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四、书面表达。
一年结束时既是我们总结过去的时候，也是我们计划未来的时刻。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇短文，介绍你在新的一年希望改进的地方、计划采取的行动，以及如何坚持这些行动的方法。可适当发挥，不少于 80词。
写作要点：
1. Aspects(方面) you want toimprove(e. g., studies, health, skills…).
2. Actions you will take.
3. How you will stick to your plans.
一年结束时既是我们总结过去的时候，也是我们计划未来的时刻。请你根据以下要点提示，写一篇短文，介绍你在新的一年希望改进的地方、计划采取的行动，以及如何坚持这些行动的方法。可适当发挥，不少于 80词。
写作要点：
1. Aspects(方面) you want toimprove(e. g., studies, health, skills…).
2. Actions you will take.
3. How you will stick to your plans.
When we look back on the past, we naturally make plans for the future.
First, I want to improve my English skills. I'm going to review vocabulary for 20 minutes every day and read one English storybook each week.
Second, I need to become healthier. I will jog for 30 minutes three times a week. My friend and I plan to exercise together, so we can encourage each other.
Third, I hope to become more organized. I will make a weekly to-do list.
To stick to these plans, I will set phone reminders. What's more, I will use a study app to write down my progress.
By sticking to these plans, I will grow step by step!
答案
When we look back on the past, we naturally make plans for the future.
First, I want to improve my English skills. I'm going to review vocabulary for 20 minutes every day and read one English storybook each week. Second, I need to become healthier. I will jog for 30 minutes three times a week. My friend and I plan to exercise together, so we can encourage each other. Third, I hope to become more organized. I will make a weekly to-do list. To stick to these plans, I will set phone reminders. What's more, I will use a study app to write down my progress.
By sticking to these plans, I will grow step by step!
First, I want to improve my English skills. I'm going to review vocabulary for 20 minutes every day and read one English storybook each week. Second, I need to become healthier. I will jog for 30 minutes three times a week. My friend and I plan to exercise together, so we can encourage each other. Third, I hope to become more organized. I will make a weekly to-do list. To stick to these plans, I will set phone reminders. What's more, I will use a study app to write down my progress.
By sticking to these plans, I will grow step by step!
解析
【分析】首先明确题目要求：需介绍新一年要改进的方面、对应行动、坚持计划的方法。写作时先开篇点题（年末回顾过去、规划未来），接着分点阐述改进的具体方面（如英语、健康、条理性）及每个方面的行动，再说明坚持计划的措施，最后收尾总结，确保覆盖所有要点，语句通顺，符合词数要求。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开篇：引出年末规划未来的主题；2. 分述改进方面及行动：①英语技能：每天复习20分钟词汇、每周读1本英语故事书；②健康：每周三次慢跑30分钟，和朋友一起锻炼互相鼓励；③条理性：制作每周待办清单；3. 坚持方法：设置手机提醒、用学习APP记录进度；4. 结尾：总结坚持计划会逐步成长。
【答案】When we look back on the past, we naturally make plans for the future.
First, I want to improve my English skills. I'm going to review vocabulary for 20 minutes every day and read one English storybook each week. Second, I need to become healthier. I will jog for 30 minutes three times a week. My friend and I plan to exercise together, so we can encourage each other. Third, I hope to become more organized. I will make a weekly to-do list. To stick to these plans, I will set phone reminders. What's more, I will use a study app to write down my progress.
By sticking to these plans, I will grow step by step!
【知识点】英语书面表达、计划类话题写作
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，全面覆盖了写作要点，语言简洁流畅，符合初中英语写作的规范，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤：1. 开篇：引出年末规划未来的主题；2. 分述改进方面及行动：①英语技能：每天复习20分钟词汇、每周读1本英语故事书；②健康：每周三次慢跑30分钟，和朋友一起锻炼互相鼓励；③条理性：制作每周待办清单；3. 坚持方法：设置手机提醒、用学习APP记录进度；4. 结尾：总结坚持计划会逐步成长。
【答案】When we look back on the past, we naturally make plans for the future.
First, I want to improve my English skills. I'm going to review vocabulary for 20 minutes every day and read one English storybook each week. Second, I need to become healthier. I will jog for 30 minutes three times a week. My friend and I plan to exercise together, so we can encourage each other. Third, I hope to become more organized. I will make a weekly to-do list. To stick to these plans, I will set phone reminders. What's more, I will use a study app to write down my progress.
By sticking to these plans, I will grow step by step!
【知识点】英语书面表达、计划类话题写作
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，全面覆盖了写作要点，语言简洁流畅，符合初中英语写作的规范，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】0.5
