确题目要求:以“How to Improve Our Memory”为题写英语短文,需包含开篇点题(说明记忆力重要性)、主要内容(提升记忆力的方法)、收篇结尾(个人感悟)三个模块,要求要点齐全、语句通顺、行文连贯、不少于80词。解题时需结合给定的写作模板、经典词句,运用指定句型组织内容,确保符合要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题:用指定句子“Memory plays an important role in our studies and daily lives.”引出话题,说明记忆力在学习和生活中的重要性,自然过渡到如何提升记忆力。
2. 主要内容:分三点介绍提升方法,用First、Second、Third连接,第一点是定期复习所学内容,第二点是养成健康习惯(保证充足睡眠、坚持锻炼),第三点是运用记忆技巧(如将新内容与熟悉事物关联),结合给定的单词、短语。
3. 收篇结尾:用指定句型“In my opinion...”升华主题,表达坚持这些方法会让记忆力越来越好的感悟,呼应开头。
【答案】
How to Improve Our Memory
Memory plays an important role in our studies and daily lives. A good memory can help us learn new things more quickly and remember important things more easily. So how can we improve our memory?
First, we should review what we have learnt regularly. Repeating information helps us keep it in our mind for a longer time. Second, we need to form healthy habits. Getting enough sleep and doing exercise every day can keep our brain active and make our memory sharper. Third, we can use some useful skills. For example, connecting new words with interesting pictures or grouping similar information together can make things easier to remember.
In my opinion, a good memory is a great helper in study. If we keep practising these methods, our memory will become better and better, and we will learn more efficiently.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语常用表达运用
【点评】
该范文结构清晰,严格遵循题目要求,要点齐全,运用了指定的单词、短语和句型,语句通顺,行文连贯,符合不少于80词的要求,是一篇符合标准的优秀写作范文。
【难度系数】
0.3
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