写作例析
假设你是李华，你的朋友 Jerry 去你家做客，他很喜欢你做的蔬菜沙拉。请你根据提示写一篇短文，告诉他蔬菜沙拉的制作方法。
| 原料 | 土豆、胡萝卜、洋葱、鸡蛋、蛋黄酱(mayonnaise)、盐和胡椒粉 |
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| 步骤 | 1. 把土豆、胡萝卜、洋葱洗干净并切块；
2. 锅里倒入水，将土豆丁、胡萝卜丁放入锅中煮 10 分钟，放入一个大碗里；
3. 把鸡蛋煮 8 分钟后，切碎并放入碗中；
4. 碗中加入洋葱粒、蛋黄酱、盐和胡椒粉搅拌。 |
写作要求: 1. 要包括以上要点，逻辑合理，层次分明；2. 70 词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
How to make vegetable salad
It's easy to make vegetable salad.
[审题指导]
1. 体裁: 说明文
2. 人称: 以第二人称为主
3. 时态: 以一般现在时为主
[思路构建]

[精彩范文]
How to make vegetable salad
It's easy to make vegetable salad.
First, wash a potato, a carrot and an onion and cut them into pieces. Next, pour some water into the pot and boil the potato and carrot for 10 minutes. Put them in a large bowl. Then, boil the eggs for 8 minutes. After that, cut up the eggs and put them in the bowl. Finally, add the onion, a cup of mayonnaise
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and a spoon of salt and mix them well. Of course, you can also add pepper.
Now it's ready. You can enjoy it.
高分点评: 1. 写作思路清晰，采用“总—分—总”三段式结构。 2. 一些短语的正确运用，比如: cut them into pieces, pour...into, cut up 等，展示了作者扎实的基本功。 3. 运用连接词 First, Next, Then, After that, Finally 来衔接句子，结构严谨。 4. 祈使句运用成为文章的加分点。
实战演练
假如你是李华，学校要举办“国际学生美食文化节”，来自不同国家的交换生们将分享他们的传统美食和背后的故事。作为活动组织者之一，请你以“My Favourite Dish”为题，用英语写一篇短文，向外国小伙伴们介绍一道对你有特殊意义的菜肴，用于学校活动的英文宣传册。
内容包括:
★ What is a special dish in your family?
★ What memories or feelings does it bring you?
★ Why is it important to you?

创新表达—写作能力提升练
实战演练
My Favourite Dish
My favourite dish is my grandma's dumplings. They are filled with fresh vegetables and meat, and taste delicious.
Every Spring Festival, my family gather to make dumplings together. I still remember helping my grandma when I was little. She taught me how to fold them, and we laughed and talked happily.
These dumplings bring me warm memories of family love and tradition. They make me feel connected to my home and culture. To me, they are not just food, but a symbol of happiness. I hope everyone can enjoy such special dishes with their loved ones.
【思路分析】开头：先点明我最爱的特色菜，简单描述它的食材和味道；接着讲述和这道菜相关的家庭故事与回忆，突出温暖的细节；最后说明这道菜对我的重要意义，升华情感。