五 主题作文园地。
生活是美好的!合理地安排好你的一天,会让你的生活充实而高效。用本单元所学知识合理安排并写一写吧!不少于5句话。

My day
生活是美好的!合理地安排好你的一天,会让你的生活充实而高效。用本单元所学知识合理安排并写一写吧!不少于5句话。
My day
答案
五、One possible version:
My day
Hello, I'm Lucy. I'm ten.
I get up at six thirty every day. Then I have breakfast at seven o'clock. At seven thirty, I go to school. I have four lessons in the morning and two lessons in the afternoon. I run with my friends after school. I go home at five. I do my homework at six thirty and go to bed at nine.
This is my day. I'm busy, but I'm happy.
My day
Hello, I'm Lucy. I'm ten.
I get up at six thirty every day. Then I have breakfast at seven o'clock. At seven thirty, I go to school. I have four lessons in the morning and two lessons in the afternoon. I run with my friends after school. I go home at five. I do my homework at six thirty and go to bed at nine.
This is my day. I'm busy, but I'm happy.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇以“My day”为主题的英语作文,写作需遵循思维导图的结构:第一步用“Hello. I'm...”完成开头的自我介绍;第二步主体部分按照时间顺序,用“I... at... in the...”的句型介绍一天的具体活动,如起床、用餐、上学、学习、课后活动等;第三步用“I'm busy, but I'm happy.”总结一天的生活,确保内容不少于5句话,符合题目要求。
【解析】
按照写作思路组织内容:1. 开头进行自我介绍;2. 主体按时间依次描述日常活动,正确使用时间介词(at接具体时刻,in接上午/下午等);3. 结尾总结生活状态,保证句子数量达标,内容连贯。
【答案】
五、One possible version:
My day
Hello, I'm Lucy. I'm ten.
I get up at six thirty every day. Then I have breakfast at seven o'clock. At seven thirty, I go to school. I have four lessons in the morning and two lessons in the afternoon. I run with my friends after school. I go home at five. I do my homework at six thirty and go to bed at nine.
This is my day. I'm busy, but I'm happy.
【知识点】
英语写作、日常活动表达、时间介词用法
【点评】
本题是贴近学生生活的英语写作题,依托思维导图给出写作框架,降低了写作难度,考查学生的语言组织与表达能力,学生易模仿完成。
【难度系数】
0.7
这是一篇以“My day”为主题的英语作文,写作需遵循思维导图的结构:第一步用“Hello. I'm...”完成开头的自我介绍;第二步主体部分按照时间顺序,用“I... at... in the...”的句型介绍一天的具体活动,如起床、用餐、上学、学习、课后活动等;第三步用“I'm busy, but I'm happy.”总结一天的生活,确保内容不少于5句话,符合题目要求。
【解析】
按照写作思路组织内容:1. 开头进行自我介绍;2. 主体按时间依次描述日常活动,正确使用时间介词(at接具体时刻,in接上午/下午等);3. 结尾总结生活状态,保证句子数量达标,内容连贯。
【答案】
五、One possible version:
My day
Hello, I'm Lucy. I'm ten.
I get up at six thirty every day. Then I have breakfast at seven o'clock. At seven thirty, I go to school. I have four lessons in the morning and two lessons in the afternoon. I run with my friends after school. I go home at five. I do my homework at six thirty and go to bed at nine.
This is my day. I'm busy, but I'm happy.
【知识点】
英语写作、日常活动表达、时间介词用法
【点评】
本题是贴近学生生活的英语写作题,依托思维导图给出写作框架,降低了写作难度,考查学生的语言组织与表达能力,学生易模仿完成。
【难度系数】
0.7
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