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本单元的主题是“美丽的风景”，要求学生能用所学的词汇和句型描写美丽的景观。与此相关的写作维度有：①描写自然景观；②介绍游览体验。
考查学生介绍美丽风景的文章的命题方式有多种，如：根据文字叙述、表格信息、发帖、回帖和思维导图等，写一篇说明文、记叙文、回一封信、发一封电子邮件等。通常要介绍：景观的名称、位置、地貌、气候、文化价值等，并分享自己游览景观的个人感受和体验。
写作实例
中国地大物博、山川秀丽、风景迷人。你校英语网站正在举办一次英文写作竞赛活动，主题是介绍我国的一处自然旅游胜地，请你以“Mount Taishan, more than beautiful”为题，写一篇介绍泰山的短文参赛。要点提示：
1.泰山概况；2.泰山景色；3.游览方式。
参考词汇：cliff 悬崖；Sunrise from the East 旭日东升；Sunset Glow 晚霞夕照
要求：1.短文须包括所有要点提示，可适当发挥。2.词数 90 左右。
Mount Taishan, more than beautiful
审题指导
1.体裁：说明文 2.时态：一般现在时 3.人称：以第三人称为主
4.必备词汇：①in the middle of 在……中间 ②a great place to do sth.做某事的好地方 ③see some wonderful views 欣赏一些绝美风景 ④be famous for 因……而闻名 ⑤a sea of clouds 云海 ⑥the most famous views 最著名的景观 ⑦enjoy the beauty of...欣赏……的美景 ⑧walk up paths and steps to the top 沿小径和台阶步行登顶 ⑨take a cable car 乘坐缆车
谋篇布局
佳作剖析
教材原文
P78 It is only about...metres high, but it is one of the most amazing mountains in China.
P72...is a great place to see some wonderful...views.
P78...is famous for...a wonderful sea of clouds...
P78 There are several ways to enjoy the beauty of Mount... You can walk up paths and steps to the top or take a cable car.
优秀范文
Mount Taishan, more than beautiful
Mount Taishan lies in the middle of① Shandong Province, China. It is only about 1,545 meters high, but it is one of the most amazing① mountains in China.①
Mount Taishan is a great place to see② some wonderful views. It is famous for② high cliffs, ancient pine trees and a sea of clouds. The most famous② views are the “Sunrise from the East” and “Sunset Glow”.
There are several ways to enjoy the beauty of Mount Taishan. You can walk up paths and steps to the top or take a cable car.③
亮点评析
①该段恰当使用固定短语 in the middle of 和“one of+the+形容词最高级+复数名词”的固定搭配，介绍泰山概况。
②该段使用动词不定式、固定短语 be famous for 和最高级介绍泰山景色。
③文章结尾使用本单元所学句型介绍游览方式，体现了作者学以致用的能力。
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①the longest river 最长的河流 ②be covered with 被……覆盖 ③feel the beauty of nature 感受大自然之美 ④be home to 是……的家园 ⑤cover an area of 占地面积达……
写作实战
「2025 江苏镇江丹徒茅以升学校集团五校月考」
假如你是刘可，你的外国朋友 Mike 对中国的自然景观很感兴趣，请你根据下面的提示，写一篇 80 词左右的短文，向他介绍中国著名的旅游景点——黄果树瀑布。提示：
1.位于贵州省安顺市，是中国第一大瀑布：高 77.8 米，宽 101 米；
2.它的名字来源于当地的一种植物——黄果树（the yellow fruit tree）；
3.游客们可以从不同的位置欣赏瀑布的壮丽景色；
4.参观黄果树瀑布的最佳时间是 5 月到 10 月；
5.黄果树瀑布属于喀斯特（karst）地貌，是一个自然奇观。
Dear Mike，
I'm excited to share one of China's most amazing natural wonders, Huangguoshu Waterfall with you.
