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七、书面表达。
新时代的广大青年要立大志、成大才，努力成为担当民族复兴重任的时代新人。在时代重任的召唤下，你将来想在什么工作岗位上为国家贡献力量呢？假如你是李华，将参加以“My Dream Job”为主题的全球青少年英语演讲大赛，请结合下列要点写一篇英文演讲稿。
写作要点包括：
1. 你的理想职业；
2. 想从事这个职业的原因；
3. 实现这一理想职业的措施。
写作要求：
1. 内容必须积极向上，并包含所给要点；
2. 结构完整，语句通顺，意思清晰、连贯；
3. 使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构，书写规范；
4. 文中不得透露个人信息；
5. 词数90左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Dream Job
Good morning, everyone. As we all know, young people must have their own dreams and fight for our nation. As a teenager, I want to
新时代的广大青年要立大志、成大才，努力成为担当民族复兴重任的时代新人。在时代重任的召唤下，你将来想在什么工作岗位上为国家贡献力量呢？假如你是李华，将参加以“My Dream Job”为主题的全球青少年英语演讲大赛，请结合下列要点写一篇英文演讲稿。
写作要点包括：
1. 你的理想职业；
2. 想从事这个职业的原因；
3. 实现这一理想职业的措施。
写作要求：
1. 内容必须积极向上，并包含所给要点；
2. 结构完整，语句通顺，意思清晰、连贯；
3. 使用正确和较丰富的词汇和语法结构，书写规范；
4. 文中不得透露个人信息；
5. 词数90左右（短文开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Dream Job
Good morning, everyone. As we all know, young people must have their own dreams and fight for our nation. As a teenager, I want to
be a teacher.
My dream of becoming a teacher was inspired by Mr Li, who was my teacher in primary school. When I saw the significant difference he made to us students, I was determined to be a person like him. I am passionate about changing the lives of others and guiding my students to become individuals who can make a contribution to our country.
To make my dream come true, not only will I spare no effort to learn my lessons, but I will also develop some qualities required to be a good teacher.
That's all. Thanks for your listening.
My dream of becoming a teacher was inspired by Mr Li, who was my teacher in primary school. When I saw the significant difference he made to us students, I was determined to be a person like him. I am passionate about changing the lives of others and guiding my students to become individuals who can make a contribution to our country.
To make my dream come true, not only will I spare no effort to learn my lessons, but I will also develop some qualities required to be a good teacher.
That's all. Thanks for your listening.
答案
One possible version:
My Dream Job
Good morning, everyone. As we all know, young people must have their own dreams and fight for our nation. As a teenager, I want to be a teacher.
My dream of becoming a teacher was inspired by Mr Li, who was my teacher in primary school. When I saw the significant difference he made to us students, I was determined to be a person like him. I am passionate about changing the lives of others and guiding my students to become individuals who can make a contribution to our country.
To make my dream come true, not only will I spare no effort to learn my lessons, but I will also develop some qualities required to be a good teacher.
That's all. Thanks for your listening.
My Dream Job
Good morning, everyone. As we all know, young people must have their own dreams and fight for our nation. As a teenager, I want to be a teacher.
My dream of becoming a teacher was inspired by Mr Li, who was my teacher in primary school. When I saw the significant difference he made to us students, I was determined to be a person like him. I am passionate about changing the lives of others and guiding my students to become individuals who can make a contribution to our country.
To make my dream come true, not only will I spare no effort to learn my lessons, but I will also develop some qualities required to be a good teacher.
That's all. Thanks for your listening.
解析
【分析】本题为英语演讲稿写作，主题是“My Dream Job”，需围绕三个核心要点展开：明确理想职业、说明选择该职业的原因、提出实现理想的措施。写作时要紧扣“青年担当民族复兴”的主题，内容积极向上，符合演讲稿格式，语句通顺，词数控制在90左右，不透露个人信息。
【解析】首先承接已给出的开头，明确理想职业为教师；接着结合自身经历（受小学李老师影响）阐述原因，说明教师能改变学生、助力国家的价值；最后提出实现措施：努力学习、培养教师所需品质；结尾礼貌致谢，完成演讲稿写作。
【答案】My Dream Job
Good morning, everyone. As we all know, young people must have their own dreams and fight for our nation. As a teenager, I want to be a teacher.
My dream of becoming a teacher was inspired by Mr Li, who was my teacher in primary school. When I saw the significant difference he made to us students, I was determined to be a person like him. I am passionate about changing the lives of others and guiding my students to become individuals who can make a contribution to our country.
To make my dream come true, not only will I spare no effort to learn my lessons, but I will also develop some qualities required to be a good teacher.
That's all. Thanks for your listening.
【知识点】英语书面表达、职业话题写作
【点评】这篇演讲稿紧扣主题，结构完整，涵盖所有写作要点，内容积极向上，语言通顺流畅，符合英语演讲稿的规范要求，适合参赛使用。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先承接已给出的开头，明确理想职业为教师；接着结合自身经历（受小学李老师影响）阐述原因，说明教师能改变学生、助力国家的价值；最后提出实现措施：努力学习、培养教师所需品质；结尾礼貌致谢，完成演讲稿写作。
【答案】My Dream Job
Good morning, everyone. As we all know, young people must have their own dreams and fight for our nation. As a teenager, I want to be a teacher.
My dream of becoming a teacher was inspired by Mr Li, who was my teacher in primary school. When I saw the significant difference he made to us students, I was determined to be a person like him. I am passionate about changing the lives of others and guiding my students to become individuals who can make a contribution to our country.
To make my dream come true, not only will I spare no effort to learn my lessons, but I will also develop some qualities required to be a good teacher.
That's all. Thanks for your listening.
【知识点】英语书面表达、职业话题写作
【点评】这篇演讲稿紧扣主题，结构完整，涵盖所有写作要点，内容积极向上，语言通顺流畅，符合英语演讲稿的规范要求，适合参赛使用。
【难度系数】0.6
