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【写作导引】
本单元的话题是“自然世界”。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①自然景观描述；②特有的位置、气候、动植物；③自然环境的破坏；④自然环境的保护。写这类文章时常用一般现在时或一般过去时，以叙述为主。
【写作任务】
朋友圈中总能欣赏到许多关于四季美景的图片，为了留住这些美丽画面，请你以“How to Protect the Earth”为题写一篇90词左右的短文。
要点：
| Feelings | *my favourite season and the reason
people take photos because... |
|----------|-|
| Worries | *wild animals...
natural disasters... |
| Action | *we should... |
How to Protect the Earth?
When talking about seasons, people have different ideas.
本单元的话题是“自然世界”。此类话题常见的写作角度涉及：①自然景观描述；②特有的位置、气候、动植物；③自然环境的破坏；④自然环境的保护。写这类文章时常用一般现在时或一般过去时，以叙述为主。
【写作任务】
朋友圈中总能欣赏到许多关于四季美景的图片，为了留住这些美丽画面，请你以“How to Protect the Earth”为题写一篇90词左右的短文。
要点：
| Feelings | *my favourite season and the reason
people take photos because... |
|----------|-|
| Worries | *wild animals...
natural disasters... |
| Action | *we should... |
How to Protect the Earth?
When talking about seasons, people have different ideas.
答案
How to Protect the Earth?
When talking about seasons, people have different ideas. My favourite season is spring, because the world is full of fresh green and sweet flowers. People love to take photos of seasonal views, as they want to keep those pretty natural moments forever.
But now wild animals are losing their living areas, and natural disasters happen more often than before. All these are harming our beautiful home.
To protect the earth, we should stop cutting down trees, choose public transport more, and never hurt wild animals. Small actions can help us keep all the lovely seasonal views.
When talking about seasons, people have different ideas. My favourite season is spring, because the world is full of fresh green and sweet flowers. People love to take photos of seasonal views, as they want to keep those pretty natural moments forever.
But now wild animals are losing their living areas, and natural disasters happen more often than before. All these are harming our beautiful home.
To protect the earth, we should stop cutting down trees, choose public transport more, and never hurt wild animals. Small actions can help us keep all the lovely seasonal views.
解析
【分析】
首先确定写作结构：开头点明自己最喜欢的季节及原因，说明人们拍摄四季美景照片的目的；接着转折，提出对地球现状的担忧（野生动物生存问题、自然灾害增多）；最后提出具体的保护地球的行动，确保覆盖所有要点，使用一般现在时为主，控制词数在90词左右。
【解析】
开头部分：明确最喜欢的季节（如春天），说明原因（充满绿意和花香），解释人们拍照是为了留住自然美景；中间部分：指出担忧的问题，即野生动物失去栖息地、自然灾害频发；结尾部分：提出具体保护措施，如停止砍树、选择公共交通、不伤害野生动物，强调小行动的作用。
【答案】
How to Protect the Earth?
When talking about seasons, people have different ideas. My favourite season is spring, because the world is full of fresh green and sweet flowers. People love to take photos of seasonal views, as they want to keep those pretty natural moments forever.
But now wild animals are losing their living areas, and natural disasters happen more often than before. All these are harming our beautiful home.
To protect the earth, we should stop cutting down trees, choose public transport more, and never hurt wild animals. Small actions can help us keep all the lovely seasonal views.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；一般现在时；要点式写作
【点评】
本文紧扣“How to Protect the Earth”主题，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言简洁通顺，符合90词左右的要求，是一篇符合标准的短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
首先确定写作结构：开头点明自己最喜欢的季节及原因，说明人们拍摄四季美景照片的目的；接着转折，提出对地球现状的担忧（野生动物生存问题、自然灾害增多）；最后提出具体的保护地球的行动，确保覆盖所有要点，使用一般现在时为主，控制词数在90词左右。
【解析】
开头部分：明确最喜欢的季节（如春天），说明原因（充满绿意和花香），解释人们拍照是为了留住自然美景；中间部分：指出担忧的问题，即野生动物失去栖息地、自然灾害频发；结尾部分：提出具体保护措施，如停止砍树、选择公共交通、不伤害野生动物，强调小行动的作用。
【答案】
How to Protect the Earth?
When talking about seasons, people have different ideas. My favourite season is spring, because the world is full of fresh green and sweet flowers. People love to take photos of seasonal views, as they want to keep those pretty natural moments forever.
But now wild animals are losing their living areas, and natural disasters happen more often than before. All these are harming our beautiful home.
To protect the earth, we should stop cutting down trees, choose public transport more, and never hurt wild animals. Small actions can help us keep all the lovely seasonal views.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作；一般现在时；要点式写作
【点评】
本文紧扣“How to Protect the Earth”主题，完整覆盖题目要求的所有要点，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，语言简洁通顺，符合90词左右的要求，是一篇符合标准的短文。
【难度系数】
0.7
跟踪演练
为倡导环境保护，你们学校拟举行主题为“Protecting Nature”的英语演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请根据以下所给提示，用英语写一篇90词左右的演讲稿。
要点：1. Why is it important to protect nature? 2. What bad things have people done to nature?
3. How can we take action to protect nature?
Protecting Nature
Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m Li Hua.