Yours，
Liu Ke
本单元的主题是“美丽的风景”，要求学生能用所学的词汇和句型描写美丽的景观。与此相关的写作维度有：①描写自然景观；②介绍游览体验。
考查学生介绍美丽风景的文章的命题方式有多种，如：根据文字叙述、表格信息、发帖、回帖和思维导图等，写一篇说明文、记叙文、回一封信、发一封电子邮件等。通常要介绍：景观的名称、位置、地貌、气候、文化价值等，并分享自己游览景观的个人感受和体验。
写作实例
中国地大物博、山川秀丽、风景迷人。你校英语网站正在举办一次英文写作竞赛活动，主题是介绍我国的一处自然旅游胜地，请你以“Mount Taishan, more than beautiful”为题，写一篇介绍泰山的短文参赛。要点提示：
1.泰山概况；2.泰山景色；3.游览方式。
参考词汇：cliff 悬崖；Sunrise from the East 旭日东升；Sunset Glow 晚霞夕照
要求：1.短文须包括所有要点提示，可适当发挥。2.词数 90 左右。
Mount Taishan, more than beautiful
审题指导
1.体裁：说明文 2.时态：一般现在时 3.人称：以第三人称为主
4.必备词汇：①in the middle of 在……中间 ②a great place to do sth.做某事的好地方 ③see some wonderful views 欣赏一些绝美风景 ④be famous for 因……而闻名 ⑤a sea of clouds 云海 ⑥the most famous views 最著名的景观 ⑦enjoy the beauty of...欣赏……的美景 ⑧walk up paths and steps to the top 沿小径和台阶步行登顶 ⑨take a cable car 乘坐缆车
谋篇布局
佳作剖析
教材原文
P78 It is only about...metres high, but it is one of the most amazing mountains in China.
P72...is a great place to see some wonderful...views.
P78...is famous for...a wonderful sea of clouds...
P78 There are several ways to enjoy the beauty of Mount... You can walk up paths and steps to the top or take a cable car.
优秀范文
Mount Taishan, more than beautiful
Mount Taishan lies in the middle of① Shandong Province, China. It is only about 1,545 meters high, but it is one of the most amazing① mountains in China.①
Mount Taishan is a great place to see② some wonderful views. It is famous for② high cliffs, ancient pine trees and a sea of clouds. The most famous② views are the “Sunrise from the East” and “Sunset Glow”.
There are several ways to enjoy the beauty of Mount Taishan. You can walk up paths and steps to the top or take a cable car.③
亮点评析
①该段恰当使用固定短语 in the middle of 和“one of+the+形容词最高级+复数名词”的固定搭配，介绍泰山概况。
②该段使用动词不定式、固定短语 be famous for 和最高级介绍泰山景色。
③文章结尾使用本单元所学句型介绍游览方式，体现了作者学以致用的能力。
以读促写
以下内容摘自本单元所选题目
①the longest river 最长的河流 ②be covered with 被……覆盖 ③feel the beauty of nature 感受大自然之美 ④be home to 是……的家园 ⑤cover an area of 占地面积达……
写作实战
「2025 江苏镇江丹徒茅以升学校集团五校月考」
假如你是刘可，你的外国朋友 Mike 对中国的自然景观很感兴趣，请你根据下面的提示，写一篇 80 词左右的短文，向他介绍中国著名的旅游景点——黄果树瀑布。提示：
1.位于贵州省安顺市，是中国第一大瀑布：高 77.8 米，宽 101 米；
2.它的名字来源于当地的一种植物——黄果树（the yellow fruit tree）；
3.游客们可以从不同的位置欣赏瀑布的壮丽景色；
4.参观黄果树瀑布的最佳时间是 5 月到 10 月；
5.黄果树瀑布属于喀斯特（karst）地貌，是一个自然奇观。
Dear Mike，
I'm excited to share one of China's most amazing natural wonders, Huangguoshu Waterfall with you.
Yours，
Liu Ke
答案
【答案】：Mount Taishan, more than beautifulMount Taishan lies in the middle of Shandong Province. It is only about 1545 meters high, but it is very famous in China.Mount Taishan is a great place to enjoy natural beauty. It is famous for a sea of clouds and wonderful cliffs. The most famous views are Sunrise from the East and Sunset Glow.There are several ways to get to the top. You can walk up paths and steps to the top or take a cable car.
