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写作突破
一、题目呈现
你校正在开展“动物保护周”系列活动，英语俱乐部为此开展征文活动，要求介绍你了解的野生动物。请你用英语写一篇短文参加活动。
要求：要点齐全，语句通顺，行文连贯，可适当发挥，80词左右。
二、写作模板
| 模块 | 内容填写处 |
|------------|-|
| 开篇点题 | 说明动物的名称、外表： |
| 主要内容 | 说明动物的饮食习惯、能力、特点： |
| 收篇结尾 | 升华主题，说明动物的现状，并提出保护倡议： |
（标注：图1）
三、经典词句
| 类别 | 内容 |
|------|-|
| 单词 | large, small, heavy, tiny, weigh, ton, kilo, beautiful, eat, animal, ecosystem, protect |
| 短语 | live in, as much as, up to, play an important role in |
| 句子 | ①The ... is the ... animal on earth.
②It can weigh ...
③They live in ...
④They eat ...
⑤... help(s) to create a lively and healthy ecosystem.
⑥We must protect them. |
（标注：图2）
四、例文展示
Pandas are really cute with black and white fur. They have round bodies and black eyes which make them extremely lovely.
Pandas mainly eat bamboo. They spend most of their day eating and resting. Although they seem slow, they are good at climbing trees. They can live in high mountains with thick bamboo forests.
Sadly, people cut down too many bamboo plants, leaving them with less food and living space. We should protect their habitats and plant more bamboo. Let's work together to make sure pandas can live happily in the wild.
一、题目呈现
你校正在开展“动物保护周”系列活动，英语俱乐部为此开展征文活动，要求介绍你了解的野生动物。请你用英语写一篇短文参加活动。
要求：要点齐全，语句通顺，行文连贯，可适当发挥，80词左右。
二、写作模板
| 模块 | 内容填写处 |
|------------|-|
| 开篇点题 | 说明动物的名称、外表： |
| 主要内容 | 说明动物的饮食习惯、能力、特点： |
| 收篇结尾 | 升华主题，说明动物的现状，并提出保护倡议： |
（标注：图1）
三、经典词句
| 类别 | 内容 |
|------|-|
| 单词 | large, small, heavy, tiny, weigh, ton, kilo, beautiful, eat, animal, ecosystem, protect |
| 短语 | live in, as much as, up to, play an important role in |
| 句子 | ①The ... is the ... animal on earth.
②It can weigh ...
③They live in ...
④They eat ...
⑤... help(s) to create a lively and healthy ecosystem.
⑥We must protect them. |
（标注：图2）
四、例文展示
Pandas are really cute with black and white fur. They have round bodies and black eyes which make them extremely lovely.
Pandas mainly eat bamboo. They spend most of their day eating and resting. Although they seem slow, they are good at climbing trees. They can live in high mountains with thick bamboo forests.
Sadly, people cut down too many bamboo plants, leaving them with less food and living space. We should protect their habitats and plant more bamboo. Let's work together to make sure pandas can live happily in the wild.
答案
写作突破
说明动物的名称、外表：... are ... They have ...
说明动物的饮食习惯、能力、特点： ... eat ... They can ...
升华主题，说明动物的现状，并提出保护倡议： Sadly, ... We should ...
说明动物的名称、外表：... are ... They have ...
说明动物的饮食习惯、能力、特点： ... eat ... They can ...
升华主题，说明动物的现状，并提出保护倡议： Sadly, ... We should ...
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作题，主题是介绍野生动物并参与“动物保护周”征文。解题思路需紧扣题目要求，按照给定的三个写作模块（开篇点题、主要内容、收篇结尾）展开，结合提供的经典词句，确保覆盖所有要点（动物名称外表、饮食能力特点、现状与保护倡议），语句通顺，词数约80词。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开篇点题：明确介绍的野生动物，描述其名称与外表，运用经典词句如large等；2. 主要内容：说明该动物的饮食习惯、能力或特点，使用给定短语如live in、play an important role in等；3. 收篇结尾：点明动物现状，提出保护倡议，结合给定句子如Sadly... We should...等，保证行文连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】Elephants are large gentle animals with gray thick skin and long trunks. They can weigh up to 5 tons. They live in African forests and grasslands, eating leaves and fruits. They play an important role in the ecosystem. Sadly, their living areas are becoming smaller. We should stop destroying their homes and protect them. Let's work together to care for these amazing animals.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语词句运用
【点评】本题围绕“动物保护周”征文活动，考查学生的英语写作综合能力，要求结合给定模板与经典词句完成，注重要点齐全与行文连贯，贴合实际活动场景。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开篇点题：明确介绍的野生动物，描述其名称与外表，运用经典词句如large等；2. 主要内容：说明该动物的饮食习惯、能力或特点，使用给定短语如live in、play an important role in等；3. 收篇结尾：点明动物现状，提出保护倡议，结合给定句子如Sadly... We should...等，保证行文连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】Elephants are large gentle animals with gray thick skin and long trunks. They can weigh up to 5 tons. They live in African forests and grasslands, eating leaves and fruits. They play an important role in the ecosystem. Sadly, their living areas are becoming smaller. We should stop destroying their homes and protect them. Let's work together to care for these amazing animals.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、英语词句运用
【点评】本题围绕“动物保护周”征文活动，考查学生的英语写作综合能力，要求结合给定模板与经典词句完成，注重要点齐全与行文连贯，贴合实际活动场景。
【难度系数】0.6