Thank you!
为倡导环境保护，你们学校拟举行主题为“Protecting Nature”的英语演讲比赛。假如你是李华，请根据以下所给提示，用英语写一篇90词左右的演讲稿。
要点：1. Why is it important to protect nature? 2. What bad things have people done to nature?
3. How can we take action to protect nature?
Protecting Nature
Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m Li Hua.
Today, I want to say something about protecting nature. Nature is like our mother, providing us with everything we need, such as food, energy and so on.
But we haven’t been kind to her. We produce so much pollution that the air and water are getting dirtier. We cut down trees to grow crops, and it makes the birds homeless. We kill animals for food or clothes, so some animals are endangered.
I plan to protect nature in my own way. I’ll take shorter showers to save water. I’ll never buy clothes made from endangered animals.
And I’ll encourage my family and friends to recycle. Small actions can lead to big changes. Let’s protect nature together.
Thank you!
答案
Protecting Nature
Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m Li Hua. Today, I want to say something about protecting nature. Nature is like our mother, providing us with everything we need, such as food, energy and so on.
But we haven’t been kind to her. We produce so much pollution that the air and water are getting dirtier. We cut down trees to grow crops, and it makes the birds homeless. We kill animals for food or clothes, so some animals are endangered.
I plan to protect nature in my own way. I’ll take shorter showers to save water. I’ll never buy clothes made from endangered animals. And I’ll encourage my family and friends to recycle. Small actions can lead to big changes. Let’s protect nature together.
Thank you!
Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m Li Hua. Today, I want to say something about protecting nature. Nature is like our mother, providing us with everything we need, such as food, energy and so on.
But we haven’t been kind to her. We produce so much pollution that the air and water are getting dirtier. We cut down trees to grow crops, and it makes the birds homeless. We kill animals for food or clothes, so some animals are endangered.
I plan to protect nature in my own way. I’ll take shorter showers to save water. I’ll never buy clothes made from endangered animals. And I’ll encourage my family and friends to recycle. Small actions can lead to big changes. Let’s protect nature together.
Thank you!
解析
【分析】本题要求写主题为“Protecting Nature”的英语演讲稿，需紧扣三个给定要点完成。首先开头需问候听众并自我介绍，点明演讲主题；接着阐述保护自然的重要性，可通过比喻说明自然为人类提供生存所需；然后列举人类对自然的破坏行为（如污染环境、砍伐树木、猎杀动物等）；最后提出具体的环保行动，结尾呼吁大家共同保护自然，同时注意词数控制在90词左右，语言要符合演讲稿的口语化特点。
【解析】按照演讲稿的结构分三部分写作：1. 开头：问候老师和同学，自我介绍后点明演讲主题，将自然比作母亲，说明其为人类提供食物、能源等所需，突出保护自然的重要性；2. 中间：列举人类的不当行为，如制造污染使空气和水变脏、砍树导致鸟类无家可归、猎杀动物致其濒危；3. 结尾：提出个人环保行动（节水、不买濒危动物制品、鼓励回收），呼吁大家共同行动，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】Protecting Nature
Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m Li Hua. Today, I want to say something about protecting nature. Nature is like our mother, providing us with everything we need, such as food, energy and so on.
But we haven’t been kind to her. We produce so much pollution that the air and water are getting dirtier. We cut down trees to grow crops, and it makes the birds homeless. We kill animals for food or clothes, so some animals are endangered.
I plan to protect nature in my own way. I’ll take shorter showers to save water. I’ll never buy clothes made from endangered animals. And I’ll encourage my family and friends to recycle. Small actions can lead to big changes. Let’s protect nature together.
Thank you!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、环境保护话题表达
【点评】紧扣题目要求的三个要点，结构清晰，语言简洁流畅，符合演讲稿的口语化风格，准确传达了保护自然的主题，词数符合要求，是一篇合格的演讲稿。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】按照演讲稿的结构分三部分写作：1. 开头：问候老师和同学，自我介绍后点明演讲主题，将自然比作母亲，说明其为人类提供食物、能源等所需，突出保护自然的重要性；2. 中间：列举人类的不当行为，如制造污染使空气和水变脏、砍树导致鸟类无家可归、猎杀动物致其濒危；3. 结尾：提出个人环保行动（节水、不买濒危动物制品、鼓励回收），呼吁大家共同行动，控制词数符合要求。
【答案】Protecting Nature
Dear teachers and classmates,
I’m Li Hua. Today, I want to say something about protecting nature. Nature is like our mother, providing us with everything we need, such as food, energy and so on.
But we haven’t been kind to her. We produce so much pollution that the air and water are getting dirtier. We cut down trees to grow crops, and it makes the birds homeless. We kill animals for food or clothes, so some animals are endangered.
I plan to protect nature in my own way. I’ll take shorter showers to save water. I’ll never buy clothes made from endangered animals. And I’ll encourage my family and friends to recycle. Small actions can lead to big changes. Let’s protect nature together.
Thank you!
【知识点】英语应用文写作、环境保护话题表达
【点评】紧扣题目要求的三个要点，结构清晰，语言简洁流畅，符合演讲稿的口语化风格，准确传达了保护自然的主题，词数符合要求，是一篇合格的演讲稿。
【难度系数】0.7