@@基础版范文Dear Mike,I'm excited to share one of China's most amazing natural wonders, Huangguoshu Waterfall with you.It is in Anshun City, Guizhou Province. It is the largest waterfall in China. It is 77.8 meters high and 101 meters wide. Its name comes from the yellow fruit tree, a local plant.Visitors can see the beautiful waterfall from different places. The best time to visit it is from May to October. During this time, the water is full and lovely.Huangguoshu Waterfall is a karst landform. It is a natural wonder. I hope you can see it some day!Yours,Liu Ke进阶版范文Dear Mike,I'm excited to share one of China's most amazing natural wonders, Huangguoshu Waterfall with you.It is located in Anshun City, Guizhou Province, and is the largest waterfall in China. It stands at 77.8 meters high and 101 meters wide. The waterfall gets its name from a local plant called the yellow fruit tree.Visitors can enjoy the fantastic view from different spots. The best time to visit it is from May to October. During this time, the water is full and lovely.Huangguoshu Waterfall is part of a karst landscape. It is a natural wonder and a treat for your eyes.Yours,Liu Ke
@@基础版范文Dear Mike,I'm excited to share one of China's most amazing natural wonders, Huangguoshu Waterfall with you.It is in Anshun City, Guizhou Province. It is the largest waterfall in China. It is 77.8 meters high and 101 meters wide. Its name comes from the yellow fruit tree, a local plant.Visitors can see the beautiful waterfall from different places. The best time to visit it is from May to October. During this time, the water is full and lovely.Huangguoshu Waterfall is a karst landform. It is a natural wonder. I hope you can see it some day!Yours,Liu Ke进阶版范文Dear Mike,I'm excited to share one of China's most amazing natural wonders, Huangguoshu Waterfall with you.It is located in Anshun City, Guizhou Province, and is the largest waterfall in China. It stands at 77.8 meters high and 101 meters wide. The waterfall gets its name from a local plant called the yellow fruit tree.Visitors can enjoy the fantastic view from different spots. The best time to visit it is from May to October. During this time, the water is full and lovely.Huangguoshu Waterfall is part of a karst landscape. It is a natural wonder and a treat for your eyes.Yours,Liu Ke
解析
【分析】
本题要求以刘可的身份给外国朋友Mike写英文信介绍黄果树瀑布，解题思路：1. 明确体裁为说明文书信，时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主；2. 梳理所有提示要点：位置（贵州安顺）、规模（中国第一大瀑布，高77.8米、宽101米）、名字来源（当地黄果树）、欣赏位置、最佳游览时间（5-10月）、喀斯特地貌自然奇观；3. 按书信结构组织语言，确保涵盖所有要求，词数符合，语言准确恰当。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 开头：点明写信目的，引出介绍黄果树瀑布的主题；
2. 介绍基础信息：说明位置、规模、名字来源；
3. 介绍游览相关：说明欣赏位置和最佳游览时间；
4. 点明景观价值：说明地貌属性，强调是自然奇观；
5. 结尾：发出邀请，符合书信格式。
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I'm excited to share one of China's most amazing natural wonders, Huangguoshu Waterfall with you.
It is in Anshun City, Guizhou Province. It is the largest waterfall in China. It is 77.8 meters high and 101 meters wide. Its name comes from the yellow fruit tree, a local plant.
Visitors can see the beautiful waterfall from different places. The best time to visit it is from May to October. During this time, the water is full and lovely.
Huangguoshu Waterfall is a karst landform. It is a natural wonder. I hope you can see it some day!
Yours,
Liu Ke
【知识点】
英语书信写作、自然景观介绍、固定句型运用
【点评】
本题考查学生运用英语介绍自然景观的写作能力，要求涵盖所有提示要点，结构清晰，语言准确，符合书信格式，能检验学生对单元知识的掌握及学以致用的能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以刘可的身份给外国朋友Mike写英文信介绍黄果树瀑布，解题思路：1. 明确体裁为说明文书信，时态用一般现在时，人称以第三人称为主；2. 梳理所有提示要点：位置（贵州安顺）、规模（中国第一大瀑布，高77.8米、宽101米）、名字来源（当地黄果树）、欣赏位置、最佳游览时间（5-10月）、喀斯特地貌自然奇观；3. 按书信结构组织语言，确保涵盖所有要求，词数符合，语言准确恰当。
【解析】
写作步骤：
1. 开头：点明写信目的，引出介绍黄果树瀑布的主题；
2. 介绍基础信息：说明位置、规模、名字来源；
3. 介绍游览相关：说明欣赏位置和最佳游览时间；
4. 点明景观价值：说明地貌属性，强调是自然奇观；
5. 结尾：发出邀请，符合书信格式。
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I'm excited to share one of China's most amazing natural wonders, Huangguoshu Waterfall with you.
It is in Anshun City, Guizhou Province. It is the largest waterfall in China. It is 77.8 meters high and 101 meters wide. Its name comes from the yellow fruit tree, a local plant.
Visitors can see the beautiful waterfall from different places. The best time to visit it is from May to October. During this time, the water is full and lovely.
Huangguoshu Waterfall is a karst landform. It is a natural wonder. I hope you can see it some day!
Yours,
Liu Ke
【知识点】
英语书信写作、自然景观介绍、固定句型运用
【点评】
本题考查学生运用英语介绍自然景观的写作能力，要求涵盖所有提示要点，结构清晰，语言准确，符合书信格式，能检验学生对单元知识的掌握及学以致用的能力。
【难度系数】
0.5
